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Please I need help! Could you take a look at my application!!!

Anonymous — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 23:57:37 GMT

Hallo

I am for the first time here. I want to apply for a position of German account internship in an chinese company.

I never wrote an application before. Can you please look at this letter and give me some advice what can I do better.
I am also not sure about the grammar. Can you please tell me if something is wrong!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR HELP !!

Dear ***,

I am writing you to express my interest in the German account internship at the company ***.

I am currently studying a B.A. in Computer Science with an e-Business focus at the *** graduating in 2010.

My aim is to work in an international field of work related to marketing and consulting. Subjects which I am studying that are relevant to the post of German account internship include Project Management, R&D, Finance and Controlling, Developing Database, Marketing and Strategic Management.

At the work as a student employee in a small team I have collected experiences with Photoshop and Dreamweaver. The work has referred to the updating and developing of the WNB homepage.

With pleasure I would offer to you my cooperation and I am very interested in gaining an opportunity with your company to use the skills I developed, in a 6 months-practical internship, starting in September 2008.

I have excellent teamwork and leadership skills as evidenced by numerous university projects involving teams. I have a good command of written and spoken German. I also have a good command of written and spoken English and Russian.

I have strong evidence to show that my communication and organisational skills are also well developed.

An opportunity to apply my skills with an international perspective at your company would be an excellent opportunity for both of us.

I enclose my CV outlining my experience to date and key skill areas which I believe are relevant to this post. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application with you and I look forward to hear from you.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely

***

Please help Urgent - Letter to Human Resource

vincent tee — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 06:02:56 GMT

Hi English Guru, I am pretty poor in English. Could someone please help to comment & refine my letter below to the HR in a more gently way of expressing? (grammar mistakes and restructuring of sentences) Many Thanks!!

Dear Human Resource,

Fist of all it is a great opportunity working for BAT for the past 2 years and thank you for considering my transition from the project team to support. There are few important points that I need to emphasize for your understanding. Actually, it isnât important for BAT to review my current rate because RM6300 was an outdated 2 years ago charges and this rate was agreed to only within a specific job requirement however I have work way above these requirements. I would like to confer in order for both parties to reach a win-win agreement based on a conclusive justification.

From my investigation, I have approached people who work in this particular industry (from a BW Project Manager, other BW Consultants and a headhunter) commenting my current rate as a contractor for BW Consultant specializing in Front End is really not at par with industry standard. On top of that from what I am working now is beyond the agreed job scope, providing services not only for Programming but also BW Support, BW R&D Development, Graphics, Multimedia and also Training Management to all Asia Pacific regions. I have contributed beyond the previous agreed job requirements for all BAT Projects yet my current employer dosen't know about this issue. These values contributing to the organization will determine that I am worth more than I should.

I have fought for all project completion with success and met all datelines, sometimes till midnight yet no overtime charges being paid. Therefore, if the company were to bond my service for another one year or two, if the organization gives nothing but just low remuneration (a net pay) to the individual, what motivation is there to encourage the individual to give back to the organization more than the simple completion of allotted work?

With all the justification mentioned above, I am looking for mutual benefits for both, BAT and myself. What BAT concern, is to pay my rate according to my skill set, 7 years of experience in IT sector and appropriate rate based industry standards for contractors and I will do my best to contribute my experience, talents, skills and abilities to the organization and the team. An appropriate market rate will be RM400 to RM500 per day or RM8,500 per month.

Yours Sincerely,
Vincent

Letter to HR - need grammar check

vincent tee — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 00:32:54 GMT

Dear Human Resource,

Yours Sincerely,
Vincent

Grammar Check & Engish Sentences (please try to help)

vincent tee — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 12:55:00 GMT

Dear Human Resource,

Yours Sincerely,
Vincent

Urgent Letter to HR - Grammar Check & Engish Sentences

vincent tee — Sun, 08 Jun 2008 20:12:23 GMT

Dear Human Resource,

As a contractor, the company is not obligated to provide:

EPF and SOCSO
Allowances
Bonuses
Medical / health benefits
Loan / company stocks
Training
Family benefits
Company insurance

As a contractor, we will have:

No chances of promotion availability
limited annual leaves
No Retirement saving plan
No Job security

As a contractor we will face:

Insecure job security, no annual increment, promotion benefits and as inflation rises, every dollar we own buys a smaller percentage of a good or service.

About my accomplishment to BAT:

I have successfully completed 3 major projects for BAT (ASPAC MI, Japan FREE and AME)
Since all ASPAC MI reports are running using web browser, I am one of the pioneers to develop all BW web reports for ASPAC MI, Japan FREE & AME Project in SAP Platform, therefore I have a strong technical skills and do understand the technical architecture very well.
Did my own research & successfully implemented BW with Web technology.
For further information please refer to my resume as enclose

Yours Sincerely,
Vincent

Can you check my Letter of Motivation?

Anonymous — Tue, 06 May 2008 17:31:00 GMT

Hello everyone!

I need your help..I just finish my letter of motivation for my study abroad semester. Please, can you check the grammar? Any suggestions for the content are also welcome.

I really appreciate your help. If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to ask me.

Thanks a lot!

Dear Madam or Sir,

my name is ** ** and I am studying Industrial Engineering and Management at the University of Applied Sciences ***(name)**, **(country)**. I am writing this letter to apply for admission for the Study Abroad program at the **(name)** University of Technology, Australia.

I finished my basic studies back in year 2007 and my 7th semester is supposed to be either a practical training or a Study Abroad semester. I have chosen to apply for one semester at your University in **(city)**.

Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most ambition in my life since young. I like to face the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gain cross-cultural competence. I think that one semester abroad will help me learn how to adapt to a foreign culture, mentality and way of life which in my opinion are very important for broadening one's horizon.

I have never been to Australia before but I know from fellow students that Australians are very open and friendly people. The ** television shows your beautiful countryside and the multicultural appearance of most big cities like **(city)**. So I chose the country wich is the most furthest away from my homeland.

But the reason for choosing especially the ** University for my studies is based on its academic reputation and as well on the offering of courses it provides, which perfectly suit my interests. I also know from your Study Abroad Guide 2008 that the ** University is a very international university, so I would have the opportunity to meet many students from different backgrounds and cultures.

One semester in Australia will also be a great opportunity to improve my English skills. Since graduating from secondary school I regularly read English texts in newspapers, books or on the Internet, but I did not regularly have chances to talk to native speakers. As I am planning to work abroad after my graduation and, as a manager, I would like to be able to speak fluently in conversations.

With my academic background and relevant studying field, I am confidence that I am qualify and able to perform well in this program. I really hope that my application for the Study Abroad program 2008 will be allowed.

Yours sincerely,

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Clive — Thu, 01 May 2008 03:34:19 GMT

Hi,

What about when you end a conversation with something like, "It's been good to see you again, Jack. Please give my best to Doris and the kids. I'm sorry they couldn't come on this trip with you," or "So, you're going to the San Diego office? If you see Sandra Evans out there, give her my best." Is this usage another one of our quaint southern US idioms, grounded in ignorance and bad grammar? Or is it more widespread? Yes, seems pretty common to me. Just 'my best wishes'.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Delmobile — Thu, 01 May 2008 03:28:46 GMT

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Anonymous — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 14:06:16 GMT

The grammar teacher did indeed have a point. The correct usage is either "Best wishes" or "Kind regards" - but never a combination of the two "Best regards" - which is at best clunky and at worst reveals a lack of good grammar.

It is also fine to use "Yours sincerely" although this would normally be applied to a letter rather than a (less formal) email.

Re: pls help me write a letter claiming a dead body

devilcupid — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 01:56:11 GMT

Thanks for your reply here âs my draft..I'm not sureif its correct the grammar or wordings..

February 11, 2007

Dear sir/ma'am,

We'd really appreciate your help with this.

Since we all know that my father [Fatherâs name], died last December 2007 due to hipper tension. Its been almost two months since my father died. I regret to say that I was unhappy with your cooperation in processing my fathers sending back home,but we hope that this unhappiness will not turned to anger by the way that your company is like ignored my fathers death, sorry if I fell it that way but thatâs how I sees. Iâm hoping that your doing your very best and I do hope that your company honor its obligations.

I hope youâll give us even a single call or letter from your company. My brother have tried many times to follow-up the status of my father but still the company hasnât any final answers on when will be my father can be sent back home.

Since we know you wish to uphold the good reputation of your company, I trust this information will be of interest and use to you, Iâm relying on you to help us in this matter.

I look forward to receiving your response to resolve this matter as soon as possible, but if you would care to discuss it you can contact me [my number].

Yours sincerely,

[My name]

Search results for 'tag:Yours sincerely tag:Grammar' matching tags 'Yours sincerely' and 'Grammar'

Please I need help! Could you take a look at my application!!!

Hallo

I am for the first time here. I want to apply for a position of German account internship in an chinese company.

I never wrote an application before. Can you please look at this letter and give me some advice what can I do better.I am also not sure about the grammar. Can you please tell me if something is wrong!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR HELP !!

Please help Urgent - Letter to Human Resource

Letter to HR - need grammar check

Grammar Check & Engish Sentences (please try to help)

Urgent Letter to HR - Grammar Check & Engish Sentences

Can you check my Letter of Motivation?

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Re: Best regards, Kind regards, or Yours sincerely, - which is correct

Re: pls help me write a letter claiming a dead body

I never wrote an application before. Can you please look at this letter and give me some advice what can I do better.
I am also not sure about the grammar. Can you please tell me if something is wrong!