By Writing letters, Paragraphs

In a translation I am proofreading I found the following (in the original): “Likewise, they were liable to pursue further studies under the guidance of a mentor either to sharpen their paper and pencil skills, which involved mathematics and accounting or time-keeping…” “they were placed at...

Hello Emilia,It seems you did a quite good job! I have highlighted several phrases that caught my eye. I hope they will be useful in your quest for a scholarship!Remember that you should use "Yours faithfully" instead of "Yours sincerely" if you do not know the name of the recipient. By the way,...

Hello, my name is Roberta Gallant and I reside in Concord, New Hampshire. When writing letters, speeches, or testimonies -- I have a problem knowing when to start new paragraphs. I just cannot identify where to break in paragraphs! I need more help with this paragraphing situation now. Please...