1. you absolutely must paragraph- the only indication that this is a letter is the 'yours sincerely' at the bottom- you must lay this out in the correct layout of a formal letter 2. you cannot just state bluntly & 100% honestly what

Hi, everyone. Yesterday I read in a reference book on note-writing compiled by a Chinese college teacher the following sample: Sept. 15, 2007 Dear Lynn, We are thinking about holding a meeting to discuss the

Hi, My main comment is that you need to write in paragraphs, like this. I've also made a number of other changes for you to consider. Clive Dear Ms *** , My name is Lora *** . I was born on *** in Sofia, Bulgaria. Your name goes at the end.

Hi! Tried to register, but it did not really work out... Anyway, I would like to ask if you can please check my letter of motivation :-) I hope it is at least good enoguh to justify the beginning of the 4th paragraph :-D Thank you very much in

Hi, I would like to ask you for a help as I am still improving my English and want avoid mistakes in my covering letter. I really would appreciate it if you could check the letter, especially red paragraph. Dear Xyx, I am writing to apply for

Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA

Hi, Hi, Hope you are well. I am ready to look for a new job. Please see my update CV attached file. If you have any question regarding my CV please do not hesitate to contact to me. Also I have visit your l web side today. I have

Philippe3572 wrote: hi, I am writing a work experience application letter to E rnst and Y oung. I am 15 and in transition year (in I reland). Could you please give me advice on the letter so far and maybe how to round it off nicely. Thanks a

Hi, Here are a few suggestions. Clive Dear Mr. Wolff, I am writing to you in regard to a claim submitted on 15 th April 2007, for which I received a denial on 30 th May 2007. I am requesting your reconsideration of this denial. The

My first reaction is that as an employer with possible "Work Expereience" placements, I would not really be particularly interested in your possible future results, but I would be interested in your awareness of the company and what it does, your