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Re: Help Needed

Feebs11 — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 20:00:50 GMT

Hajm wrote:
Dear Sir

Iâm planning to write a letter for company to set up a trading partnership

Please find below the draft letter, for your kind review and advise
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Dear Sir/Madam [There will be female CEOs or senior managers]

We ~~have the pleasure~~[would like] to introduce ourselves as a group of investors who have ~~qualified managements and engineers~~ engineeering and management qualifications and ~~with~~ more than 20 years of experience of business transactions ~~being carried out~~ in Saudi Arabia and the Middle East region as well as internationally

~~Through our establish companies,~~ We deal with a varied range of products and services, namely ~~â such as~~ Coffee shops, Insurance, Materials Handling & Storage, Industrial Products, Real Estate, Building Materials, Chemical Products & Specialities Products.

The reputation and business strengths that have been earned by our companies ~~today,~~ is due to ~~the professionally equipped~~ our highly professional and able staff, who have a varied experience of the region's market and good knowledge of dealing with our customers to their satisfaction. This is further enhanced by the innovative ideas of the management, who strive ~~from time to time in~~ ~~creating~~ to increase awareness of our companies in the market place and keeping the investments at par to the latest development of today's world. [Cannot quite make out what you mean here]

We are now in a position to seek for and accommodate ~~and look for more businesses~~.more participants in our growth. By becoming a partner, you can share our success.

In recent years, several emerging furniture markets have caught the attention of ~~the~~ global furniture exporters. The Middle East region, despite being regarded a âhot-bedâ of sorts, has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the United Arab Emirates (UAE) offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world. Driven by the wealth gained from the all-time-high price for petroleum products in the world market, and the booming construction industry, particularly in ~~the~~ Saudi Arabia and the UAE, the demand for furniture in the region has grown rapidly. ~~in recent times.~~An overview of the Middle East furniture market is attached.
Nevertheless, it must be realised that the furniture market is unequal in size throughout the region, as socio-economic and political volatility, which grips a large portion of the region, has adversely affected demand for furniture. [This might be a BIG put-off for some people. I would not include it]

~~Your company is one~~ ~~of our short listed that seems to fit the target market and segment planning to fulfil their need.~~

~~By accounted on our strengths that distinguishes us in the marketplace by:~~The strengths that we can offer in this market are:

Knowledge of local culture and relationships.
Market wants and need.
Extensive industry expertise
Proven and experienced management team
Broad and evolving service offerings [What do you mean by this? Service to the suppliers or to the customers? Is it perhaps the same as the next point?]
Mobilizing the power of teams/teamwork to deliver consistent and exceptional service to clients.

Your company and its products seem to fit the needs of the market, and your company's experience with product innovation and development combined with our local expertise can create long-term, win-win relationships.

I look forward to hearing from you and in the meantime, should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully,
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Best Regards,

M. Haj

Help Needed

Hajm — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 12:39:24 GMT

Dear Sir

Iâm planning to write a letter for company to set up a trading partnership

Please find below the draft letter, for your kind review and advise

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Dear sir

We have the pleasure to introduce our self as group of investors, have qualified managements and engineers with more than 20 years of experience. With business transactions being carried out in Saudi Arabia, Middle East region as well as International.

Through our establish companies, We deals with a varied range of products and services namely â such as Coffee shops, Insurance, Materials Handling & Storage, Industrial Products, Real Estate, Building Materials, Chemical Products & Specialities Products.

The name and business strength that has been earned by our companies today, is due to the professionally equipped and able staff, who have a varied experience of the Region market and good knowledge of serving the customers to their satisfaction. This is further enhanced by the innovative ideas of the management, who strive from time to time in creating awareness and keeping the investments at par to the latest development of today's world.

We are now in a position to accommodate and look for more businesses. By find a partner to share us our success.

The Middle East has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the UAE offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world.

In recent years however, several emerging furniture markets have caught the attention of the global furniture exporters. The Middle East region, despite being regarded a âhot-bedâ of sorts has emerged as an important non-traditional furniture market. Countries such as Saudi Arabia, Kuwait and the United Arab Emirates (UAE) offer significant market opportunities for furniture exporters around the world. Driven by the wealth gained from the all-time-high price for petroleum products in the world market, and the booming construction industry, particularly in the Saudi Arabia and UAE, the demand for furniture in the region has grown rapidly in recent times.

Nevertheless, it must be realised that the furniture market is unequal in size throughout the region, as socio-economic and political volatility, which grips a large portion of the region, has adversely affected demand for furniture. An overview of Middle East Furniture Market. (Attached)

Your company is one of our short listed that seem fit the target market and segment planning to fulfil their need.

By accounted on our strengths that distinguishes us in the marketplace by:

Knowledge of local culture and relationships.
Market wants and need.
Extensive industry expertise
Proven and experienced management team
Broad and evolving service offerings
Mobilizing the power of teaming to deliver consistent exceptional service to clients.

And your company experience on the products innovation and development can create long-term, win-win relationships.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you and in the meantime, should you have any queries; please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

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Best Regards,

M. Haj

Motivation letter

Anonymous — Sun, 19 Nov 2006 17:10:11 GMT

Can someone check my motivation letter?

Dear Sirs, > and >,

I am a 5th year student at faculty of Technology and Metallurgy, University of >. I would like to apply for program > at Technical University in >. At my faculty, I have already gained basic theoretical knowledge in sciences that are applied in industry. Courses that I studied during my education provided me skills at several disciplines like mass, energy and heat transfer, process analysis and regulation, unit operation and separation processes, construction of chemical as well as biochemical reactors, etc. Beside theory, my skills in laboratory are at high level and I have some experience in industry.

Program > design will provide me necessary practice in most developed chemical industry in the world, as well as the modern manner of being the professional chemical engineer, who is responsible and independent individual. That opportunity I do not have in my country, and because of that I must seek one from you. > and > is my first choice as a foreign country for my further education, both because fellow students have spoken very highly about your programs and because your country is the leader in chemical industry. Besides obvious reasons, may affection for your country have deeper roots.

No education is complete without experience. Armed with a solid understanding of academic principles, I will be able to adapt and modify my theoretical knowledge in order to meet challenges like identification and solving problems, finding technological solutions for design of processes and products in industry, involving creative way of thinking, respecting deadline etc. I am motivated and curious person who can easily adapt to any situation. My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others when I can. I am thrill by the opportunity to join a group of professional where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.

I hope that you will consider me for this program. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to your reply. Should you have any questions, please contact me.

Yours faithfully

Motivation letter, would You please take a look and give me some backup?

DeeDee_1979 — Sun, 23 Jul 2006 23:39:14 GMT

Hey

I am new here! I would like to ask you for some help. I wrote a motivation letter 4 university but as im not native english speaker then i do expect errors! Please check it.

I would be greatful if you could give me a backup for my 'presenation'' .

THANK U!

DeeDee

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for a postgraduate programme in Law and Relations in September 0000. I have graduated with diploma in professional undergraduate programme acquiring the qualification of Business Administration from *** Business School in February 2005. Complementing my formal, I have practical experience with a wide variety of companies.

My inspiration is my parents and friends. Social life is equally significant to me as the time spent studying. It means a lot to me to spend a quality time with my family and a possibility to gain new friends. With some of them I share a great passion for soccer, with others yoga or diving, travelling, attending various festivals and exhibitions, with some reading adventures of Harry Potter. I really do enjoy their company and will always find time for them.

The other aspiration is my studies and work. My first serious work experience in 1999 originated curiosity in the area of international law and relations. It was during the time when I was working for State Institution - Competition Council as an expert of the second analytical division where I examined applications and investigates possible violations of the Competition Law like prohibited agreements, dominant positions, and mergers within field of products and services. I helped to supervise the competition environment that covered not only local but also international companies. I learned how to prepare draft opinions and decisions as well as to deal with ever-changing multiple tasks. In August of 1999 came a turning point and I decided to gain a deeper understanding of business environment and moved towards my further development â full time studies in business school where my major was focused on studying Business, Management and Economics; I also took several courses of law but it just seems insufficient amount for me. In 2001 I took an initiative and the business school offered me opportunity to study at the YYYYY School of Business, Denmark from August 2001 till June 2002 as a full-time non-degree student. I passed successfully nine courses; especially I was inspired by Intercultural communication in European Context course that gave me theoretical and practical understanding of international relations trough the perspective of culture; I would like to develop even more detailed knowledge towards this area in my postgraduate studies.

In the summer 2004 I spent pre diploma internship in âZZZZ Bankâ I was a assisting to internal auditors on evaluation and preparation of reports on internal/external compliance with national and international regulations regarding unusual transactions that was a major part of my thesis. Being able to see the influence of international law concerning banking was a key experience to me. In February 2005 I graduated with weighted average grade of qualification of 8.303.

In my last job is marketing manager in private sector Construction Company where every day work is not directly affected by international law or relations, I have learned to create, analyse tenders, draft proposals within the field of construction. Nowadays, I am developing and supporting business contacts and managing administrative tasks. My work gives me opportunity to put my knowledge and theoretical tools into practise but now it is time to continue my education, I believe in life-long learning with combination of experience that ensures development.

During seven years I was challenged by surrounded environment and I become more confident person, the theoretical and practical experience is a real value to me. I have gained experience to carry out independent research, to work in team and to interact with people representing different cultures and backgrounds, to be flexible, to adapt and to take initiative but at the same time to be responsible for my actions.

I have learned from various sources that VVVV University is known for its high academic standards and the faculties reputation for excellent teaching, offered modules as well extended social life. My background is a solid pathway to masterâs degree. Job experience in state institution, banking sector and private sector affirmed how significant is the influence of international law and relations has on business. In combination with my studies I am determined to seek for wider knowledge to form my career. I would like to offer my experience and insight to international relations from East European perspective, exchange knowledge, fluency in Russian would allow to access wide information if necessary. Thus, I fell confident that the Master in Law and Relations is the right choice for me and I would appreciate to receive the opportunity to study at the University of VVVV.

Thank you very much for considering my request and I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Miss DeeDee

motivation letter suggestions

Anonymous — Sun, 28 May 2006 23:43:34 GMT

Hello Forum Members,


I was very amazed when I found this page. I think it is a great idea and I thank all the people contributing.
Unfortunately I have yet another motivation letter and I dont have any native speakers around i could bother.


I tried to correct it already myself, hope its not too crude
I think I have more or less an idea what I want to say, but Id be also very grateful for comments.

A second question is concerning the CV i couldnt find any threeds for that. Maybe someone knows a link with formating examples for CV in science.

So thanks a lot.
hannes

 
Dear Dr. ***

With this Email I would like to introduce my application for an external Masterâs-Project in your lab.
I am currently in the last year of my studies within the MSc / PhD-Program Molecular Biology of the âGöttingen Centre for Molecular Biosciences (GZMB) at the University of Göttingen. The Masters-courses will finish this year in August with the final exams and are followed by a Masterâs thesis based on a six-month project of scientific research starting in October.


Beginning of this May I had the opportunity to visit the Weizmann Institute of Science in the course of an introductory visit. Our trip was part of the initiation of a cooperation between the Feinberg Graduate School and the Molecular Biology Program in Göttingen. Being very interested in your country I had the strong desire to conduct an external Masterâs-Project in Israel already before this visit. My motivation was further increased by the wonderful impression the Weizmann Institute of Science and the whole trip had on us. For me the external Master would be a fascinating combination of science and learning about Israel in all its different aspects directly and beyond what we see in the daily news.

In preparation of the visit I was examining the Web page of your Institute and the key words âEvolutionâ and âEnzyme Mechanismâ immediately caught my attention. For me Evolution has always been the most fascinating concept of biology and maybe even life itself. The discussion of patterns and phenomena under its premises is one of the most interesting intellectual challenges in science. Unfortunately I did not meet opportunities to actually work on topics combining biochemistry and evolution. Therefore I was very excited learning about your group and my interest was further strengthened by a short introduction I got during the âLife Science Open Dayâ from Dr. YY and a recommendation from Prof. ZZ, whom we met during our trip. Interestingly I encountered the class of Terpene Synthases during my work at the Max-Planck Institute in Jena. Of this interesting class of enzymes many show broad promiscuous function and shift of products even between closely related species. Those activities have most likely evolved in an interesting co-evolution between plant, herbivore and the enemies of the herbivore. Taking all this together I would be more than motivated and very thankful to able to join your group for conducting my Masterâs-project.

I bring a very strong background in molecular biology and biochemistry and have experience in working independently. Born in Hamburg I started my career at the University of Jena were I studied Molecular Biology / Biochemistry for six semesters. Continuing In the field I joined the highly selective international MSc / PhD-Program in Göttingen, which is conducted by the University, the Max-Planck-Institutes of Experimental Medicine and Biophysical Chemistry as well as the German Primate Centre. During my studies in Göttingen I followed my interest in theoretical, structural and computational related topics by choosing projects in the fields of NMR and 3D reconstruction based on single particle electron cryo-microscopy.

For the period of the Masterâs-project I will receive funding from third parties as the German Academic Exchange Service (DAAD) or the Program in Göttingen, therefore I would not require any funding from your Group or the Feinberg Graduate School.

I enclosed a short CV with two reference-addresses, I would be happy to provide further documents such as degrees and letters of recommendation on demand.

Hope to hear from you soon.
 

Yours faithfully

 

Hannes Uchtenhagen

please, correct my letter

ravi3511 — Fri, 19 May 2006 17:47:20 GMT

Dear Sir,

Sub: Requisition of Difference Cost for Laying Vitrified Tiles â Reg

*****

We are glad to inform you that the construction work in respect of your Flat No: âW-1â in Ravimuruganâs âAkshay Gaardensâ in Block-II at 3^rd Cross, Jaya Nagar, Vadavalli, Coimbatore â 41 is completed upto Third Floor Slab Level and now the Brick works and Plastering works are in progress.

As per Memorandum of Agreement, in SCHEDULE âDâ(Item No:9) we have mentioned that providing Ceramic Flooring Tiles for rooms .But in the interest of other flat owners, now we have decided to go for 2â x 2â Vitrified Tiles for the entire flat instead of 1 Â½â x 1 Â½â Ceramic Tiles.

In this connection, we informed to all the other flat owners and awainting for their prior approval to lay the 2â x 2â vitrifed tiles in their respective flats and request to pay the difference cost of Rs.30,000/- (Rupees Thirty Thousand only) to execute the work.

Hence we need your approval to proceed the work in your flat. Please confirm your approval by taking a Demand Draft for Rs.30,000/- (Thirty Thousand only) in favour of M/s. Ravimurugan Constructions payable at Coimbatore or by cash.

If you are not willing please be frank to tell us your position.

Thanking you

Yours faithfully

Re: Please, check my motivation letter

Mister Micawber — Sun, 30 Apr 2006 11:39:21 GMT

I am a motivated and curious 20-year-old interactive design student from Vilnius, Lithuania. I am excited to be applying for an internship in your company with the possibility of joining your team where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. I visited the web site of *** company, but I would like some additional information about applying to your team.

As part of my training, I am required to complete a practicum in a media company for least 45 days, and I am hoping to be able to start in July 2006. The opportunity to be a member of your working group would be invaluable in helping me to complete my practical experience requirement. I would be grateful for the chance to learn from experienced workers. I am sure that working at your company would provide me with not only professional experience in a prestigious international organization, but also the opportunity for personal enrichment through working in a dynamic multicultural environment.

I am a conscientious person dividing my time in double studies (The Interactive Design program at Vilnius College of Construction, and Design and Art Criticism at Vytautas Magnus University). My post-secondary education consists of one year at the Vilnius Academy of Fine Arts, in which I studied interior design. I have since focussed on interactive design. During my two years in the interactive design program, I have acquired considerable knowledge of digital movie software, graphic software and interactive media. I enjoy problem-solving, teamwork, public speaking and creative thinking in the Art Criticism program at Vytautas Magnus University, where I am improving my ability to work under pressure to tight deadlines, my attention to detail, and my self-motivation.

Along with my double studies, I am working as a freelancer designer on various video projects: short movies, installations, animation, and motion graphics. I am also participating in a number of contemporary art projects and on personal projects. In the process, I have obtained basic practical experience as a designer and a team worker. I like to communicate with people and I know the value of teamwork and effort, as these are the cornerstones of success. My coworkers know me to be a very effective, hardworking, creative, passionate and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.

I am a goal-oriented person and have already set a few important goals for myself. First, I want to learn the skills needed to be a professional designer through internship in a company like yours. Internship with a prestigious company like *** will provide me with the ability to accomplish my second goal of getting a good job at a company in Munich after graduating from the Interactive Design program next year. As a determined and prepared interactive designer, my third goal and ultimate dream is to have my own interactive design company in Vilnius.

Internship in your company would be a pivotal part of my learning experience, which would enable me to reach mygoals, and I am confident that the knowledge, skills and friendships gained at your company would prove invaluable throughout my career.

I have attached my CV, which provides further personal details. Thank you for your time and consideration of my request.

Yours faithfully,

CK

(NB: Interaction Design and Interactive Design both seem to be current; please choose one to use consistently.)

Please, check my motivation letter

Cla — Fri, 28 Apr 2006 16:38:30 GMT

Hello,

I found ideal company in Munich and I really want to get my intership there.

However, I am not sure the following paragraph (an email to hiring manager) makes sense or not.

I need a fresh look of expert on it.

Please check it for me for any grammatical mistake, using of English and content.

This letter is very important for me but English is not my mother tongue, so I need some help.

I would be very much grateful if you could help me.

Thank you very much in advance!

Claudia

I am motivated and curious 20-year-old interactive design student from Vilnius, Lithuania. I am excited to be applying for an internship in your company and joining your team where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm.

I visited the web site of your *** company. I have got most of the information from there, however I would like to get some additional information about applying to your team.

As part of my training, I am required to complete a practical course in a media company for least one and a half month. I want to start in July 2006. The opportunity to be a member of your working group would complete my invaluable practical experience requirement. I would be appreciative of the chance to learn from the experienced workers. I am sure that working at you company will provide me with not only a professional experience in an international, prestigious organization, but also the opportunity for personal enrichment through working in a multicultural, open-minded, dynamic environment.

I am conscious person dividing my time in double studies (Interactive design program at Vilnius College of Construction and Design and Art criticism at Vytautas Magnus University). My post-High School education consists of one year at the Vilnius Academy of Fine Arts in which I studied and became proficient with Interior design I have since left the Vilnius Academy of Fine Arts to instead focus on interactive design. During my two years of studying in interactive design program I have acquired a superior knowledge of digital movie software, as well as graphic software and interactive media. I enjoy problem solving, working in teams, public speaking and creative thinking in Art criticism program at Vytautas Magnus University. There I improve ability to work under pressure to tight deadlines and attention to detail and self motivated.

During my double studies the long while Iâm working as freelancer designer with various video projects: short movies, installations, animation, motion graphics, participate in a number of contemporary art projects and on personal projects. During this time I have obtained basic practical experience as a designer as well as a team worker. I like to communicate with people and I know the values of teamwork and hard work as these are the cornerstones of success. My coworkers know me to be a very effective, hardworking, creative, passionate and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can.

I am a goal-oriented person and have already set a few important goals for myself. First, I want to learn the necessary skills needed to be a professional designer by internship in company like yours. Internship attending a prestigious company like *** will provide me with the necessary knowledge and experience so that I can accomplish my second goal of, getting a good job at company in Munich after graduating interaction design program next year. As a determined and prepared interaction designer, my third goal and ultimate dream is to have my own interactive design company in Vilnius.

Internship in your company would be a pivotal part of my learning and experience that would enable me to reach my fulfill goal. I am confident that my knowledge, skills and friendships gained at your company would prove invaluable throughout my career.

Please have a look at my CV which provides further personal details.

Thank you for your time and considering my request.

I am looking forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

CK

one more motivation letter...please i need your help!

Anonymous — Mon, 06 Mar 2006 18:52:38 GMT

Hello everybody,

I am Italian and I am applying for a very competitive Graduate Programme in the UK and, as usual, I have to write a personal statement to be attached to the application with my personal motivation. I have been through this forum and found plenty of useful suggestions and information.
Now it's my turn. Can you please check my letter and make comments (the nastier the better), especially about the structure?

Thank you so much!
Paola

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is â¦â¦â¦.. With this letter, I would like to apply as a graduate student for the Master of Science in Local Economic Development at your School.

I got a degree in Construction Engineer in December 2000 from the University of Tor Vergata in Rome. [I DON'T KNOW HOW TO LINK THIS SENTENCE TO THE REST, BUT IT IS IMPORTANT TO MENTION MY DEGREE AT THIS POINT BECAUSE IT HELPS UNDERSTANDING WHAT I WRITE BELOW. ANY SUGGESTIONS?]
Ever since I was a young child I have always been extremely interested in knowing new cultures and new languages as a way to widen my mind and my capacity of understanding people. Thatâs why I have always actively researched possibilities to live and study abroad. In fact, both at the High School and at the University I participated in exchange programmes that gave me the possibility to spend a period abroad studying in local educational institutions. When I was 17 years old I spent three months in New Zealand where I had the possibility to attend the high school and be integrated in the local community. Later, during my university studies, I won a scholarship to be an Erasmus student in Paris for a year in one of the Faculties of Architecture in Paris and another scholarship to participate to the Leonardo da Vinci program in an architecture firm. My first year in France had a very strong impact on my ideas about my future career. In a Faculty of Architecture the approach to the world of construction was completely different from the one at the Faculty of Engineering where I was studying. During that year I got exposed to new perspectives and in particular I learnt about the social aspects related to the world of construction. For the first time I realised how designing buildings could affect peopleâs lives and how the correct planning of cities had the power of improving their living conditions. I started realising then that I could give a very strong social and ethical meaning to the rather technical job of engineer. I can trace in that period the birth of my interest for the development as a subject to study and to be involved in.
Therefore in the last period of my studies and at the beginning of my career as a young engineer I tried to build up a parallel personal knowledge on this sector. Through the reading of articles and books on development and cooperation, and through the participation to conferences and public events, I became more and more aware of the fact that this was really the sector that interested me and I tried to reorient my working perspective and move forward.
I realised in fact that working in the field of development would fulfil two important needs I had and still have: to give an ethical dimension to my work and at the same time to satisfy my thirst for travelling and discovering new cultures.
I eventually succeeded to start working for an Italian NGO which was searching for engineers for post-war reconstruction projects in the Balkans. It is four years now that I have been working for that same NGO with increasingly higher responsibilities and positions and I shifted my main area of work from a technical participation to a more strategic one. In particular in the past two and half years I have worked as country representative of my NGO in Eritrea and Egypt.

The fact that my studies are not related to the way my work has shaped up hasn't really affected me nor created major difficulties. On the contrary I think that my degree can be considered a very important point of strength. In fact my studies provided me not only with a specific technical knowledge related to construction and building related issues. In fact, more than anything else, they gave me methodological tools to be used in different fields of research and provided me with a very methodical and systematic mental structure. In particular I developed strong analytical skills and the capacity to elaborate models to study the reality by seizing its most relevant aspects. I also developed a capacity of creating logical links among phenomena that apparently donât bear any relation with one other. Moreover my studies gave me the mental habit to always go into depth of things and not being satisfied with only the superficial evidence that comes out from the first approach.
In my working experience I have had many confirmations that the methodological skills provided by my studies can be a very powerful tool. In fact it was for me relatively easy to get acquainted with the main development-related theories and to learn and internalize in a short time completely new concepts. In a fairly short time I became effective and competent, being able to undertake varied and different responsibilities on different specific sectors of intervention. People I meet for my work are often surprised to discover that I am and engineer and that I didnât attend a specific course in development.

Now, after having worked for a few years in development, in different sectors and with different duties, I feel that I am at a turning point of my career and that it is time for me to move up and forward. In this I am guided by two different needs. On one side I feel the personal need to give a more organic and theoretical ground to the knowledge I acquired on-the-job. On the other side I need to develop more specific skill and I want to specialize in a more specific sector. My goal would be to become an expert in a particular field instead of having only many different unspecialised skills. The field of specialisation I have chosen is local development. In fact in the last year I have been working on projects related to Small and Micro Enterprises and their growth and I have become more and more interested in all the aspects related the local economic development in general.

My experience in an Italian NGO has been a very enriching one from a professional and human view point. I will always be very grateful to all the people I met and worked with. They transmitted to me their passion and dedication and they gave me very precious knowledge and advice. Nonetheless in my position now I have few possibilities to learn new skills or new concepts and I feel that my work has become a unchallenging daily routine. My plans now would be therefore to work for bigger international organisations such as UN agencies or consulting firms with a more stimulating work environment. There I would have the possibility to follow larger programs with a larger impact and work with top professionals.

I am aware that my plan is a very ambitious one and it needs to be carefully prepared. In order to achieve my goals a more solid academic background is absolutely mandatory because the competition is very high and I need to upgrade my skills and competencies. To take a year off from work is also a very challenging and radical decision. It implies a strong financial commitment both because of the actual costs incurred and for the waiver of a year salary. At the same time it entails absence from the working environment with no guarantees about the future possibilities. It requires therefore a very strong motivation and a very careful choice. That's why I think that the only winning decision is to study in a university providing the highest possible quality of academic training and with internationally recognised expertise

This is the reason why I have chosen the London School of Economics, for its international renown as leading institution in the field of development.
The Master of Science in Local Economic Development I have chosen would allow to improve my academic knowledge in the working field and to enhance my possibilities to pursue a career in an International Organisation. In fact the Master would allow me to deepen and widen my knowledge on development in general, to gain a very accurate understanding of local and regional development and to develop new specific skills.
could became a specialist in a sector that not only fascinates me a lot, but that is also growing and taking more and more place in the international agendas and that requires more and more professionals able to cope with the increasing challenges brought about by international situation.

I think I could contribute to this programme for in many ways. I am very tenacious and determined to pursue what I want to achieve and I never give up any challenge. I can bring to the program an overview from my experience in the working field, relating real problems that practitioners in the field of development are asked to tackle in real life and not only on the paper. I am used to studying and working in international environments that require very good communication skills, high tolerance and capacity of understanding different cultural behaviours and different ways to approach and solve problems. I am used to analyse and process large amount of data on complex issues in a quick and effective way in order to find solutions.

I am determined and confident that I make an exceptional candidate for the program. I believe I will not only be able to achieve high results, but to contribute substantially to the London School of Economics as well.

Yours faithfully,

Re: Can you please check my motivation letter? Thanks in advance..:)

Mister Micawber — Thu, 24 Nov 2005 07:34:01 GMT

To whom, not For whom
Colon, not comma after concern
for the patent, not for patent
spell out small numbers: three
in a good, not within good
to European, not at European
no hyphen: North American
no capitals: the construction site
gained in not gained into the
no comma after problems
don't use the ampersand in business letters
willingness not wiling
myself is one word
a key role, not key role
approaching, not getting closer to
commissioning not Commissioning
forward to not forward of
No comma after job
the engineering domain, not engineering domain
an electrical engineer, not electrical engineer
current not at current
the electrical engineering domain

Delete this: With the hope that you will consider my profile as applicable for patent examiner position, I wish you all the best

and add this: I hope that you will find my application of interest for your Patent Examiner position. Please advise me if you requir any further information.

Yours faithfully,