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PLEASE CHECK MY LETTER OF MOTIVATION

william shakespeare — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 00:42:39 GMT

Hello, I am glad to be a member of this interesting site.
I have set up an letter of motivation for the application master Business Administartion.
Would you please check it as soon as possible?

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

The game of supply and demand is a never-ending developed process. This development asks organizations to change or to innovate. Organizations must manage the challenge of modern technology and even challenge it. Organizations must also exploit opportunities to preserve or to create a good market position. In short, organizations should be high-quality managed where are among other things focusing on internal and external environments factors.

Paid attention to the dynamic of the businessworld and my own passion in the business and management field , hereby I would like to apply to the master program Business Administration, track Innovation and Entrepreneurship that starts in September XYEAR.

In XYEAR I graduated as a bachelor of Management Economics and Law from the XCOLLEGE. This study has created for me an firmly broad basis in three converging fields. After my study I have worked about XY years at the municipality *** as YYconsultant, like my resume shows. And now I want to develop further on scientific level within my interest field, namely business and management. Whit this I would like to gain broader and more focused opportunities in the labour market.

I have the ambition to work in a manager function. Therefore I need an academic foundation. During the master program I would like to obtain the following knowledge. How to look, to analyze, to solve and to implement from different angles changes of management situation. In other words how to develop solutions with scientific methods and insights for complex company problems and how to implement changes and innovations. Also to recognize and review opportunities and how to develop and implement business concepts. Furthermore I want obtain insights with the gathered knowledge, to let business processes as efficiently and effectively as possible to proceed, with a view to quality and quantity of services and products.

During the master thesis I would like to apply the acquired knowledge of the master Business Administration. There for I would like to use scientific methods, techniques, theories and skills. The idea for the master thesis lies within my aimed field of work, namely: Designing a business concept for a company, such as the creation of an business-unit or the (re)designing of an innovation process.

As you can see in my resume I speak ZY languages including English. My goal for the future is to develop these and other foreign languages. I see myself as an enthusiastic, positive, open minded, empathy, social, independent and ambitious individual. I am prepared to work hard to achieve all goals that I have set for myself. Till now I have accomplished my goals. My next goal is to get accepted for this master program and obtain an master degree in Business Administration. I have set this goal for myself and I will do everything I can do to achieve it.

In the attachments you will find all required documents. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at the University ZZ.

Yours faithfully,

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Urgent...letter of motivation Master program

vslayer100 — Thu, 17 Apr 2008 12:50:51 GMT

Hi...
this should be my motivational letter to apply for a master of science in Management... could u please let me know what you think???
thanks...and sorry for the urgency !!!
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Dear Madam/Sir,

My name is *** and I am hereby applying for the Master of Science in *** program at the [-] for the 2008 fall term.

I am taking this step as the culmination of a long process of my life, in which I placed the right education as the key of my success in life and in my future professional career. In less than three months i will graduate in Business Administration and Management at *** University and the choice to continue my studies has come natural to me.

Throughout my bachelor years I had plenty of opportunities and experiences that helped me hone my qualities and open my mind to new horizons. I held internships in various companies that gave me an insight in the professional world, i had the chance to directly apply my studies to a real working situations. More recently i spent a full term in the Unites States, studying at the *** School of Business, where i had the valuable chance to experience a different educational system, to interact with different cultures and languages. I can say that this experience truly changed me. Studying in a different country, with all the challenges that come with it, is one of the most important experiences i had in my life.

These challenges as well as my strong will to give my best to everything I undertake and never compromise with modesty will help me realise my goals. Through current challenging times, I understand that in order to reach my goals, apart from hard work, I have to obtain a solid academic background that will provide me with a global perspective and will allow me to chase my dreams .

My objective is to focus my managerial knowledge and skills to the one field of business â International Management. And I believe that pursuing an MSc in International Management in a renowned university such as Westminster with your prestigious reputation will help me in my quest for excellence in this field. It will enable me to develop the right professional skills and to get the most appropriate knowledge needed for becoming a successful and prosperous professional.

I believe i have the qualities that a manager should have. I am very motivated and I am not afraid to give my best in every situation, some could point to me as a stubborn or over self-confident person, but during my life i have demonstrated I am a reliable team-player and leader at the same time. I enjoy learning from others, helping them when i can as much as i like to take on responsabilities since they push me to give the best i can. In my opinion creativity is also a very important quality and i have always tried to improve and satisfy it through the study of art and acting that helped me to focus my objectives and refine my personality.

Motivation is the key of success. But if that same motivation is backed by a solid education, it becomes the key of excellence.

I am confident that *** is the best school for shaping my future the way I imagine.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Motivation letter for Msc in foreign Uni.

Zeitgeist — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 12:10:48 GMT

Hey guys!

I'm a new registered member of the site, but an old-time visitor. I've acquired numerous valuable ideas and tips here, which helped me a lot to write the following motivation letter. If anyone could give me further advises on how to make it better, that would be real great. I'll have to mail it in two weeks, and I'm really looking forward any help. Thanx a lot in advance!

Dear Madam/Sir,

My name is [-] and I am hereby applying for the Master of Science in Business Administration program at the [-] for the 2008 fall term.

I am taking this step as the culmination of a long process of my life. I have determined to place education and my future career in the center of my life at a quite young age. After the 6^th year, I have left my primary school for a six year secondary school program highly focused on languages. During these years I have developed a great interest in business activities and economical issues and I realized the importance of foreign languages as the tools of becoming an international-minded, enlightened businessman.

Choosing the College of International Management and Business at Budapest, the capitol of Hungary as the institute of my undergraduate studies was the first embodiment of my determination to become part of the accelerated business life of our days. Learning in a city of 2 million can teach a lot outside the classrooms as well. While the college has given me professional knowledge of economical, business and social issues, the life in this metropolis with different cultures has improved a lot on my personality and point of view.

Since I was taking the International Business Economics program at the college, I have absolved a wide range of courses dealing with international business processes and methods. After acquiring the basic knowledge of economy, my interest pointed towards the cross-boarder activities of different business players. Accordingly I have specialized in Export-import management, which has helped me a lot to understand how such developments of the world of our days as the European Union and the spread of multinational corporations had affected the business life, which I am willing to take part of.

As the embodiment of the significance I put on the knowledge of foreign languages, I decided to take the Translator and Interpreter specialized in Business (in English) specialization voluntarily. This set of courses has not only developed my language skills but has brought me closer to the understanding of the Anglo-Saxon education and introduced me to learning in a foreign language.

During the last semester of my undergraduate studies, I have been an intern at the Hungarian Ministry of Economy and Transportâs Investment and Trade Development Agency, which has enriched me with numerous valuable skills. Besides enhancing my professional knowledge of the cross-boarder flow of goods and capital I have learned the basic rules of conduct in a professional environment, the respect of schedules and the importance of team work and personal responsibilities outside the school.

By the end of my undergraduate studies it has become all clear to me that I want to pursue an international carrier focused on business conducted within and between different countries. In order to achieve this, I need to widen my understanding and deepen my theoretical knowledge of international business activities. As Hungary is in the introduction phase of the Bologna system, the palette of Master programmes is still limited and in order to follow high quality education the choice of a well-established foreign university as the [-] seems to be a logical idea.

I believe that completing the MSc in Business Administration program would make me able to become a valuable employee of any corporation with international operations. Nevertheless, a year spent in [-] which is a historical trade and business center of Europe could give me such further experiences that I can greatly benefit from throughout my career.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I am looking forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

And thank you very much for any response from you guys.

Letter of motivation for Master degree

Shineman — Tue, 29 Jan 2008 19:29:14 GMT

Hello everyone,

I am from Hong Kong and I have finished writing a letter of motivation for a master degree overseas. My written English is quite poor so I am afraid that there are many grammatical mistakes. Moreover, I worry whether my contents are strong enough to have the attention of the university. Would you kindly help me to have a look?[Maybe this letter is very strong in Hong Kong style]

Best regard,

Tommy

Dear sir/madam,

My name is ---, aged -- , from Hong Kong. I am writing this letter to apply for the Masterâs Programme in Systems, Control and Mechatronics at --University . I am a final year undergraduate at the ----University, majoring in Electrical Engineering.

In my university studies, I learnt the basic knowledge in Electrical technology with fundamental technical engineering skills, for example computer programming, electric power theory, systems and control theory, building services and basic electronics. At the end of my second year, I found my interests in Systems and Control Engineering but it must be associated with Electrical, Electronics or Mechanical technology in order to become more practical. Knowing that Mechatronics consists of both of them, I believe this Masterâs programme suits me the most even though Mechatronics is quite new for me. I will finish my bachelor study by June and I am now working on my final year individual project titled âDeveloping a humanoid robotâ, to develop a robot that can simulate human facial expressions by the use of sharp memory alloy. The knowledge gained in this project is helpful for me to take this Masterâs programme.

In the last summer holiday, I worked at the -- in Singapore as a lecturer trainee for two months, which carried out duties on teaching basic calculus and an innovation oriented student project. I participated in several industrial visits with local students. I had the opportunities to know more about manufacturing process. It was also found that Engineering is still playing an important role in the society. The Hong Kong society is changing rapidly. In the past, Electrical Engineering graduates had a wide range of career opportunities but now it becomes very competitive. On the one hand, I need to compete with local fresh graduates and experienced degree holders. On the other hand, many graduates studying overseas would choose to return to Hong Kong. Although I am deciding to work overseas, my knowledge is not enough. It is necessary for me to pursue further education before entering the working society.

Sweden is not only famous of its technology in Science, but also the education system. In Hong Kong, most Masterâs programmes are called taught postgraduate programmes which are not research-oriented. I am eager to study in a new environment and take some research liked courses. At --University, I can have the chance to take both taught and research-oriented courses, which are relevant to the labor market. I believe that --University can provide me a world class programme with a quite environment to learn. Moreover, since international students are all welcome, I can learn and study as a group with students from all over the world, to enhance my international understanding and communication skills. In Sweden, spoken Swedish is rather important for a foreigner to get adapted to local culture. My aunt lives in --- which not far away from campus so I can live with her family and learn Swedish and local culture from her. I want to have the opportunity to work at international Swedish enterprises or take a PhD programme in Sweden in the future.

Chinese always say that âLearning is like sailing against water current. We cannot move forward without putting effortâ. As a graduate or being a postgraduate, self-motivation is important and I should place more expectations on myself rather than on others.

Thank you very much for considering my application. I am looking forward to your positive response. It would be a valuable opportunity to study at --University.

Yours faithfully,

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Re: Should I mention example production in my motivation letter?

BMX — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 23:09:20 GMT

Here goes my letter of motivation. I will appreciate any suggestions and comments to improve it. Thanks in advance!

Some notes:

COUNTRY_NAME = my resident country

XYZ = employer's name

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a position of Project Manager / Multimedia Developer (reference no. 00000) as advertised on XYZâs on-line vacancy bulletin.

I first became interested in multimedia development and web-based applications twelve years ago. Since 2001, I am working as a project manager and developer in a leading internet agency in my country. As of March 2004, I am in charge for communication, management and execution of all online activities of ABC_CORPORATION in COUNTRY_NAME. The list of my responsibilities includes communication with the HQ office and local companies, website design, content development and update, adaptation of various online/ offline campaigns and presentations, research and invention of new channels for communication with target audience. During my practice I have developed a vast range of skills, for example: analysing complex numerical and verbal information, clear, concise writing for different contexts, working enthusiastically and productively under pressure, dealing professionally with a wide range of people, working in a variety of teams and on my own initiative, overcoming obstacles. I am comfortable in sourcing and handling data electronically. Making movies like the Flash presentation I've attached as a sample of my work is such an enjoyable experience, because I know how to turn content requirements into a multimedia concept by selecting the most appropriate choice of multimedia. I have a knack of the latest technologies which help me to evaluate rapidly project essentials, determine terms and deadlines, execute in full the project.

As you can see on my CV I lead a busy life through my daily responsibilities and various business activities, which has meant that I have very quickly learnt the importance of time management. I have always handed my work in on time and never missed a deadline. My communication skills have greatly developed through my work experience with ABC_CORPORATION and its markets in Central and Eastern Europe.

For the period of my management and fulfillment of the ABC_CORPORATION on-line activities, the ABC_CORPORATION recognizes COUNTRY_NAME as the fastest growing market in terms of Internet presence. My dedication to work and pursuit for perfection convinced ABC_CORPORATION to choose COUNTRY_NAME as a pilot market for several web-based projects and desktop applications. As of 2007 I am the person responsible for terms negotiation, concept development, execution and language adaptation of ABC_CORPORATION websites in COUNTRY_1, COUNTRY_2, COUNTRY_3, and COUNTRY_4.

XYZ position as a leading organization attracts me and I feel XYZ offers the opportunity to work with the type of people and projects that I am seeking. I feel I perform to a high standard and have a range of relevant skills that I can bring to XYZ.

I would be very keen to find out more about XYZ aims and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further at an interview. I hope you will consider my application favourably and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

FIRST_NAME LAST_NAME

Re: Should I mention example production in my motivation letter?

Anonymous — Tue, 15 Jan 2008 23:07:37 GMT

Here goes my letter of motivation. I will appreciate any suggestions and comments to improve it. Thanks in advance!

Some notes:

COUNTRY_NAME = my resident country

XYZ = employer's name

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a position of Project Manager / Multimedia Developer (reference no. 00000) as advertised on XYZâs on-line vacancy bulletin.

Yours faithfully,

FIRST_NAME LAST_NAME

Letter of motivation- I would like some opinios and correction

Barbara En Argentina — Mon, 07 Jan 2008 17:25:59 GMT

Letter of motivation

My interest for applying to the Masterâs in Finance are: (i) to learn the insights of international trade law applied to the real world, (ii) to become skilled at the necessary instruments to solve commercial conflicts at an international level; and (iii) to enhance my basic previous knowledge about financial matters, such as the role of the banking system in modern economies.

Being a Latin-American citizen has exposed me to the reality and needs of emerging markets of underdeveloped countries such as mine. Taking this into consideration is that I can say that studying abroad will allow me to learn not only new and relevant concepts about international trade law and finance but also will give me the opportunity to learn in a case to case basis how international financial markets work and how can I help my country to enter the international markets properly for the long run. These, in turn, will help my career and personal development, providing me with the opportunity to lead an improvement in my countryâs commercial and financial system, which are clearly, as I stated before, underdeveloped.

As for my undergraduate degree I graduated from Economics from a recognized University in Argentina where I focused on international economics and macroeconomics. After my degree I extended my studies taking a short postgraduate course in Finance. However, I plan to follow the Finance specialization after completing the core courses of your program, since I need to gain the necessary knowledge in international finance, which I currently lack.

My ambitions for the future are related to becoming a leader in any company or institution I join, a source of inspiration to promote an efficient management. Since I started my working life, I had the chance to work for the *** in relation to the financial aspects of setting the tariffs for the transportation of oil products, also for a regulated company in the financial sector and for the ***, where I am currently employed. From this experience I learnt how finance knowledge is as useful in the public sector, in the private sector and in an international organization. It is through this kind of inter institutional experience that I realized that I needed to acquire additional knowledge, so I completed a Postgraduate course in Finance in 2007. I would like to further my studies in that area and complement it with international trade law.

In most Latin-American countries, a weak relationship between the banking system and the financial markets exists. In Argentina, there is also a weak enforcement of the law in commercial matters, so we have a history of imbalances in relation with private property rights and the institutions that are supposed to guaranty them. These are the fundamentals for any society to have its private sector develop and to be successful. Therefore, I want to focus on the effort needed to streamline the institutions and the companies to make sure that the entrepreneurial spirit is stimulated as a main contributor to development.

In conclusion, I believe that the education I can gain both in study and practice at the three Universities that I will attend as a part of this n Master will impart me with the tools I need for my future career in commercial and finance practice and academic research. Seeing Latin American become integrated both commercially and financially in pace with the international system is a goal, which I will seek to support both theoretically and practically in my future work. I hope that you will award me this opportunity to gain the necessary knowledge and skill I need for this mission. I am thrilled with the prospect of studying in Europe, a renowned centre of academic excellence, recognized for developing first world class leaders.

Yours faithfully,

need help for letter of motivation

Anonymous — Thu, 03 Jan 2008 14:09:07 GMT

Dear all

I have to submit the application document for scholarship next week.
And I have to write a letter of motivation but my English is not so good.

Can anyone help me correct this letter please.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the .......(course name).............. in which I believe that can extend my theoretical knowledge for profession in field of designing website, which is a new kind of media that appeared to become more important to both business and education in my country.

I graduated in 2000 with a bachelorâs degree in architecture. During my years in architecture school, my interest turned from architectural design to the design that not only communicates but also interacts with the user. So I decided to conduct professional career as a web designer since graduated until now.

In developing country like Thailand, small and medium businesses which run by native investor are growing rapidly. Due to small asset, these businesses can not afford high price propaganda like TV commercial or magazine advertising. Nevertheless, they still need media that can exhaustively demonstrate their information with cheaper expense. Therefore website is an appropriate solution to choose. In addition, more advantages of website are prompt update, easy access and worldwide published.

Unfortunately, the benefits of website as a real media are still overlooked. Although website is well-known in Thailand, most of them were used only for providing small information. Plain concept, few creativeness and lack of design diminish the efficiency of communication which actually should be the most advantage of World Wide Web.

I hope that after accomplish the .......(course name).............. I will able emphasis my understanding about how good media can transfers original idea to the audience and how can I apply this knowledge to webpage designing. Besides ambitions for my future career, I also would like to be part of the movement to bring World Wide Web in to everybodyâs life and draw the new direction of media communication for my country.

Studying in two countries, by the way, a terrific benefit of this course is not only important to boost chance of my future international career but also means to make me realize how to understand people in various environments. Traveling to different places, vision exchange between different cultures will absolutely develop my design and communication comprehension.

Thank you for kindly considering my application. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details or documents. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully

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Re: Help me please!! Could anyone check my letter of motivation for univers

Mister Micawber — Sun, 09 Dec 2007 10:29:13 GMT

Hello, Bussard. I have underlined some problem areas:

Dear Sir or Madame,

I would like to apply for a Master program Molecular Life Science and for financial support of the University of ****.

My aim is to be a key scientist and be fully qualified to conduct research in area of Molecular Biology, particularly in Molecular Genetics. Therefore I would like to gain deep theoretical knowledge and practical experience in Molecular Biology, Molecular Genetics and Cell biology. I believe University of *** with an interdisciplinary Master degree course in Cell&Molecular Biology along with its International Scholarship Program is the best place to achieve my career objectives.

I am a graduate of ***. I graduated with a Bachelorâs degree in Biology in 1999 and a Masterâs degree in Physiology in 2001. I completed my bachelor as well as master thesis with a highest grade. Then, I joined a research group supported by **** at the Biological Centre of *** University. I was introduced into Molecular Biology and recombinant DNA technologies. From October 2005 to July 2006 I was a guest student at the ***, where I attended some theoretical courses and had the opportunity to obtain high level practical experience in experimental biology. Thus I gained a very valuable experience. These abroad studies aroused my interest in the field of Molecular and Cell Biology. I found that Molecular Biology especially Molecular Genetics is very interesting and exciting, because my aspirations as a scientist is to understand the genome organisation of the cell as well as to investigate different gene regulation mechanisms which will provide more insights into gene therapy. The gene therapy, as a form of molecular medicine, has the potential to significantly influence the human health in this century. It holds the promise to provide new treatments for a large number of inherited as well as acquired diseases and I believe it will play an essential role in future therapies.

However, there are some efforts to improve the quality of higher education in my country, the studies and research in these fields are still to come in the future. I have a very strong desire to pursue a career in Molecular Biology and I decided to continue my studies in this area and receive MSc and further PhD degrees. Due to low income in our country, there is no possibility to follow an abroad study without financial support from external fund.

I am fully confident that I have sufficient qualification and experience as well as language proficiency, both in German and English, to successfully graduate with the Masterâs degree in Molecular and Cell biology. I strongly believe that the Master course Molecular Life Science will give me the opportunity to gain high level qualification, extend my knowledge and significantly influence my future career to be very successful scientist at national as well as at international level.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Help me please!! Could anyone check my letter of motivation for university?

Bussard — Thu, 06 Dec 2007 08:31:53 GMT

Below is the motivation letter. I would be very grateful if someone can correct it.

Thanks!!

Dear Sir or Madame,

I would like to apply for a Master program Molecular Life Science and for financial support of the University of ****.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,