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Motivation letter for University

madona — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 16:27:47 GMT

Hi everybody,

I found this forum few days ago. I think, it is so helpful and valuable for everyone.

I try to get through into Y.. University. I need your help to check my motivation letter such as grammar, structure, errors and etc.

I really appreciate your comment, ideas and opinions.
My due date for sending my application form, resume and motivation letter is October 15,2008.

Please help me.Thank you very much in advance to everybody who wants to "give me a hand".

Dear Madam or Sir,

The process of supply and demand is on-going and, as such requires organizations to both adapt and innovate. Organizations should meet the challenge of modern technology and, at times, challenge it themselves. They must also be able to exploit opportunities to create or maintain a good position in the financial market. In short, the banks and big corporations need high quality of financial service where the focus is on the internal and external stock market environment.

I have a passion to work with financial transactions, stock market and investment funds, so I would like to apply for the Bachelor's degree of Administrative studies, track Finance or Accounting into Faculty of .. at Y.. University which starts January 2009.

I graduated with Master's degree of Law from University of Moscow in 2000. My studies have given me a solid foundation in six fundamental fields: Macroeconomics, Microeconomics, Banks' Law, Financial Law and Corporate Law. Since finishing my studies I have been working as a Legal Advisor at Y company.

I want to pursue an international caree in economics, specializing in Finance or Accounting field. My goal is to work as an analyst for one of the top investment banks or hedge funds, or as a Financial Advisor for a private trust in any world financial centre. To achieve this, I need to complete my academic background and to take a Bachelor's degree in Finance or Accounting at Y..University which offers an outstanding education and has a superior reputation.

To be successful and achieve high standarts in the financial world, I need to obtain an extensive practical and theoretical knowledge in investment analysis, corporate finance, banking, and financial microstructure. I need to widen and deepen my understanding of quantitative techniques and financial behaviour. I am also eager to learn more about international financial systems and stock market investment funds. I understand that Finance and Accounting are very popular and competitive industry and it is rather challenging to achieve a professional career. I am however open-minded and prepared to meet all challenges presented to me. I am convinced that Bachelor's degree of Finance or Accounting will give me an opportunity to build a successful career and become a true professional, contributing value to my future companies.

I enclose my resume. Please feel free to contact me if you require any further details or documents. I hope to hear from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

(signuture)
NAME..
Enclosers: resume

Help with cover letter

Anonymous — Wed, 06 Feb 2008 20:14:40 GMT

Hola, estoy haciendo un cover letter para trabajar en Londres, podrÃa alguien ayudarme a ver si estÃ¡ correctamente redactado, tengo algunas dudas como "providing good service for (or "to") the customers?, tampoco estoy segura acerca de "set foot" si estÃ¡ bien usado.

OjalÃ¡ alguien me pueda ayudar.

Muchas gracias.

Dear Sir/Madam

In response to the advertised position in wwwgumtree.co.uk on January 16^th, please consider my CV in your search for waiting Staff. This is an ideal job for me given my enthusiasm for working, my related experience and qualifications.

I worked as a waitress in a CafÃ© and I know the importance of providing good service for the customers. With regard to your requirements, I am convinced I meet all of them. I am able to carrying out several different tasks simultaneously while being friendly, patient and charming. I am good at team work and can also work under pressure.

I am a highly motivated person, very hard working and organized, always willing to undertake new challenges. With my sociable personality and the skills gained with my previous experience, I believe that I would be able to make an important contribution to your company's team.

I believe when a waiter or waitress is good, the customers eat happily, and they come back for more. When a waiter or waitress is bad, most likely they will never set foot into that particular restaurant again.

Therefore, based upon the aforementioned, I would be thrilled to accept this position. I am available for interview at anytime convenient for your company.

Yours faithfully,

Re: Would you please be so kind to check my cover letter for me?

Clive — Sat, 06 Oct 2007 23:37:57 GMT

Hi again,

I've suggested some changes to this.

Clive

My address

Date

Name and proper title of the person receiving the letter

Dear Sir/Madam: If you know the name, say 'Dear Mr.Smith,'

With my background in nutrition and dietetics, I would like to apply for a position as a Junior Researcher, or for any similar health-related position in your company.

I have been involved in two national dietary surveys, first as a household dietary researcher in the Philippines and then as a designer in pilot-testing of a surveye in Norway. This has given me practical experience in formulating survey questions, data gathering and analysis. I also have exposure to the field of clinical nutrition, which is one of my special interesst, because I have worked as a dietitian for one and a half years. These work experiences have helped me to become a team player and an accurate, patient, systematic and results-oriented worker.

Now that I have finished my Master's in Nutrition and Health, specializing in Dietary Behavior and Disease Prevention, I am eager to consider new challenges. I would like to put into practice what I have learned and to gain more knowledge through research.

You will find my resume enclosed. I would be gtafeul for an interview to discuss this further. Thank you for your attention, and I certainly look forward to exploring this further.

Yours faithfully, say 'sincerely'

Kirsten put both your first and last names

Re: could you help me with my cover letter ???????

Feebs11 — Sun, 22 Jul 2007 10:28:26 GMT

If you are writing to British companies, use "c.v."or "curriculum vitae", not rÃ©sumÃ©.

"Stability and the desire to develop a career within your company"
"Motivation towards work and learning new things."

"Yours faithfully"

Re: Please check my cover letter! Help me not to loose my golden chance!!!!

Feebs11 — Fri, 25 May 2007 14:23:27 GMT

Anonymous wrote:
I got to know about this summer school very recently, and the deadline for the application is the 2nd of June, so I don't have a lot of time for writing a good cover letter... And I can't even say I'm experienced in it. I badly need someone's help!!!!

All the opinions are welcome!

Here is my first draft:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to apply for the Summer Course 2007 in English and Diplomatic Discourse in ***.

I graduated in Political Science in July 2004 from the Moscow State University of International Relations. Having completed my Bachelorâs degree programme and doing ["done"? - ie, have you completed your Master's? If not, then "programme, and I am now doing/following"] a Masterâs degree programme in International Relations, so I am eager for a new experience of study with the Summer Course.

This course is of intense interest to me because I am confident that when I finish my studies I will have the skills, knowledge, and contacts that will enable me to pursue a career in the Russian Ministry of Foreign Affaires. To be successful in my chosen profession, I must know all the ins and outs of diplomatic discourse and be fluent in English. Consequently, this course is the best I can ever find.[Are you saying it is the best you have been able to find, the most apposite course you have found, or that it is the one that best fits into your educational plans? I think you need to be more specific.)

I have a passion for studying English and am especially interested in further developing my language skills in areas connected with diplomacy and politics. I must say without false modesty that I am possessed of great ability in studying languages. When I laid down the aim to enter the Moscow State University of International Relations, which is one of the top 5 universities in Russia, in less than two years from a zero level [knowledge] of English I came to the level that allowed me to pass a highly competitive exam with a mark sufficient to gain a scholarship for the whole period of studies. In the university I chose English as a first language (we have to choose at least two) which means that I had 10 academic hours of English a week, including both general English and political translation. Last summer I passed the State Exam in English (the last one before the graduation) with the highest mark possible. And I cannot even say it was extremely difficult as studing English is a great pleasure for me.

Finally, what else am I supposed to be equipped with besides the above mentioned? A good luck perhaps.{I am not sure this is a good idea! - Better to reiterate that you will value the chance of an interesting experience, and are ready to answer any questions they may have.}

Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Irina Eliseeva.

Motivation letter for university

Anonymous — Sat, 10 Mar 2007 15:35:00 GMT

Hi everyone,

plese I need your help!

I v written a cover letter which is soooooooooooooo important for me may you please have a look at it and give me your opinion,any modifications?suggestions????

many thanks in advance:

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the PhD programme "***". I will successfully complete my Masterâs degree in June this year and I am committed and motivated to study for a PhD afterwards.

I have been extremely interested in cancer research since 1994, when my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer. Based on this intensely personal yet motivational experience, I started to think seriously about doing cancer research. At university, I chose to study Pharmacology, partly in order to be more familiar with the world of medication but also because I was increasingly fascinated by developments in my subject. My motivation and success is illustrated by my being one of the top five students in the last three years of pharmacological studies at university, and the second top student in my fourth year with the highest mark in Pharmacology and in Clinical Pharmacology.

After graduation, I came to France seeking to specialise in Pharmacology, hoping to use all the beneficial technical and theoretical information I have learnt in the University of *** in cancer research.

After completing the first year of my Masterâs degree, I did an internship at the *** in the Laboratory of Genotoxicology and Experimental Radiotherapy. This experience has enabled me to acquire a lot of technical practice and to obtain an insight about laboratory research objectives: studying the implication of Hypoxia and estrogens in breast cancer. During my internship I had the chance to practise many techniques, including cell culture, bacterial culture, western blotting, RT-PCR as well as enjoying analyzing papers with the other members in the lab. Overall, this experience made me more convinced that I really would like to undertake cancer research and that I am able to adopt easily to any lab atmosphere and successfully be part of a team.

During the second year of my Masterâs, I am currently doing my internship in the Faculty of Pharmacology, at the University of ***, and I am studying the *** C26 tumorgenesis mouse model. After having many interesting results in vitro specially as we have found a very important antiangiogenic activity of these polyphenols either in vitro or in vivo, my actual work has permitted me to do experiments in vivo, something I find very interesting and different from what I have done before.

I have come to know of your programme from *** and have been attracted by all the research groups and their principle interests. I am particularly interested in the project: genetic dissection of signalling pathways important in breast development and breast cancer, and in the project of cancer genes and cancer stem cells. More specifically, after doing developmental biology in my first semester this year I have become much more interested in all the genes and signaling pathways which play a major role either in development or cancer.

My combined love of research and demonstrating in dispensing classes compels me to consider a career in academia; therefore the PhD is not only the unique opportunity to enter the world of research, but also a mandatory condition to secure an academic post, my principal objective. I have always enjoyed teaching ,even when I gave some voluntary courses in the school.

Many researchers have tried in vain to convince me to change up my mind and do my PhD where I can find financing, whatever the research subject is, but I simply think that one should try oneâs utmost to achieve what one wants.

Finally, I strongly wish to participate in this programme; and believe that the combination of my laboratory experience and training is well-suited to the PhD position you describe. Please find enclosed a copy of my resume with additional information about my qualifications. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to receiving your reply.

Yours faithfully,

PLEASE correct my motivation letter for erasmus scholarship!

Anonymous — Thu, 08 Mar 2007 20:41:50 GMT

Hi! I've just find this wonderful and helpful site and i absolutely need your help! I've been writing an horrible cover letter in order to apply the Erasmus Programme and i'm NOTsure about it, but the deadline is tomorrow and i'm desperate! here is my letter, please please correct it for me! thanks!!

I am writing this letter to let you know I am really interested in the Erasmus Programme.

I am currently attending the first year of the Linguistic and Cultural Mediation (applied at economics, law and society) Degree Programme at the University of Milan. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am strongly interested in knowing a new reality, a different style of living, and I think that it offers even more than cultural delights and entertainment. I am sure that it will be both a personal and acadamic enrichment.

Having looked through the materials of the Erasmus Student Network, I was delighted to find the oppurtunity of studying linguistics and humanities at the University of Cardiff for one semester. Why I am chosen Cardiff as my preferred destination, is that i would love to get in touch with British Culture. Despite I have been studying English as second language at the University, I have never had the chance of being in the United Kingdom in my student career, and I think it is a heavy deficiency in my linguistic and personal competence. Another reason for choosing Cardiff is that I was impressed by its modules system of study. Many of the subjects offered are not considered in such a great way in my University. For instance, there is not a School completely dedicated to Cultural Studies , as in Cardiff is. I am fascinated by the wide range of topics and modules that the Centre for Language and Communication Research offers, and by the Schools of both "Journalism, Media and Cultural Studies" and "English, Communication and Philosophy". Furthermore, I'm curious and enthusiastic about the possibility of studying English and Cultural Studies in United Kingdom, the cradle of Cultural Studies.

Spending one semester at the University of Cardiff will meant improving my English language abilities and culture knowledge in the inspiring, creative and cosmopolite environment of one of the most dynamic British universities.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours Faithfully,

***

Grammar in formal letters

Anonymous — Wed, 10 Jan 2007 16:24:04 GMT

Hi everyone

I'm doing a cover letter for a resume, however I'm not sure about:

1. Whether to indent at the start of each paragraph

2. Whether to put a comma after 'Dear Sir/Madam' and 'Yours faithfully'

What is the formal way to do this?

Cheers

Cover letter - few questions

Anonymous — Wed, 10 Jan 2007 11:45:04 GMT

Hi everyone

I'm doing a cover letter for a resume, however I'm not sure about:

1. Whether to indent at the start of each paragraph

2. Whether to put a comma after 'Dear Sir/Madam' and 'Yours faithfully'

What is the formal way to do this?

Cheers

Re: Can someone please help me impove my motivation letter for a university

Mister Micawber — Tue, 09 Jan 2007 06:39:33 GMT

Your letter is too windy, so I have deleted some sentences and shortened others. Do not offer conditions or try to generate undue enthusiasm-- this is simply a cover letter for your real selling point: your CV or academic record. Save the discussion of missing courses until the interview. Your sports interests should go in a small section at the end of your CV. They will appreciate your simply and succinctly stating your desire to apply and summarizing your qualifications. Corrections in bold:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing this letter to apply to the Master's Program in Cognitive Neuroscience at ****. I am a third-year student in the cognitive neuroscience bachelor's program, and I would like to enrol in the master's program in order to gain further knowledge and experience toward academic research in this field.

My interest in cognitive neuroscience started when studying the brain in a biology lesson at secondary school. Subsequently, I enrolled in psychology at university, and in the second year I began specializing in applied cognitive psychology. After completing the accompanying practicum, I realized that I wanted to focus instead on fundamental research.

I like to explore basic problems and get to the bottom of them, so I like the fact that this research field is aimed at understanding normal and pathological brain functions. This field of study is also multidisciplinary, and fits into my broader interests in mathematics and chemistry. I hope to enrol in this master's program specifically, because it has a good reputation for research training.

Within the field of cognition and neuroscience, I am most interested in language and emotion. Language acquisition and the emotions come naturally to people, yet are extremely complex in any analysis of their development, production and comprehension. Studies in these areas need to be very perceptive.

I am a motivated and ambitious person, and I like to accomplish tasks as thoroughly and effectively as possible. I hope that I will have the opportunity to prove my abilities in the master's program.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me at [email address; mailing address; phone number].

Yours faithfully,