Hello! It would be so nice if you were to waste a bit of your time to take a peek at my leaflet. I'd like to know where it needs improvement. :) Thanks you in advance.   The town from the end of the rainbow What, where, who? Passing by Monuk

Hi there! I've tried to write a letter of complaint, but I'm not sure it sounds right. I'd be deeply grateful if you shot it a glance and pinpointed the parts of it that need improvement. Thank you in advance :) Dear Mr. Jason Travel,

Has collapsed is the full verb; the second 'collapsed' (note spelling) has been omitted.

I like Anthony Bourdain I do too, but there is something faintly irritating about him too. Did you catch the one on Greece that aired this week? I know his guide, Byron Ayanoglu - a wonderful guy. For a while he was the itinerant chef for the

"my school in big hall" is not a sentence. It needs a verb. It also needs a capital letter at the beginning and a period at the end. (Did you read Clive's post?) Do you mean to say "My school is in a big hall"? That is a

Don't we need some punctuation here? Does "before them" go with "flew," or with "he and the child"? It's written without any punctuation and was is used in the book not were before aching blue...

Hi, Please say 'Please' when you ask for help. my school is having a big hall. is this santance correct? No. My school has a big hall. No English sentence is correct unless it starts with a capital

"I wanted to say that I understand separate words, but the overall meaning wasn't quite clear to me." Ah! I understand -- the separate words! But that's the easy part, isn't it? I'm surprised no one else has put in

It is important to have specific dreams and thought in life when i was in birth place and school, a lot of kids like me wanted to float the air. but i was aware that is not possible. so i asked to my mother to buy a TV because that time

Yes. The child and the sky were aching blue. ?? Okay, He dreamt of walking in a flowering wood where birds flew. Don't we need some punctuation here? Does "before them" go with "flew," or with "he and the