Re: Motivation letter

Kavchik — Fri, 22 Dec 2006 22:50:55 GMT

Hi dear nona the brit,

Thank you so so so much for your help. this is really a great help. your edition is very clear and now I understand my mistakes and I will work on your comments.

I would like to tell you about the pink highlights, I see that you ask questions and this means I didnt write my meaning clearly!! so may be you have another commnet for me!!

the first pink highlight: I am busy now with a Dutch language course which started on november 2005 and ends march 2007 (1.5 years). but what I meant is that I am away from higher education, my PhD in Ukraine which I left on summer 2005 and the new study (DTI) I wanna begin starts march 2007 (1.5 year I am not studying in university), so what do you think? any comment how I can explaine this?

Second pink highlight: I read the bruchures of the study and I tried to say almost the same things with my own sentences using their words!! seems I was not lucky with that and its not clear. so I will try to write againe something!

Third highlight: with science I meant the study DTI and what I am going to learn there. so I will find another word.

forth highlight: I meant that as an architect I was busy with complex projects from they one! (from the begining when I started to work as an architect)

fifth highlight: I wanted to say that I am very enthusiasm about the study. I will think to find some another words for that.

anyway thanks indeed for your kind help. that means much for me.

Merry Christmas and wish you all the bests for coming 2007.

Warm Regards

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Re: Motivation letter