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Motivation letter for University

madona — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 16:27:47 GMT

Hi everybody,

I found this forum few days ago. I think, it is so helpful and valuable for everyone.

I try to get through into Y.. University. I need your help to check my motivation letter such as grammar, structure, errors and etc.

I really appreciate your comment, ideas and opinions.
My due date for sending my application form, resume and motivation letter is October 15,2008.

Please help me.Thank you very much in advance to everybody who wants to "give me a hand".

Dear Madam or Sir,

The process of supply and demand is on-going and, as such requires organizations to both adapt and innovate. Organizations should meet the challenge of modern technology and, at times, challenge it themselves. They must also be able to exploit opportunities to create or maintain a good position in the financial market. In short, the banks and big corporations need high quality of financial service where the focus is on the internal and external stock market environment.

I have a passion to work with financial transactions, stock market and investment funds, so I would like to apply for the Bachelor's degree of Administrative studies, track Finance or Accounting into Faculty of .. at Y.. University which starts January 2009.

I graduated with Master's degree of Law from University of Moscow in 2000. My studies have given me a solid foundation in six fundamental fields: Macroeconomics, Microeconomics, Banks' Law, Financial Law and Corporate Law. Since finishing my studies I have been working as a Legal Advisor at Y company.

I want to pursue an international caree in economics, specializing in Finance or Accounting field. My goal is to work as an analyst for one of the top investment banks or hedge funds, or as a Financial Advisor for a private trust in any world financial centre. To achieve this, I need to complete my academic background and to take a Bachelor's degree in Finance or Accounting at Y..University which offers an outstanding education and has a superior reputation.

To be successful and achieve high standarts in the financial world, I need to obtain an extensive practical and theoretical knowledge in investment analysis, corporate finance, banking, and financial microstructure. I need to widen and deepen my understanding of quantitative techniques and financial behaviour. I am also eager to learn more about international financial systems and stock market investment funds. I understand that Finance and Accounting are very popular and competitive industry and it is rather challenging to achieve a professional career. I am however open-minded and prepared to meet all challenges presented to me. I am convinced that Bachelor's degree of Finance or Accounting will give me an opportunity to build a successful career and become a true professional, contributing value to my future companies.

I enclose my resume. Please feel free to contact me if you require any further details or documents. I hope to hear from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

(signuture)
NAME..
Enclosers: resume

Any comments / suggestions for this ?

buset07 — Sat, 04 Oct 2008 12:37:19 GMT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying for the Postgraduate Diploma of Information Technology Management, as this is my first step
to pursue the Master of Management in Information Technology.

With over 18 years of experience dealing with technical aspect of IT, and now as a Technical Manager, I do feel
a need to see the context from the other side. Having two certifications, PMP and CSM ( Certified Scrum Master ),
indeed help me for that purpose. But yet, this is still not enough. Having an MMIT will definitely increase confidence
in my abilities to think "out of box", as well as to bolster my career progression.

There are many specific reasons why I want to pursue the MMIT at [xyz]. I've compared the MMIT subjects from various university.
To name a few, the academic reputation, the availability of an extensive range of courses, and the online courses, perfectly suit my
interests.

I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this programme. I would be grateful if my application for this programme is considered and accepted.

Yours faithfully,
*** ***

Re: Motivation Letter! Need help

Anonymous — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 22:23:37 GMT

This is the letter i 've tryed to write. Could anyone please correct it and give me any advices? Thank uu!!

Dear Sir/Madam,

I write to express my interest in enrolling on the Msc in Management, which is offered by *** University.

I am very goal-oriented, open-minded and communicative girl, always ready for new challenge.

I graduated in Marketing and Business Management at *** in *** in (month). Even if I am still really interested in marketing subjects, I decided to apply to a Master in Management because my belief is that it could complete my theorical education in the best way, giving me a more complete preparation to be capable of working in different fields. ( I MEAN NOT ONLY MARKETING BUT I DONâT KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN THE CONCEPT!!)A Msc in Management will be an excellent springboard for my future career and will provide me the basis and confidence to realize my dreams. I am convinced that in order to be competitive itâs important acquire more specialized knowledge: specialization in Management would strengthen my knowledge and help me forward with my career aim, that consists in working in a large, attractive company as a manager, preferably in an international context.

This is one of the reason why Iâve chosen to continue my studies in an English program. In addiction, I am aware of the fact that education away from home could provide me the experience of discovering new ways of growing and giving and is an increased responsibility that can contribute to a more wide way of thinking, behaving and viewing.

I believe that at Your University I could achieve what I dream of, thatâs why learning in it would be an honour for me.

I thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to receiving your decision.

Yours faithfully,

***

Re: motivation letter - Urgent

anarainbow — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 00:46:01 GMT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the internship in your company's A. Services Department.

I have recently concluded an Economics degree and a course on Financial Auditing and Internal Control - an area in which I am particularly interested - and these have given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career.

The proposed internship would thus be an excellent professional opportunity, not only for its challenging functions, but also for all I will certainly learn and achieve in a company of such international reference in the areas of K., W. and E. services.

I consider myself a very dynamic, communicative and creative person. I like team work, sharing and experimenting new ideas in order to solve challenging problems, and have good organization and analysis skills.

Believing I can match the expectations you will deposit in me, I enclose my curriculum vitae for your review. It would be a pleasure to schedule an interview with you, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

This is the letter that I improved. I have question....do you think that it is necessary to talk about my language skills ( OR should I have that the employer see my CV (item Language Skills) and about my wish to work in Italy?

Thank you Philip!

Motivation letter to trainee program - Draft

Anonymous — Wed, 28 May 2008 19:56:27 GMT

Could you help me on my motivation letter, I would be very pleased, any suggestion is welcome.

Thank you

Carl

Dear Sir or Madam,
May 28, 2008

I would like to work at GLE because I believe that would be not only a pleasure but also a great opportunity to initiate my career in a truly international environment and enhance my knowledge and skills gained during studies on the university. Being part of a trainee program has always been part of my career plan as I believe this kind of program offers an opportunity to young engineers like me to develop their talent and be recognized as future leaders.

I am an enterprising and hard-working person. During my studies at Federal University of Santa Catarina I have worked as a scientific researcher on Computational Fluid Dynamics simulations at Integrated Technologies Laboratory. I also have spent 3 months in Valencia-Spain in an international internship program at TB S.A. where I had the opportunity to interact with students from many different countries and enhance my knowledge in Spanish and English.

I am a sailor and have participated on major national yacht racing competitions and working for a company with such strong link with sea would be plus on my career.

In my opinion, the most important factor to get promoted and be noticed among many high skilled young people, which is needed to find a rewarding job, is acquired practical experience. That is why I spend a lot of free time on exploring and improving knowledge, this often exceeds beyond my education program.

I hope the information given above will convince you of my diligence and good skills I could utilize as a future leader at GLE.

Yours faithfully,

Re: Motivation letter! Would anyone check this for me, please?

Mister Micawber — Tue, 20 May 2008 12:31:14 GMT

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It is generally well done in regard to content. I have underlined some problem areas:

Dear Madam,

I am ~~hereby~~ writing to apply for a two-month working experience in England, in which I am particularly interested. My name is Katerina Vaculikova and I am a 21 years old student in my second year of studies, at the St. Cyril and Methodius Faculty of Theology, PalackÃ½ University, Olomouc. The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to ~~focus your attention on~~ demonstrate how highly motivated I am for such an opportunity.

I first became interested in social work through being involved into an integrating project for handicapped people under the aegis of EU, The Inclusion Czech republic. ~~Within this project~~ I was responsible for preparing and organising 2-day workshops as well as ~~for~~ keeping foreign relations, relations with donors and also with those who made this project really working â people with any kind of handicap.

During the last two years of my studies, I went through my working experiences in a variety of institutional and other facilities and with many types of clients. As my school practices went on, I subsequently realised who I want to work whit. I feel the closest relation to the target group ~~represented by~~ of elderly or mentally handicapped people. I know that I can offer them the best of myself, try to make their troubles more tolerable and accept them as unique beings. I cannot even describe how satisfied and happy I always feel while working with them.

~~Concerning~~ my language skills~~, they~~ are based on my working experiences abroad. I spent almost six months in London, working and discovering a beauty of England and I found this place very beautiful. This two-month working experience could give me a chance to improve my language skills and show me what the care is alike in one of the most advanced countries of the world. Because no matter where you are and no matter what you do, the main principle of social work should still be to help to the needed ones as much as possible.

In order to ~~be good and~~ achieve high standards, I need to obtain not only theoretical, but also practical knowledge and I am convinced that this higher level of experience could help me to prove that. I would like to combine the knowledge I already know and ~~any~~ new information, align the knowledge and gain a wider perspective on the matter. Furthermore, I feel that such an opportunity is a way how to find out what I really want and if my life journey has taken the right direction. Taking this type of challenge can help me to discover what is truly hidden inside me.

French novelist Anatole France once said: âTo accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.â After a few years of child dreaming I came to know that if I finally try to turn my dreams into reality I could better envision my future and direct the path of my lifeâ¦ and therefore I am catching this opportunity. J

Yours faithfully,

Motivation letter! Would anyone check this for me, please?

Anonymous — Mon, 19 May 2008 19:46:22 GMT

Hi to everyone, I found this forum very useful and all of you guys helped a lot. :-) according to your advices and sample letters I tried to write my own motivation letter. I need it to apply for two-month working experience in England (within my studies). Could I ask anyone to check my letter, please please please? I am not english so as I suppose there are gonna be many mistakes. Sorry in advance! Thanks a lot!!! :-)

Katka, the Czech republic

There you go...

Dear Madam,

I am hereby writing to apply for a two-month working experience in England, in which I am particularly interested. My name is Katerina Vaculikova and I am a 21 years old student in my second year of studies, at the St. Cyril and Methodius Faculty of Theology, PalackÃ½ University, Olomouc. The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how highly motivated I am for such an opportunity. I first became interested in social work through being involved into an integrating project for handicapped people under the aegis of EU, The Inclusion Czech republic. Within this project I was responsible for preparing and organising 2-day workshops as well as for keeping foreign relations, relations with donors and also with those who made this project really working â people with any kind of handicap. During the last two years of my studies, I went through my working experiences in a variety of institutional and other facilities and with many types of clients. As my school practices went on, I subsequently realised who I want to work whit. I feel the closest relation to the target group represented by elderly or mentally handicapped people. I know that I can offer them the best of myself, try to make their troubles more tolerable and accept them as unique beings. I can not even describe how satisfied and happy I always feel while working with them. Concerning my language skills, they are based on my working experiences abroad. I spent almost six months in London, working and discovering a beauty of England and I found this place very beautiful. This two-month working experience could give me a chance to improve my language skills and show me what the care is alike in one of the most advanced countries of the world. Because no matter where you are and no matter what you do, the main principle of social work should still be to help to the needed ones as much as possible. In order to be good and achieve high standards, I need to obtain not only theoretical, but also practical knowledge and I am convinced that this higher level of experience could help me to prove that. I would like to combine the knowledge I already know and any new information, align the knowledge and gain a wider perspective on the matter. Furthermore, I feel that such an opportunity is a way how to find out what I really want and if my life journey has taken the right direction. Taking this type of challenge can help me to discover what is truly hidden inside me. French novelist Anatole France once said: âTo accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.â After a few years of child dreaming I came to know that if I finally try to turn my dreams into reality I could better envision my future and direct the path of my lifeâ¦ and therefore I am catching this opportunity. J Yours faithfully,

error checking!

alia — Tue, 06 May 2008 10:58:42 GMT

Hello to everybody,

I find this site very helpful and I used some tips and coments on other posts before writing my own motivation letter to university.

I'm not native english speaker, so can I ask your help in correcting this letter (words, grammar) or if something isn't really convenient to write, please comment.

Thank you in advance,

Here is letter:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to express my interest for admission to a master program Cultural Economics and Cultural Entrepreneurship within *** university.

I have completed four years of undergraduate studies in Tourism and Hospitality management and after graduating I was certain that I want to undertake a postgraduate study. During studies I became very interested in the culture and its affect to tourism and sustainable development of economics. My graduation paper was related to renovation of cultural architectural objects and its impact for surrounding territory and economics where I reviewed the problem of cultural heritage in ***country and came to conclusion that culture can create the balance between material world and society. (for me it seems unfinished here, but I was not able to make a "bridge")

Regarding my career aspirations working in cultural industries and becoming a manager of cultural organization I want to obtain Master's degree in cultural entrepreneurship. This knowledge will allow me to understand specific management principles what is needed in creative industries and I will be able to fully realize my professional goals.

I am confident that I have the necessary combination of self-motivation, background, personality and academic knowledge to succeed in the Masterâs degree program. I hope that my experience at Erasmus University will equip me to manage my future well and also prepare me to make significant contributions to the development of my country.

Should I write some "looking forward... " -like sentence at the end?

Yours faithfully,

Name Surname

Re: Shall I write my name and address at the top right side of my Motivation Letter..?

Susankay — Sun, 04 May 2008 14:18:35 GMT

"Yours faithfully" for an application letter? I think not; too familiar.

This is more like a business letter.

In fact, I would make the salutation To Whom It May Concern

and end it with Sincerely,

But then again, I give a US perspective.

Re: Shall I write my name and address at the top right side of my Motivation Letter..?

Yoong Liat — Sun, 04 May 2008 07:28:14 GMT

MrPedantic
Yes, I'd agree with the "unknown recipient"/"Yours faithfully" combination.

(Sorry for the late reply.)

MrP

Thanks, MrP

I was wondering what had happened to our members who are BrE native speakers. I was disappointed that, after a couple of days, none came forward to give a reply.

Anyway, many thanks for your response.