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Six weeks leave application

Ariya — Wed, 26 Dec 2007 13:50:39 GMT

Hello All,

Please kindly review and comment this letter below.

Thank you so much,

Ariya

26 December 2007

The Nursing Manager

Prince Alfred Hospital

Re: Leave Application

Dear Madam,

This is to inform you that my family and I have been going through intense mental stress for a while, due to living separately in different countries. I believe that this is the right moment for me to apply for my husband and son to immigrate to Australia and to end this misery once for all.

For this reason, I would like to request for a leave of six weeks, which will include two weeks of annual leave and four weeks of unpaid leave. Would you be so kind in approving my leave, which will be from 01 March 2007 to 06 April 2007? I will be in Jakarta during this time and hopefully, I will be able to come back to Australia with my family before the end of my leave.

Thank you in advance for your compassionate and understanding in this matter.

Yours faithfully,

Mega

Re: Please check my cover letter! Help me not to loose my golden chance!!!!

Feebs11 — Fri, 25 May 2007 14:23:27 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
I got to know about this summer school very recently, and the deadline for the application is the 2nd of June, so I don't have a lot of time for writing a good cover letter... And I can't even say I'm experienced in it. I badly need someone's help!!!!

All the opinions are welcome!

Here is my first draft:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to apply for the Summer Course 2007 in English and Diplomatic Discourse in ***.

I graduated in Political Science in July 2004 from the Moscow State University of International Relations. Having completed my Bachelorâs degree programme and doing ["done"? - ie, have you completed your Master's? If not, then "programme, and I am now doing/following"] a Masterâs degree programme in International Relations, so I am eager for a new experience of study with the Summer Course.

This course is of intense interest to me because I am confident that when I finish my studies I will have the skills, knowledge, and contacts that will enable me to pursue a career in the Russian Ministry of Foreign Affaires. To be successful in my chosen profession, I must know all the ins and outs of diplomatic discourse and be fluent in English. Consequently, this course is the best I can ever find.[Are you saying it is the best you have been able to find, the most apposite course you have found, or that it is the one that best fits into your educational plans? I think you need to be more specific.)

I have a passion for studying English and am especially interested in further developing my language skills in areas connected with diplomacy and politics. I must say without false modesty that I am possessed of great ability in studying languages. When I laid down the aim to enter the Moscow State University of International Relations, which is one of the top 5 universities in Russia, in less than two years from a zero level [knowledge] of English I came to the level that allowed me to pass a highly competitive exam with a mark sufficient to gain a scholarship for the whole period of studies. In the university I chose English as a first language (we have to choose at least two) which means that I had 10 academic hours of English a week, including both general English and political translation. Last summer I passed the State Exam in English (the last one before the graduation) with the highest mark possible. And I cannot even say it was extremely difficult as studing English is a great pleasure for me.

Finally, what else am I supposed to be equipped with besides the above mentioned? A good luck perhaps.{I am not sure this is a good idea! - Better to reiterate that you will value the chance of an interesting experience, and are ready to answer any questions they may have.}

Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Irina Eliseeva.

Re: Please Send me the Detailed Experience Letter format for S/W Developer

Anonymous — Tue, 20 Feb 2007 12:40:37 GMT

Format 1:
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Whom it may concern

This is to certify that â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦work under â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦ company as a Marketing Executive form 2nd July 05 to 15th Sep 05. During the service he was very

punctual about his job. I wish him best of luck.

Thanks/Regards

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Format 2:
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To whom it may concern:
This is to certify that â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦worked for â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦ Company as a marketing executive from July to September 2005. During this employment he was

very punctual in his job. I wish him the best of luck.

Yours faithfully,

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Format 3:
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To whom It May Concern

This is to inform you that Mr.---------------------------------------------as a post name -company name

was doing a Senior Specialist level work in our Project in ---------------company. During her tenure he was responsible for monitoring day to day functions of

the Project, supervising and guiding the project team, monitoring and evaluating the progress. He was actively involved in the day to day administration of

the activities, appraisal of staff performance, coordinating and managing the overall performance of the staff. She was also responsible for managing the

----------------------and Supervised the ------------------Programme .His technical skill and performance was to the best of our

satisfaction.chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

We are sure he will perform his duties with this experience in his >>

future Jobs and we are happy to recommend him for any responsible >>

position in computerfield. We wish him all the best.

You can modify according to your details

Company Name------

Designation----------

start date---------

End Date-----------

job responsibilities

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Format 4:
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TO Whomsoever it may concern

Date:

This will confirm that <applicant name> was employed as <position>
with <Previous company name> from <date join> through <date end>.

I am familiar with Mr./Ms. <applicant>âs duties, because I am/was serving at <company name> from <date start> through <current/date end> in the position

of <position of person who is giving reference>. In this capacity, I had responsibility for monitoring Mr./Ms. <applicant>âs activities during his tenure at

<company name>.

His duties during this time included:
-Copy the responsibilities from labor application

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely,

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Format 5
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This is quite long? Perhaps you need to cut it down a little bit. If you put in too much shameless self-promotion then it is obvious that the letter was written

by you rather than your company. Companies tend to take a dry attitude to these things.

EXPERIENCE CERTIFICATE

May 0000000

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Mr. MH was employed by ABC from 02.01.2001 till 01.03.06. ABC has almost 350 employees .During his final year Mr MH was a Project

Manager of the Software Development Section, which has 60 employees.Mr. MH is a responsible, hard working and honest person. The management was

highly pleased and satisfied with his performance.

Mr. MH joined us as a Junior Software Engineer in January 2001 and his duties included development using Microsoft Technologies such as Visual Basic 6.0,

ASP (Active Server Pages), XML and Microsoft SQL Server. He also took part in designing and documenting the project with UML (Rational Rose 2000).
It is our company policy that we have a 6 month probation period for new hirings but on the basis of his performance and good technical skills, his

employment was confirmed within 3 months.

In September 2001, Mr MH worked in a team to develop a paperless virtual back office system for the UK based company; APL Pvt. Ltd. In January 2002, he

was promoted to Software Engineer and his new responsibilites were: preparing the Detail Design Specification document, communicating design with

other developers, participating in development by Microsoft SQL Server 2000, VB 6.0, XML, ASP and UML, project documentation and client meetings.

In August 2002, we won another UK contract to develop the accounting, payroll and financial systems for GGP PLC. We held an in-house competition (is that

really the right word?)to choose the team to work on the account. Mr. MH was among top three employees in that competition so he was put in the team as

Senior Software Engineer. Now his responsibilities were: correspondence with our UK clients, understanding their requirements, preparing the documents,

designing the system, getting approval from the client and developing it. He used ASP and SQL Server 2000.

In 2003, Mr MH was promoted to Team Leader for a major software project that involved computerisation of land records in Pakistan. His responsibilities

were: meeting with clients to prepare the specification document, functional specification, project plan, maintaining schedules for rest of the team members,

designing the architecture of the applications and managing the whole team..

In October 2004,we participated in GITEX in Dubai, and we selected Mr MH to represent us there.

In November 2004 we started developing a product named UREMIS and keeping in view the leadership, motivating, analytical and designing capabilities of

Mr. MH, he was appointed its Project Manager. He was responsible for the recruitment of the team, monitoring day to day functions of the project, defining

standards and processes, supervising and guiding the project team, monitoring and evaluating the progress. He was actively involved in the day to day

administration of the activities, appraisal of staff performance, coordinating and managing the overall performance of the staff. He was then involved in

presenting the product to prospective clients and won several accounts for us.

Since he has been employed by us, MR MH has shown an excellent attitude to his work, has been a popular member of our team, and contributed to our

success. By implementing a continuous improvement strategy he has made his department an example for the other departments. He has proved a good

trainer and mentor for his staff. He has redesigned and reengineered the software development infrastructure and procedures to meet the intense and ever

increasing demand of latest technologies of Information technology.

Due to his skills, commitment and continued hard work, we wish him success in his ambitions.

For ABC (Pvt) Ltd

XYZ
Human Resource Manager.

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The name says it all.

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01-06-2006, 4:57 PM Post :231492
Haris66

Posts 10
Junior Member
Joined on 31-05-2006
Pakistan
Re: Please review my experience letter

thanks alot nona, it makes more sense now.

Nona The Brit wrote:

This is quite long? Perhaps you need to cut it down a little bit. If you put in too much shameless self-promotion then it is obvious that the letter was written

by you rather than your company. Companies tend to take a dry attitude to these things.

I have come across very few HR departments os small-medium sized companies who have enough time to write experience letters so they ask for the text,

modify it if they feel necessary, print and sign it

In August 2002, we won another UK contract to develop the accounting, payroll and financial systems for GGP PLC. We held an in-house competition (is that

really the right word?)

yes it did happen. Actually it was outsourcing contract and our client wanted to test the people who were going to work for them. So basically the test was

conducted online by our client. Do you think that this point is giving negative sense to the company?

In October 2004,we participated in GITEX in Dubai, and we selected Mr MH to represent us there.

This is showing that the company pariticipated GITEX as a visitor, whereas we participated as exhibitors and I selected to go along with my boss.

thanks again!!

Report

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Re: yet another Letter of Motivation to be ispected under the magnifying glass

Lil' Ruby Rose — Fri, 12 Jan 2007 18:58:30 GMT

I am writing to apply as an exchange student for the Communication Design Program at the School of Architecture and Design for the fall semester 2008. I am a Bulgarian student attending my third semester of "Digital Media" studies at the University of Applied Science in Bremen, Germany. Since I would like to devote my life to improving intercultural communication by means of interactive art and media, I strongly believe that the experience of studying abroad will help me to further develop myself and my knowledge.

My flair for arts is by blood. in my blood. I grew up in my motherâs atelier, who is an artist herself, getting to know all different kinds of art. [Sounds a little clunky. Could you say: My mother is an artist, and I grew up in her studio (atelier only used if she is a dressmaker or works in couture)] During my high school years, I supported my mother with developing trademarks for different companies. My task was the technical realization on computer, thus I could easily learn the fundamentals of conventional and professional software.

A decisive step for my further evolution [not quite the right word here] was the year I spent as an exchange student in the eleventh grade in Germany. During this year I took part in diverse seminars organized by YFU (Youth For Understanding), which whose main goal was to make communication between cultures easier. The most important seminar I took part in was "Communication and Media", which was held ran for two weeks in Berlin. I visited some of the biggest news agencies and print houses and actively took part in the working process of printing a magazine issue. This experience of communicating with people from different cultures bent [not the right word - what did you mean here?]with the media impressions [not sure of your meaning - media contacts, perhaps?] I made, clearly pointed out my future way direction

After graduating high school I was self-dependent independent and self-confident enough to carry out my studies in a foreign country. Considering my affinity to arts and languages I applied for "Digital Media", because it combines both design and media competence. I experienced my first year as a great inspiration.The first year was a great inspiration to me. In the first and second term we learnt the fundamentals of design and computer science by means of theoretical and practical exercises. Courses like "Theory of Media" and "Media Engineering" have put the basis of forged my understanding what media actually is.
As I consider myself more as of an art ['art' generally means 'fine art', 'arts' encompasses new media studies] student I have focused on lectures at the University of Applied Arts in the current third semester. I have enrolled in a bachelor-project for the Syne-Institute (part of this university), which ends in summer 2008. We have an assignment to build up create a new identity[or image? logo?] of for a local Radio and TV sender. broadcaster? service? I am really enjoying the process of bringing up [not the right word here] a new image [not quite sure what you mean here?]of a company: briefing, analyzing, developing and presenting ideas for a real client.

Working on various projects, reading, and holding out giving / making presentations, made me realize how essential media and digital technology are nowadays. I am permanently seeking challenges and trying to find a way not just to be a part of this modern world, but actively change it. I have a clear vision for what I want to achieve through my study - I want to be able to create innovative, interactive and entertaining systems for the different walks of life [not quite the right phrase here]. I am confident in my personality and my skills, but I recognized that my knowledge in some areas is limited. I therefore have chosen your program, because it suits my interests and needs most.

I have carefully read the descriptions of your courses and since I am attracted from to the topic of design and communication, I have found [using the past tense here implies you have already taken these courses. Perhaps say, I would find ]the following highly interesting: âDesign, Media and Cultureâ, âCommunication and Interactionâ, âProduction Process of Communication Designâ and âCombining Mediaâ. I would like to visit take / follow these courses [I think in AmE you could say classes here to avoid repetition - check with one of the native US speakers on the site?] , because they will enrich my knowledge and help me put it bring it to a higher standard [or, help me deepen my understanding ]. It would be a great pleasure for me to study in Thailand, not only because of the course variety. I am eager to meet experience such a distant culture [perhaps, a culture so different from my own] and take the best make the most of the time I ~~will~~ spend there.

I hope will you consider my application and can regard will view me as a favorable candidate to for this program.

Yours faithfully,
Ivan Yanev

Re: complaint letter

Feebs11 — Mon, 04 Dec 2006 20:47:01 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
hello all,

I'm trying to write a complaint letter as an exercise to improve my writing, Would you mind to correct it ???

Thank you in advance.

Customer Care Manager

Capital Rail

Dear Sir or Madam,

      I am writing to express my concern about the fact that the last week, due to the trains' [OR the daily delay of the trains] daily delay, I was late for attend [delete ] my Marketing Course in London every day. Indeed, on the worst day I missed two of the three classes in which I should be present. I understand that the cause of these delays is the severe weather conditions. The heavy snowfalls all over the week have provoked a huge traffic chaos.

      In spite of this extreme situation, this point could not be the excuse to [is no excuse for] the poor service you provided. First of all, no information was given to the passengers while we were stranded on the open-air railway platforms. Secondly, we were trapped inside the wagons [carriages] without lighting and heating, and due to the intense cold I have now the symptoms of pneumonia. And finally, to my surprise, when I demanded to[ asked] the Station staff for the rail vouchers to get the value of the 50% of the journey made, they told me (and told the rest of the passengers) that no electronic device runs properly and as a result no document can be hand out [the electronic machines were also not running and that no documents would be produced].

      To resolve the problem of my course faults, I require you to contact with [I request that you contact] the Marketing School in London and write to them a letter [delete] explaining the reason for my delays. Furthermore, I claim the economical [financial] compensation you promise in your information leaflet, that in cases of a delay for more than one hour it is supposed that I can get [I can claim for 50% of the] value of the 50% of the journey made the [cost of that journey].

      I look forward to hearing from you and to a resolution of these problems. Enclosed are copies of the relevant train tickets. Please contact me at the above address or by phone.

      Yours faithfully,

Re: Urgent : correct my leave application ASAP

Nef — Sat, 16 Sep 2006 22:10:56 GMT

Neurodoc wrote:

Hi,

        I am a medical resident from india. Due to intense work pressure & family problems I need to take a break & applying for a unpaid leave ( extra ordinary leave ) of two and half months. Kindly rectify it ............... Thanks

To,

The Director,

Institute name, Location

                                                 Through proper channel

                                              sub: Application for Extra ordinary leave

Respected Sir,

                         This is to inform you that, I, Dr. Name, Position, Department, am going through intense mental stress due some personal and family affairs. I need some time for my family to sort things out. I shall be highly obliged if permit me to proceed to an extra ordinary leave for two and half months starting from 1.10.2006.

                                                                                                                    Thanking you,

                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully,

                                                                                                                            Sd

Urgent : correct my leave application ASAP

Hi,

I am a medical resident from india. Due to intense work pressure & family problems I need to take a break & applying for a unpaid leave ( extra ordinary leave ) of two and half months. Kindly rectify it ............... Thanks

To,

The Director,

Institute name, Location

Through proper channel (?)

sub: Application for Extraordinary Leave

Respected Sir,

This is to inform you that, I, Dr. Name, Position, Department, am going through intense mental stress due to some personal and family affairs. I need some time for my family to sort things out. I shall be highly obliged if you can permit me to ~~proceed to~~ take an extraordinary leave for two and half months, starting from 1.10.2006.

Thank~~ing~~ you,.

Yours faithfully,

__________________

From www.dictionary.com

extraordinary

âadjective

1.	beyond what is usual, ordinary, regular, or established: extraordinary costs.

2.	exceptional in character, amount, extent, degree, etc.; noteworthy; remarkable: extraordinary speed; an extraordinary man.

(â¦another definition)

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If the place where you works uses extra ordinary instead of extraordinary, you should keep extra ordinary.

I am in the US and people here talk about taking a leave. If that usage isn't common where you are, I think you should use whatever term will be easiest to understand.

re: 1.10.2006 In many places, as you know, this means October 1, 2006. In a few places, including the US, it means January 10, 2006. October 1, in the US, is 10.1.2006 or 10/1/2006. (I don't know where you are, so I thought I should mention this.)

Also, I'm wondering if you would be more likely to get the extraordinary leave if you gave more details about your situation.

If extraordinary leave isn't always unpaid, it might be a good idea to add that information to the body of your letter.

Other people may have other suggestions.

Urgent : correct my leave application ASAP

Neurodoc — Sat, 16 Sep 2006 16:55:27 GMT

Hi,

To,

The Director,

Institute name, Location

Through proper channel

sub: Application for Extra ordinary leave

Respected Sir,

This is to inform you that, I, Dr. Name, Position, Department, am going through intense mental stress due some personal and family affairs. I need some time for my family to sort things out. I shall be highly obliged if permit me to proceed to an extra ordinary leave for two and half months starting from 1.10.2006.

Thanking you,

Yours faithfully,

Please help me fix my covering letter

bongo — Sun, 14 Nov 2004 21:56:25 GMT

Hi Im looking for job in interior design right now.
English is my second language for me, I need some help to correct my covering letter,
may be some sentense doesn't make sence but please don't hesitate to comment on it.
thank you very much for taking your time.

Dear Ms. S Lewise

I am writing to apply for a trainee position at your office. Because I am passionate about the subject of interior design and would like to contribute my skills to your office .Please find my attached resume.

After graduating from BTEC HND Interior design at Guild Hall University, I attended BA Interior and spatial design from Chelsea College of Art and Design. My early part of studying, projects were concentrated to work on hand drawings such as perspective details and sketches. Now I have huge confident to use drawing techniques. Later I advanced to study to expressing my ideas and concepts using 3 dimensional computer models and I became efficient in skill.

In addition, my work experience includes working in the antique gallery as well as working in furniture design office. Although both positions were a little different field from my chosen profession, I benefited from the experience. More specifically, I learned to achieve aesthetical sense of towards to design and use of materials, and also importance of team management.

I am very ambitious and able to adapt easily to different situations.

I look forward to meet you. If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me on 020 ......... / 0777 ......... I will contact you in two weeks time as follow up to this letter.

Yours faithfully,