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Re: letter of recommendation

Mister Micawber — Wed, 13 Feb 2008 13:15:12 GMT

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(Note: I have changed some spelling to conform to American English practice)

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing this letter to recommend [First name, Last name] for your "X" American Program.

I have known Miss L. for two years as a student of applied linguistics at the P. Institute, [City], Italy, and she has always shown a strong interest in our program. She is a hardworking student and has improved steadily. I can attest that her academic performance has been quite satisfactory. (Do I need to give more academic details ?-- The more detail you give, without their being too long, the more effective the recommendation. Perhaps her scores, if good, and describe a project she participated in or a paper she wrote.)

She is also an active member of a student theater group which regularly performs classic and original English plays for university audiences. She dedicates much of her free time to the cultural activities provided by our institute.

As for her personal qualities, she has always been a very friendly and respectful student who demonstrates a great capacity for integration into university life.

For all these reasons, I highly recommend this candidate to you. Furthermore, I believe that your program will provide her with valuable experience, helping her improve her English level, and deepen her understanding of American culture and values.

Should you need further information, please feel free to contact me at the address above.

Yours faithfully,

[signature]

[Name]
[Title, Institution]

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Re: SOS Could anyone help me to read my lines?

julielai — Sun, 03 Feb 2008 20:32:20 GMT

You need to fix the highlighted bits.

Helenezh wrote:

Dear professor ***,

I am a doctoral student at Ecole des Hautes Etudes in Paris and I am ~~process of~~ writing my dissertation devoted to examining âRepresentations of emperors in monasteries and temples under Tâang and Songâ. Professor *** gave me your email address and advised me to writer to you for some intractable questions:

About the statues that Xuanzong (Li Longji)ordered in 743 to establish in Kaiyuan monasteries and Kaiyuan temples, some history sources reported that those images represented the emperor in form of the Celestial Venerable of the Primordial Beginning (Yuanshi Tianzun), but we know the most of figures of Xuanzong in place of worship took his own look or the appearance of Immortals (Zhenren)(for example in Ziji Palace and Shangqing Palace). Do you think, from the point of view of Taoist theory and in the background which the court imperial venerated Laozi as their ancestor, it was possible that an icon was made for representing Tang sovereign in the form of Yuanshi Tianzun? If it was, is that judged incoherent with the figure in form of Zhenren? (I don't understand your question either, and I'm Chinese.)

Did Taoists have the same tendency as their Buddhist opponents to developer at level of theory the idÃ©e (spelling) ofâGod-Emperorâby identifying the emperor with the divinity?

I have been perplexed by these questions for a long time. Would you please give me some advises (spelling)? Iâd appreciate you sending me any information you have available.

Thanks for your time.

Yours faithfully,

Re: Correcting grammar and spelling

Feebs11 — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 19:20:04 GMT

Jesper7589 wrote:
Hallo everybody.

I am going to hand over a delivery to my English teacher tomorrow morning.

I were wondering if any of you would read the text in italics, and tell me if there are any grammar and/or spelling mistakes. And if your are real generous - give me a proposal of what I could write instead - and repost it underneath this post.

By the way - my mother language is Danish.

Here it goes:

Dear National Riffle Association

Thank you very much for your enquiry with reference to establishing gun clubs in the schools in California. We â Youth for Safety â would like to underline [OR emphasise] our neutrality when it comes to the question about possessions of firearms. We find that our neutral stance make us unable to participate in your gun-clubs-program. Therefore we are sad [Not really the right phrase here. "we have to inform you" would be more accurate] to inform you that we would like to [must] refuse your offer.

Our task, as an organisation, is to give impartially [this is an adverb. You need the adjective] information about the legislation about [two "abouts" in one sentence - avoid. "relating to/concerning"]firearms and firearms in general.[confusing - be more accurate] After the schools shootings on Columbine High School in 1999 and in Washington in 2002, we find it very important that somebody tries to solve the problems â in an even-handed way. Therefore we are arranging meetings and conferences on schools around the country. [to do what?]

Even though we rejected [are rejecting/must reject] the offer that you gave us about helping establishing gun clubs, we find it very important that you are willing to collaborate with Youth for Safety in the future.

We would like to use this opportunity to come up with some other activities that National Riffle Association and Youth for Safety could collaborate on in the future.

We are arranging a big tour to a great number of High Schools around the country in the coming months, where we want to bring the whole school shooting theme into focus.

We would like you, NRA, to participate as an active part [repetitive - omit] on this tour. You are going to collaborate with organisations such as Americans for Gun Safety and Coalition to Stop Gun Violence. We know that your attitude towards possession of firearms is not the same as Americans for Gun Safety and Coalition to Stop Grun Violence â but we know that you all are working for a safetier and more secure USA.

We hope that you can see the great benefits of these activites, and we are look [look forward/are looking forward] forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Jesper Pedersen

Founder, Youth for Safety

Thank you very much!

- Jpdparadis, Denmark

Some spelling need attention.

Correcting grammar and spelling

Jesper7589 — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 13:58:26 GMT

Hallo everybody.

I am going to hand over a delivery to my english teacher tomorrow morning.

I were wondering if any of you would read the text in italics, and tell me if there are any grammar and/or spelling mistakes. And if your are real generous - give me a proposal of what i could write instead - and repost it underneath this post.

By the way - my mother language is Danish.

Here it goes:

Dear National Riffle Association

Thank you very much for your enquiry with reference to establishing gun clubs in the schools in California. We â Youth for Safety â would like to underline our neutrality, when it comes to the question about possessions of firearms. We find that our neutral stance make us unable to participate in your gun-clubs-program. Therefore we are sad to inform you that we would like to refuse your offer.

Our task, as an organisation, is to give impartially information about the legislation about firearms and firearms in general. After the schools shootings on Columbine High School in 1999 and in Washington in 2002, we find it very important that somebody tries to solve the problems â in an even-handed way. Therefore we are arranging meetings and conferences on schools around the country.

Even though we rejected the offer that you gave us about helping establishing gun clubs, we find it very important that you are willing to collaborate with Youth for Safety in the future.

We would like to use this opportunity to come up with some other activities that National Riffle Association and Youth for Safety could collaborate on in the future.

We are arranging a big tour to a great number of High Schools around the country in the coming months, where we want to bring the whole school shooting theme into focus.

We would like you, NRA, to participate as an active part on this tour. You are going to collaborate with organisations such as Americans for Gun Safety and Coalition to Stop Gun Violence. We know that your attitude towards possession of firearms is not the same as Americans for Gun Safety and Coalition to Stop Grun Violence â but we know that you all are working for a safetier and more secure USA.

We hope that you can see the great benefits of these activites, and we are look forward hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Jesper Pedersen

Founder, Youth for Safety

Thank you very much!

- Jpdparadis, Denmark

Re: SOS: Motivation Letter

Sonia_1202 — Fri, 24 Nov 2006 18:01:20 GMT

Sonia_1202 wrote:

Hello, this is my motivation letter, and I need to write more, what else could I add up? Thanks for your help in advance..

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is ......, ... years old and have completed my studies in .......... School in ......, a bilingual school where i had the opportunity of learning both, English and Spanish.

I inform my desire to participate in the ........................................ Program. I believe that this program will give me the opportunity to link my past education and experiences with new studies in the hospitality field.

To achieve my goals, I need a good eduation this I strongly believe that this is the right place; it has always been my dream to work in the hospitality industry, mainly because it deals with communicating with people around the world which is personally enriching.

I chose Switzerland as a destination for my further studies as the roots of hospitality are there, and as we all know, hospitality is global, which is why i feel the necessity of going abroad to study and acquire both, theoretical and cultural knowledge. This program is a great opportunity for my professional project as ... is an institution that stimulates the integration of studies and practice, which is very important. This means that I will gain experience and knowledge to return to my homeplace as an irreplaceable worker and become beneficial to my country.

Personally, I am an organized person, motivated, hard-working and ambitious. I have learnt the values of teamwork and organization to accomplish tasks in time by helping my father in his business, which is very important as the program is specialised in BA and makes me strongly believe that this experience will be very valuable in my studies as I have learnt to attend different customers and treat them in a way so they feel comfortable.

(Here I'd show a few results to prove my English and Spanish speaking/writing/reading fluently)

I am very interested and motivated to study at your university. Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional queries or comments regarding my motivation.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours faithfully...

please tell me what i need to modify/edit..and how can i improve it! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have checked out a few spelling mistakes...thanks for helping me out..how does it sound generally?

Re: Seminar Invitation letter

Ronin74 — Mon, 21 Aug 2006 03:01:42 GMT

Hi,

I am trying to write an invitation letter to a seminar and was woundering if someoe can help me with it. I have a draft so if someone can give me the feed back(spelling, gramma ect please feel free to corected)

many thanks

We are pleased to inform you that our company planning to conduct the seminar on Information Technology in sphere designing the information systems. The date is undertaking form (date) to (date). In the seminar there will be presented reports of that companies which will provoke the most interest in IT specialist. In the program of the seminar - an undertaking training for specialist.

The purpose of our seminar and training to acquaint the participant and raise their level in system IT the methods of the designing IT consulting and personnel control. Such subject shall are touched on length of the whole seminar as:

" Control IT, as one of the functional zones to activity in companies " Particularities to activity IT department.

" Typical purposes, tasks, functions, problems.

" Particularities of the interaction with other functional subsystem of the enterprise. The Typical organizing structures.

" Control separate functional zone " Notion of the information system

" Methods of the designing IS (designing to activity, flow and structures given) " Introducing the corporative information system " Types, examples, particularities of the designing and introduction

The participation in most seminar does not require the payment. All are further expenses of the participant including: travel accommodation and food are produced from their own expenses. The further information about the seminarâs timetable and training and actual location you will get to you by email as soon as you will send the acknowledgement about participation.

We look forward to see you.

Yours faithfully

Need help on writing apology letter

MapleFinale — Thu, 27 Jul 2006 11:53:48 GMT

Hi guys, would anyone like to help me on writing an apology letter? My first language is not english my english sux.

I need to write a letter to apologise for my son for playing online flash games using the school computer after school. How should i write?

Mr. Teo,

I've been informed by my son, Goh Bin from class 2F, that his account has been disabled by the school technician as he has been playing games in school. I understand that the school computers are meant for educational purposes and I am sorry for my son's actions.

Yours Faithfully,

Goh Ba

lolz, is that ok? should i add that i have given my son the $10 to activate his account? how should i do that? if u do spot any grammar, spelling mistakes, pls tell me, im sure there is, just that i cant find. is the letter too short? or dun seem sincere? I cant think of any more to write. pls help me and post ur suggestions pls, thx alot

Re: When to use 'Yours Sincerely, Faithfully, or Thanks'

MrPedantic — Fri, 16 Dec 2005 00:58:47 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
As nobody has mentioned it previously, i thought i'd just say that "Yours Sincerely" is used informally and "Yours faithfully" is used on things such as formal business letters. Please note the case of the two phrases (capitalisation of the S or f)

Poppycock, Anon.

Your spelling suggests that you write British English; in which case:

"Yours sincerely" ends a letter that begins "Dear Mr/Mrs/Ms So-and-so".

"Yours faithfully" ends a letter that begins "Dear sir/madam".

Note the capitalisation.

MrP

Re: motivation letter, please check it

Yohanna — Thu, 24 Nov 2005 08:57:54 GMT

Hi,

I looked through my spelling and corrected it.

Check my english, please!

Thanks, Yohanna

Dear Sir or Madam!

I would like to apply for the autumn course starting form August 2006 with a full scholarship if possible.

Let me introduce myself. I am a *** year old student from ***. I live in a capital of ***. I am a student at *** University, facultaty of social sciences and economy. It is a very famous and acknowledged school in the country. I learn sociology and economics.

The most important things in my life is my family and friends. I try to live a healthy life so if I have got enough time I gladly go in for sports. I love going out, travelling and meeting with new people. In my school I am the member of the student self-government. It is a very hard, but exciting work. We organize the school programs for example the celebrate of first-years-students.

Recently I have learned of your special *** system through a friend, and I am extremely interested in it. I decided to apply for admission to a ***. I have seen many schools website on the net, and I have to admit, it was very difficult to choose one. There is a wide variety of all kinds of subjects, that made me curious of learning more about other fieldsâ¦

In *** there are no ***. I am so curious about the *** education- system. I would like to go and study in *** because I can improve my english, I can learn about *** and *** culture and I am so intrested in it. I am interested in *** culture and history and â of course â in social sciences, in sociology and in international relationships. Your subjects are very alluring to me. I have chosen your school among many others, because I found the description of the school and the possible subjects very attractive to me. I think it offers a great choice for me to build up international personal relations and to test myself in foreign surroundings. To spend a few months at your *** would be a great possibility for me to learn a new culture and meet people from all around the world.

Finally, I would like to ask for financial support (a full scholarship) to my educational fee, because unfortunately my family can not afford to finance my semester abroad.

Thank you for considering my application. I am really looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Please help with my letter of motivation....

Anonymous — Tue, 15 Nov 2005 02:17:17 GMT

I'm studying medicine in Germany and I would like to do a clinical elective in Malta next summer. For this, I need to write a "Letter of Motivation"....and I would greatly appreciate some help. I will send the letter to a central organization that will forward the application to various hospitals, that's why I don't know the name of the contact person or the name of the hospital....therefore I had to use the expression "your hospital" which sounds a bit weird to me....do you have any suggestions which expression I could use instead?

It would also be great if someone could correct spelling or grammar mistakes....and don't hesitate to tell me when I have written some silly crap that should be removed or rewritten. I would also be thankful for some suggestion of what I could add....

Thanks a lot, Moritz

Enough talk, here's my letter:

Dear madam or sir,chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

I am a 4^th year student of medicine at the Ludwig-Maximilians-University of Munich in Germany. I would like to apply for an elective period of 30 days in September 2006 in your hospital.>>

I have completed electives in internal medicine, rheumatology and psychiatry, but I would like to do my fourth and final elective period in surgery, a subject in which I already have some experience: I did my alternative civilian service in the emergency room of the surgical university hospital of Heidelberg for 13 months. I learned a lot about clinical work during this time, and the experiences I had there were one of the reasons that made me decide to study medicine. I regularly do nightshifts in a surgical ward in the university hospital of Munich as a part-time job besides my studies.>>

I would like to do a clinical elective abroad to learn more about hospital organisation, provision of medical care and medical education outside Germany. I am considering to specialize in surgery after I have qualified as a M.D. and I think it would be very interesting for me to learn about surgical practice in other countries.>>

I hope to learn a lot from clinical staff in your hospital and to be present at rounds and in the operation theatre. I could help with physical examination, history taking, drawing blood and other procedures during my elective period. >>

I also have some experience in medical care because I worked as a paramedic in Hamburg and as a facilitator for disabled people in London before I started studying medicine.>>

I am reasonably familiar with laboratory work which is required for my doctoral thesis in heart surgery. The topic of my doctoral thesis is the comparision of a new kind of coronary artery bypass graft with established grafts through various methods.>>

I would like to do my elective period in Malta both because fellow students who went there have spoken highly of their clerkships and because I am fascinated by Maltaâs culture and history. I went there for holidays four years ago and I would like to return for a longer time, hopefully next summer. >>

Yours faithfully,