By Yours sincerely, Colons

corrections in bold and other areas you need to look at are highlighted for you. Watch out for the length of your sentences. You tend to run on and try to connect too many ideas and are not using enough commas. Dear Sir or Madam (US uses colon, UK uses comma or nothing after salutation) This...

Hi Peter, 1. Do I need to write sender's and recepient's address? Yes 2. My wife and I write the letter together, so at the end do I write Mr. & Mrs. Anna Lee or Mr. & Mrs. Peter Lee? I suggest that you write Yours sincerely, then each of you sign it, one signature above the...

I´m so happy to found this forum!!! It would be a great if someone could answer this questions: 1. "enclosure/s" at the end of a letter: what is the right way of typing? Can I type the whole word or only short form (Enc. Encs (for more than 1), Encl. (underlined), Enc. (with dot or colon)? Is...

Julia, My help is free. We moderators get no financial benefit. Due to: http://www.bartleby.com/64/C003/0107.html It does seem a bit pedantic, but there it is. I have reviewed your stuff. I have made numerous edits throughout while trying to maintain "your version". Hope this...

Hi vinletter, Here's one version.... Dear Sir: The purpose of this letter is to inquire as to the status of Mike LastName's application for admission to your school. We were informed in November 2003 that our son was placed on a waiting list. My husband and I attended Victoria School, as...

Dear Lotus, Let's have a look at your letter. MountainHiker Dear sir/ Madam I am writing to apply for the Master´s degree program in International Business at Xxx University. I am confident this course will enable me to pursue a career as a product manager in Strategic Marketing in an...

Dear X:

Grzegorz G 27/5 Boguslawskiego Street 43-600 Jaworzno, Silesia Poland wafel@xx.pl October 6, 2004 XX XX Undergraduate Admissions Officer UCL Faculty of Laws Bentham House Endsleigh Gardens London WC1H 0EG email@ucl Dear Ms XX: Thank you for your quick reply. Poland has recently adopted a...

Guest, Thank you for providing your template. It makes it much easier to reply to. I am not sure how "donations" are treated in your culture. Can they simply be expected (or even demanded) from "Valued Business Partners"? In North America, that would be considered poor form. You should...

The following is American: Dear Sir/Madam: ---or--- Dear Sir or Madam: ... ... ... Sincerely, ... ---Note the colon after Madam and the comma after Sincerely and that it's not Yours sincerely in American. Don't know about british. Walter