Hi, Here are some edits. Clive Put your address (but not name ) in the top right orner, with the date below. Dr XXX XXX 92 High Street Newtown Re: Mr DDD DDD

Dr XXX XXX 92 High Street 20 November, 2007 Newtown Re: Mr DDD DDD 101 Surf Street Newtown Ph: -- -- D.O.B. 20 June, 1958 I am writing to refer Mr. DDD to

Dr XXX XXX 92 High Street 20 November, 2007 Newtown Re: Mr DDD DDD 101 Surf Street Newtown Ph: -- -- D.O.B. 20 June, 1958 I am writing to refer Mr. DDD to

Hello, a friend of mine who is a painter is applying for a scholarship at a Swiss university and asked me to translate her letter of motivation. Could you please have a look at it and point out any mistakes? The letter: Dear xxx, I would like to

Hi, i need 1 week leave to india to attend the ramadan festivel and to attend my sister engagement how can u help in this case Dear Sir, I wish to request leave for one week, starting from August 31st, so that I can travel to India for

Hello, a friend of mine had to write a letter of apology for his course in Business English. He wrote the following letter of apology. The teacher crossed nearly all of his words out. Is the letter grammatically an absolutely nonsense or what did

I wish to make an application letter for NOC for the below matter. Could someone please help me in drafting this letter more better. The matter is as below. Dear Sirs, I and my wife are both working here in Doha . As we have a 2yr old

Dear Sirs, I and my wife are both working here in Doha . As we have a 2yr old son, we face difficulties in baby caring him while we both are on duty. Hence we are planning to recruit a live- in housemaid, who can baby-sit our son during our

To: Subj: Request for salary increment Dear Mr , I have been working for since 1992 as a Network/IT Support Engineer, and during this period I have discharged my duties to the best of my abilities. Still , my basic salary is 3,850 , and I have

Dear all, i had written a personal statement for an graduate school application. Can one of you can proof-reading the letter? I would be grateful for that. Here it comes: " Dear Thesis-Committee, I hereby wish to state my interest for a place