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scholarship application letter, HELP!!

Anonymous — Tue, 26 Aug 2008 19:17:06 GMT

Hay,

I have to write a application letter to get a grant for my tuition but since I'm not a native english speaker I would greatly appreciate it when someone would check this out and give me some comments.
thank you 100 times

Dear sir/ Madam,

With this letter, I would like to apply for the *** tuition for the *** program in at *** in ***, which will start October 2nd 2008.
I studied ***, from 2001-2005, at The Haarlem Business School in Holland, where I obtained a bachelorâs degree. In 2005/ 2006 I attended the 8 week *** program at the *** UNI.
Those 8 weeks changed my life. It became clear to me that filmmaking really is my passion and that this is what I want to do the rest of my life. I learned so much in just 8 weeks, much more then I imagined possible in such a short time. After the filmmaking program I worked as an intern at a film in NY: ***(title film)
This helped me to enhance my theoretical knowledge with practical experiences. The film won the Sundance film festival in 200..., which made it an extra special experience having worked on it.
In 2007 I moved to *** where I learned Spanish and worked on a film project at NAME productions. In that period I also developed a love for movie trailers. They can make us laugh, thrill us, anger us, and leave us with goose bumps all within two minutes. I see it as a challenge to leave an impression or feeling behind in such a short time.
Making a good trailer can be the start of making a good movie as trailers can be used to raise funding for a film before it is even shot.
It can be the way for me to achieve my goal; starting small and eventually make it big.

During my travels I started writing down my ideas and experiences with the intention of getting them on screen. I came to the subtle realization that I do not know or understand nearly as much as I would like to or have envisioned myself knowing. There is much more I need to learn to realize my dream and direct those stories into good movies. I want to be the best I can be and as a woman I feel the need to prove myself even more since the majority of great directors consists of men.
But when people ask me why I choose such a difficult line of work to get into my answer is a standard one: I chose film, because I believe I can excel in it.

I want to go to *** because I am interested in exploring the world, looking for opportunities. The knowledge, skills and experiences that I benefit from the *** program will contribute greatly to my future career. A terrific benefit of this course is not only to boost chance of my future international career but also I will have opportunities to meet people from various nations and cultures, offering me different points of view and contributing to my flexibility and creativity, besides the cultural and language gains. I believe that life is not just about sitting and planning rather it is more importantly, about going out and implementing.
The *** at UNI is one of the few that offers me the opportunity to enhance my knowledge in film in such a way that I would be ready to make a real contribution to the industry after one year, opposed to other universities where the film programs mainly take two years or more. This is not only impossible financially but I prefer the practical way of learning that is offered UNI.

There is one blockage at this stage, in my having a great learning experience at UNI: funding of expenses. At this point in my life I am independent and responsible for my own expenses. It is very difficult for me to raise funds from any organizations, as they mainly fund students who are Canadian or US Citizens. As for Dutch organizations it is hard to get funding for a private learning facility like UNI. A second problem is my living expenses. I have a student visa; therefore I will not be able to work in the US during my year in school. I will have to invest a great part of my savings in living expenses. My stay is partly being funded through a student loan taken from the Dutch Government. Hence, I would certainly need financial aid in the form of a grant to help pay for my tuition.

I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant and a beneficiary of the *** Grant for the 2008-2009 programs. I am confident that I am qualified and will get everything out of my time at the UNI.
I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favorable consideration.

Yours faithfully

Re: Motivation Letter! Need help

Anonymous — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 22:23:37 GMT

This is the letter i 've tryed to write. Could anyone please correct it and give me any advices? Thank uu!!

Dear Sir/Madam,

I write to express my interest in enrolling on the Msc in Management, which is offered by *** University.

I am very goal-oriented, open-minded and communicative girl, always ready for new challenge.

I graduated in Marketing and Business Management at *** in *** in (month). Even if I am still really interested in marketing subjects, I decided to apply to a Master in Management because my belief is that it could complete my theorical education in the best way, giving me a more complete preparation to be capable of working in different fields. ( I MEAN NOT ONLY MARKETING BUT I DONâT KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN THE CONCEPT!!)A Msc in Management will be an excellent springboard for my future career and will provide me the basis and confidence to realize my dreams. I am convinced that in order to be competitive itâs important acquire more specialized knowledge: specialization in Management would strengthen my knowledge and help me forward with my career aim, that consists in working in a large, attractive company as a manager, preferably in an international context.

This is one of the reason why Iâve chosen to continue my studies in an English program. In addiction, I am aware of the fact that education away from home could provide me the experience of discovering new ways of growing and giving and is an increased responsibility that can contribute to a more wide way of thinking, behaving and viewing.

I believe that at Your University I could achieve what I dream of, thatâs why learning in it would be an honour for me.

I thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to receiving your decision.

Yours faithfully,

***

Grant application letter

colorada — Fri, 22 Aug 2008 18:34:17 GMT

Hay,

I have to write a application letter to get a grant for my tuition but since I'm not a native english speaker I would greatly appreciate it when someone would check this out and give me some comments.
thank you 100 times

Hay,

I'm applying for a tuition application and since I'm not from the US I'm not really sure how to.
I made a first draft and I would greatly appreciate it if someone would take a look at it and tell me if it's a good one or leave some comments.
Many thanks!!!

Dear sir/ Madam,

With this letter, I would like to apply for the *** tuition for the *** program in at *** in ***, which will start October 2nd 2008.
I studied ***, from 2001-2005, at The Haarlem Business School in Holland, where I obtained a bachelorâs degree. In 2005/ 2006 I attended the 8 week *** program at the *** UNI.
Those 8 weeks changed my life. It became clear to me that filmmaking really is my passion and that this is what I want to do the rest of my life. I learned so much in just 8 weeks, much more then I imagined possible in such a short time. After the filmmaking program I worked as an intern at a film in NY: ***(title film)                                                                                                                       This helped me to enhance my theoretical knowledge with practical experiences. The film won the Sundance film festival in 200..., which made it an extra special experience having worked on it.
In 2007 I moved to *** where I learned Spanish and worked on a film project at NAME productions. In that period I also developed a love for movie trailers. They can make us laugh, thrill us, anger us, and leave us with goose bumps all within two minutes. I see it as a challenge to leave an impression or feeling behind in such a short time.
Making a good trailer can be the start of making a good movie as trailers can be used to raise funding for a film before it is even shot.
It can be the way for me to achieve my goal; starting small and eventually make it big.

During my travels I started writing down my ideas and experiences with the intention of getting them on screen. I came to the subtle realization that I do not know or understand nearly as much as I would like to or have envisioned myself knowing. There is much more I need to learn to realize my dream and direct those stories into good movies. I want to be the best I can be and as a woman I feel the need to prove myself even more since the majority of great directors consists of men.
But when people ask me why I choose such a difficult line of work to get into my answer is a standard one: I chose film, because I believe I can excel in it.

I want to go to *** because I am interested in exploring the world, looking for opportunities. The knowledge, skills and experiences that I benefit from the *** program will contribute greatly to my future career. A terrific benefit of this course is not only to boost chance of my future international career but also I will have opportunities to meet people from various nations and cultures, offering me different points of view and contributing to my flexibility and creativity, besides the cultural and language gains. I believe that life is not just about sitting and planning rather it is more importantly, about going out and implementing.
The *** at UNI is one of the few that offers me the opportunity to enhance my knowledge in film in such a way that I would be ready to make a real contribution to the industry after one year, opposed to other universities where the film programs mainly take two years or more. This is not only impossible financially but I prefer the practical way of learning that is offered UNI.

There is one blockage at this stage, in my having a great learning experience at UNI: funding of expenses. At this point in my life I am independent and responsible for my own expenses. It is very difficult for me to raise funds from any organizations, as they mainly fund students who are Canadian or US Citizens. As for Dutch organizations it is hard to get funding for a private learning facility like UNI. A second problem is my living expenses. I have a student visa; therefore I will not be able to work in the US during my year in school. I will have to invest a great part of my savings in living expenses. My stay is partly being funded through a student loan taken from the Dutch Government. Hence, I would certainly need financial aid in the form of a grant to help pay for my tuition.

I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant and a beneficiary of the *** Grant for the 2008-2009 programs. I am confident that I am qualified and will get everything out of my time at the UNI.
I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favorable consideration.

Yours faithfully

grant application letter

colorada — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 18:00:35 GMT

Hay,

I'm applying for a tuition application and since I'm not from the US I'm not really sure how to.
I made a first draft and I would greatly appreciate it if someone would take a look at it and tell me if it's a good one or leave some comments.
Many thanks!!!

Dear sir/ Madam,

With this letter, I would like to apply for the *** tuition for the *** program in at *** in ***, which will start October 2nd 2008.
I studied ***, from 2001-2005, at The Haarlem Business School in Holland, where I obtained a bachelorâs degree. In 2005/ 2006 I attended the 8 week *** program at the *** UNI.
Those 8 weeks changed my life. It became clear to me that filmmaking really is my passion and that this is what I want to do the rest of my life. I learned so much in just 8 weeks, much more then I imagined possible in such a short time. After the filmmaking program I worked as an intern at a film in NY: ***(title film)                                                                                                                       This helped me to enhance my theoretical knowledge with practical experiences. The film won the Sundance film festival in 200..., which made it an extra special experience having worked on it.
In 2007 I moved to *** where I learned Spanish and worked on a film project at NAME productions. In that period I also developed a love for movie trailers. They can make us laugh, thrill us, anger us, and leave us with goose bumps all within two minutes. I see it as a challenge to leave an impression or feeling behind in such a short time.
Making a good trailer can be the start of making a good movie as trailers can be used to raise funding for a film before it is even shot.
It can be the way for me to achieve my goal; starting small and eventually make it big.

During my travels I started writing down my ideas and experiences with the intention of getting them on screen. I came to the subtle realization that I do not know or understand nearly as much as I would like to or have envisioned myself knowing. There is much more I need to learn to realize my dream and direct those stories into good movies. I want to be the best I can be and as a woman I feel the need to prove myself even more since the majority of great directors consists of men.
But when people ask me why I choose such a difficult line of work to get into my answer is a standard one: I chose film, because I believe I can excel in it.

I want to go to *** because I am interested in exploring the world, looking for opportunities. The knowledge, skills and experiences that I benefit from the *** program will contribute greatly to my future career. A terrific benefit of this course is not only to boost chance of my future international career but also I will have opportunities to meet people from various nations and cultures, offering me different points of view and contributing to my flexibility and creativity, besides the cultural and language gains. I believe that life is not just about sitting and planning rather it is more importantly, about going out and implementing.
The *** at UNI is one of the few that offers me the opportunity to enhance my knowledge in film in such a way that I would be ready to make a real contribution to the industry after one year, opposed to other universities where the film programs mainly take two years or more. This is not only impossible financially but I prefer the practical way of learning that is offered UNI.

There is one blockage at this stage, in my having a great learning experience at UNI: funding of expenses. At this point in my life I am independent and responsible for my own expenses. It is very difficult for me to raise funds from any organizations, as they mainly fund students who are Canadian or US Citizens. As for Dutch organizations it is hard to get funding for a private learning facility like UNI. A second problem is my living expenses. I have a student visa; therefore I will not be able to work in the US during my year in school. I will have to invest a great part of my savings in living expenses. My stay is partly being funded through a student loan taken from the Dutch Government. Hence, I would certainly need financial aid in the form of a grant to help pay for my tuition.

I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant and a beneficiary of the *** Grant for the 2008-2009 programs. I am confident that I am qualified and will get everything out of my time at the UNI.
I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favorable consideration.

Yours faithfully

Help with writing a letter to GP's

annab — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 09:45:40 GMT

Hi,

Could I please ask you to review my letter and indicate what needs to be changed in order for this to come across as a letter from a professional. I am professional and qualified in what I do, I am just not so good with words. I am an alternative health practitioner (Ayurveda) and I want to write to all the GP's where I live to introduce myself and let them know what I am doing.

Thanking you in advance
AnnaB

Dear Dr

I am writing to introduce my self to you, (my name). I am an Ayurvedic practitioner and have a clinic at ??? medical centre where I see patients for health promotion and wellness, and for improved health. I qualified in 2005 after taking a 3 year degree in Ayurveda at ?? University. I then spent time in India gaining practical experience.

As I am now seeing more and more clients, and some maybe patients of yours, I thought I should advise you of what I am doing.

Ayurveda is the world's oldest scientific system of natural medicine, having its heritage in ancient India. It is formally recognized by the World Health Organisation and is known to be a complete health care system, which emphasizes prevention of disease, as well as promotion of health and longevity.

Ayurveda holds that the primary force in the causation of disease is imbalance resulting from disruption of homeostasis or immunity. Ayurveda does not separate mind from body and places equal importance on mental, emotional, and behavioural factors, which are seen as critical in the development of imbalances, hence disease.

Ayurveda tells us that every creation inclusive of a human being is a model of the universe. In this model, the basic matter and the dynamic forces (Dosha) of the nature determine health and disease, and also determine the medicinal value of any substance (plant and mineral). The Ayurvedic practices, chiefly that of diet, life style, herbal preparation, massage, and meditation, aim to maintain the Dosha equilibrium. Therapy is customised to the individual's constitution (Prakruti). Numerous Ayurvedic medicines (plants in particular) have been tested for their biological and clinical potential using modern validation, and thereby setting an interface with modern medicine.

There have been much research on the viability of Ayurvedic herbs to the cure of diseases like AIDS, Cancer, Tuberculosis etc., these experiments have met with great success. However, my current experience would allow me to refer more seriously ill patients to their GP and/or a more qualified Ayurvedic doctor.

Should you wish to know more about me or Ayurveda I would be delighted to hear from you.

Yours faithfully

Re: PLEASE CHECK MY LETTER OF MOTIVATION

optilang — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 14:49:34 GMT

Hi, and welcome!

Dear Sir/ Madam,

The game of supply and demand is a never-ending developed process. This development asks organizations to change or to innovate. Organizations must manage the challenge of modern technology and even challenge it. Organizations must also exploit opportunities to preserve or to create a good market position. In short, organizations should be high-quality managed where are among other things focusing on internal and external environments factors.

The process of supply and demand is on-going, and, as such, requires organisations to both adapt and innovate. Organisations must meet the challenge of modern technology and, at times, challenge it themselves. They must also be able to exploit opportunities to create or maintain a good position in the market. In short, organisations need high quality management where the focus is on the internal and external environment.

Paid attention to the dynamic of the businessworld and my own passion in the business and management field , hereby I would like to apply to the master program Business Administration, track Innovation and Entrepreneurship that starts in September XYEAR.

I have a passion for business and, in particular, management, so I would like to apply for the master program Business Administration, Track Innovation and Entrepreneurship that starts in September 200?

In XYEAR I graduated as a bachelor of Management Economics and Law from the XCOLLEGE. This study has created for me an firmly broad basis in three converging fields. After my study I have worked about XY years at the municipality *** as YYconsultant, like my resume shows. And now I want to develop further on scientific level within my interest field, namely business and management. Whit this I would like to gain broader and more focused opportunities in the labour market.

I graduated as a Bachelor of Management, Economics and Law from XYZ college in YEAR. My studies have given me a solid foundation in three converging fields. Since finishing my studies I have been working as a consultant at ***, and I would now like to develop, on a scientific level, two of the main areas of interest to me, namely, business and management.

I have the ambition to work in a manager function. Therefore I need an academic foundation. During the master program I would like to obtain the following knowledge. How to look, to analyze, to solve and to implement from different angles changes of management situation. In other words how to develop solutions with scientific methods and insights for complex company problems and how to implement changes and innovations. Also to recognize and review opportunities and how to develop and implement business concepts. Furthermore I want obtain insights with the gathered knowledge, to let business processes as efficiently and effectively as possible to proceed, with a view to quality and quantity of services and products.

I have the ambition to work as a manager, but I need the academic foundation. During the course, I hope to learn about how to look at, analyse, solve and implement, from different angles, the changes in management. In other words how to develop solutions with scientific methods and insights for complex company problems and how to implement changes and innovations. Also to recognize and review opportunities and how to develop and implement business concepts. Furthermore I want to gain insights from the course as to how to let changes in business proceed as efficiently and effectively as possible, with a view to maintaining the quality and quantity of services and products.

During the master thesis I would like to apply the acquired knowledge of the master Business Administration. There for I would like to use scientific methods, techniques, theories and skills. The idea for the master thesis lies within my aimed field of work, namely: Designing a business concept for a company, such as the creation of an business-unit or the (re)designing of an innovation process.

During the master thesis I would like to apply the knowledge acquired from the master Business Administration course. Therefore, I would like to use scientific methods, techniques, theories and skills. The idea for the master thesis lies within my intended field of work, namely: Designing a business concept for a company, such as the creation of an business-unit or the (re)designing of an innovation process.

As you can see in my resume I speak ZY languages including English. My goal for the future is to develop these and other foreign languages. I see myself as an enthusiastic, positive, open minded, empathy, social, independent and ambitious individual. I am prepared to work hard to achieve all goals that I have set for myself. Till now I have accomplished my goals. My next goal is to get accepted for this master program and obtain an master degree in Business Administration. I have set this goal for myself and I will do everything I can do to achieve it.

As you can see in my resume I speak ZY languages including English. My goal for the future is to develop these and other foreign languages. I see myself as an enthusiastic, positive, open minded, empathic, social, independent and ambitious individual. I am prepared to work hard to achieve all the goals that I have set for myself. Till now I have accomplished my goals. My next goal is to be accepted for this master program and to obtain a masters degree in Business Administration. I have set this goal for myself and I will do everything I can do to achieve it.

In the attachments you will find all required documents. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at the University ZZ.

I have attached all of the required documents. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at the University ZZ.

Yours faithfully,

PLEASE CHECK MY LETTER OF MOTIVATION

william shakespeare — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 00:42:39 GMT

Hello, I am glad to be a member of this interesting site.
I have set up an letter of motivation for the application master Business Administartion.
Would you please check it as soon as possible?

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

Yours faithfully,

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Motivation letter to trainee program - Draft

Anonymous — Wed, 28 May 2008 19:56:27 GMT

Could you help me on my motivation letter, I would be very pleased, any suggestion is welcome.

Thank you

Carl

Dear Sir or Madam,
May 28, 2008

I would like to work at GLE because I believe that would be not only a pleasure but also a great opportunity to initiate my career in a truly international environment and enhance my knowledge and skills gained during studies on the university. Being part of a trainee program has always been part of my career plan as I believe this kind of program offers an opportunity to young engineers like me to develop their talent and be recognized as future leaders.

I am an enterprising and hard-working person. During my studies at Federal University of Santa Catarina I have worked as a scientific researcher on Computational Fluid Dynamics simulations at Integrated Technologies Laboratory. I also have spent 3 months in Valencia-Spain in an international internship program at TB S.A. where I had the opportunity to interact with students from many different countries and enhance my knowledge in Spanish and English.

I am a sailor and have participated on major national yacht racing competitions and working for a company with such strong link with sea would be plus on my career.

In my opinion, the most important factor to get promoted and be noticed among many high skilled young people, which is needed to find a rewarding job, is acquired practical experience. That is why I spend a lot of free time on exploring and improving knowledge, this often exceeds beyond my education program.

I hope the information given above will convince you of my diligence and good skills I could utilize as a future leader at GLE.

Yours faithfully,

Re: Motivation letter! Would anyone check this for me, please?

Mister Micawber — Tue, 20 May 2008 12:31:14 GMT

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It is generally well done in regard to content. I have underlined some problem areas:

Dear Madam,

I am ~~hereby~~ writing to apply for a two-month working experience in England, in which I am particularly interested. My name is Katerina Vaculikova and I am a 21 years old student in my second year of studies, at the St. Cyril and Methodius Faculty of Theology, PalackÃ½ University, Olomouc. The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to ~~focus your attention on~~ demonstrate how highly motivated I am for such an opportunity.

I first became interested in social work through being involved into an integrating project for handicapped people under the aegis of EU, The Inclusion Czech republic. ~~Within this project~~ I was responsible for preparing and organising 2-day workshops as well as ~~for~~ keeping foreign relations, relations with donors and also with those who made this project really working â people with any kind of handicap.

During the last two years of my studies, I went through my working experiences in a variety of institutional and other facilities and with many types of clients. As my school practices went on, I subsequently realised who I want to work whit. I feel the closest relation to the target group ~~represented by~~ of elderly or mentally handicapped people. I know that I can offer them the best of myself, try to make their troubles more tolerable and accept them as unique beings. I cannot even describe how satisfied and happy I always feel while working with them.

~~Concerning~~ my language skills~~, they~~ are based on my working experiences abroad. I spent almost six months in London, working and discovering a beauty of England and I found this place very beautiful. This two-month working experience could give me a chance to improve my language skills and show me what the care is alike in one of the most advanced countries of the world. Because no matter where you are and no matter what you do, the main principle of social work should still be to help to the needed ones as much as possible.

In order to ~~be good and~~ achieve high standards, I need to obtain not only theoretical, but also practical knowledge and I am convinced that this higher level of experience could help me to prove that. I would like to combine the knowledge I already know and ~~any~~ new information, align the knowledge and gain a wider perspective on the matter. Furthermore, I feel that such an opportunity is a way how to find out what I really want and if my life journey has taken the right direction. Taking this type of challenge can help me to discover what is truly hidden inside me.

French novelist Anatole France once said: âTo accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.â After a few years of child dreaming I came to know that if I finally try to turn my dreams into reality I could better envision my future and direct the path of my lifeâ¦ and therefore I am catching this opportunity. J

Yours faithfully,

Motivation letter! Would anyone check this for me, please?

Anonymous — Mon, 19 May 2008 19:46:22 GMT

Hi to everyone, I found this forum very useful and all of you guys helped a lot. :-) according to your advices and sample letters I tried to write my own motivation letter. I need it to apply for two-month working experience in England (within my studies). Could I ask anyone to check my letter, please please please? I am not english so as I suppose there are gonna be many mistakes. Sorry in advance! Thanks a lot!!! :-)

Katka, the Czech republic

There you go...

Dear Madam,

I am hereby writing to apply for a two-month working experience in England, in which I am particularly interested. My name is Katerina Vaculikova and I am a 21 years old student in my second year of studies, at the St. Cyril and Methodius Faculty of Theology, PalackÃ½ University, Olomouc. The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how highly motivated I am for such an opportunity. I first became interested in social work through being involved into an integrating project for handicapped people under the aegis of EU, The Inclusion Czech republic. Within this project I was responsible for preparing and organising 2-day workshops as well as for keeping foreign relations, relations with donors and also with those who made this project really working â people with any kind of handicap. During the last two years of my studies, I went through my working experiences in a variety of institutional and other facilities and with many types of clients. As my school practices went on, I subsequently realised who I want to work whit. I feel the closest relation to the target group represented by elderly or mentally handicapped people. I know that I can offer them the best of myself, try to make their troubles more tolerable and accept them as unique beings. I can not even describe how satisfied and happy I always feel while working with them. Concerning my language skills, they are based on my working experiences abroad. I spent almost six months in London, working and discovering a beauty of England and I found this place very beautiful. This two-month working experience could give me a chance to improve my language skills and show me what the care is alike in one of the most advanced countries of the world. Because no matter where you are and no matter what you do, the main principle of social work should still be to help to the needed ones as much as possible. In order to be good and achieve high standards, I need to obtain not only theoretical, but also practical knowledge and I am convinced that this higher level of experience could help me to prove that. I would like to combine the knowledge I already know and any new information, align the knowledge and gain a wider perspective on the matter. Furthermore, I feel that such an opportunity is a way how to find out what I really want and if my life journey has taken the right direction. Taking this type of challenge can help me to discover what is truly hidden inside me. French novelist Anatole France once said: âTo accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act.â After a few years of child dreaming I came to know that if I finally try to turn my dreams into reality I could better envision my future and direct the path of my lifeâ¦ and therefore I am catching this opportunity. J Yours faithfully,