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Re: Please smbd check my motivation letter :)

Lil' Ruby Rose — Tue, 27 Feb 2007 17:01:47 GMT

Hi Fragile - this needs a bit of work, I think. It's quite hard to follow what you mean in places.

Dear Sir or Madam,

Motivation Letter for ..... project

I would like to apply for ..... program.

As I am going to graduate from high-school next year, I have begun thinking about different universities both in Lithuania and abroad. I believe that a person cannot trip up in choosing his future. [Don't understand what you mean here] All my life I have been interested in Maths but I have never wanted to study it, that is why I have chosen to relate my life with [settled on?] Economics that looks more attractive to me. [This sentence doesn't quite make sense - do you mean that Economics is more interesting to you?]

There are many reasons why I would like to participate in your program. First of all, the student shadow project is an excellent chance for me to try to be a student of .... for one day. Secondly, it is [what are you talking about here?]a good opportunity to see your teaching ways,[wrong word] atmosphere inside [to experience the atmosphere at ...], and to deny/prove talk [I don't understand what you mean here] about this university. Thirdly, if I applied for ..... after a year it could be a good motivation for me [to do what?].

I know that ~~any~~ participation in any project all the time [??]gives ~~any~~ valuable life experience. This is why I always try to be at the end of oneâs resources.[I'm sorry, but this doesn't make any sense to me]

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.[This is very informal. You might prefer: "I look forward to hearing from you"]

Yours sincerely,

Motivation letter, Mechanical Engineering, correction

Anonymous — Wed, 05 Apr 2006 15:57:44 GMT

Hi everybody,

I am applying for an internship for Mechanical Engineering in China. I have already had the first contact with the human resource center. Now I would like to perfect my cover letter. I would be very pleased if somebody could take a look at it and correct my mistakes.
Thank you very much for your efforts

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E-Mail:

Helmar Jungfer

02.03.2006

Intern - Corporate Human Resources

Ms.

Bosch (China) Investment Ltd., Shanghai
Bank of China Tower 13/F, 200 Yincheng Road Central
Pudong, Shanghai 200120, PR China

Six month Internship in the fields of

Research and Product Development or Quality Management

Dear Ms. [name is known]

Thank you very much for your fast reply. At the recommendation of Prof. Dr. Franz Magerl, dean of the University of Applied Science Amberg/Weiden, I am seeking for a six month internship in the field of R&D or Quality Management at your company in China. I am currently a fifth year student of Mechanical Engineering at the âFriedrich-Alexander-University Erlangen NÃ¼rnbergâ. In my advanced studies, I have specialized in Integrated Product Development and Quality Management/ Metrology.

Over the last few years Bosch highly expanded in the Asian/Pacific market and built up three huge Research and Development centers. Because I have the intention to start my career abroad -especially in the Asian area- I would like to get hands on experience by a potential employer on site. Furthermore, Bosch is known for his excellent internship program. Therefore I expect to gain useful experience from an occupation under the construction of your engineers and to support your colleagues goal- directed.

In particular, I have great interest in researching topics concerning product development, experimental tests and Quality Management. Due to my work as a tutor for the Chair of Design and my first seminar-paper, I have gained experience in Product Design and Development. In the second seminar paper I am getting hands-on experimental design and investigations in press-hardening. I would find it very attractive to work in the branches of Automotive Equipment or Automotive Parts, but I am open to any suggestions you may have that could be to the benefit concerning your company.

I will be available from the beginning of July this year.

I greatly appreciate your interest and hope to hear again from you soon.

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Â· Curriculum Vitae

Â· Certification of the intermediate diploma

Â· Certified summery of marks of the advanced study period

Enclosure

Re: Look for friends who interested in Chinese culture

Kingleo8888 — Tue, 13 Sep 2005 19:40:16 GMT

Hello Lulla!

thanks for ur reply!i`m very pleased to be your friend.if u do interested in Chinese culture i`d like try my best to help u!frankly, as i think of it China is a large,beautiful country not coz it is communist country.in the contrary,its mistcism and attraction just rooted in its unique cultural system and the lifestyle of Chinese people(especially the frugal and autarkic lifestyle of our primogenitor)and i often consider the essence of Chinese culture just originated the feudalistic society system.as the ancient chinese people thought the most important thing for them were reading and cultivating,and almost of them contented with a little.

firstly,i wanna talk with u sth.about the traditional culture in the ancient China.although i dedicated myself in it for many years,there still have not a big harvest till now.and my poor english isn`t enough to express my feelings at all.especially the ancient Chinese masterpieces they are really very concise and recondite.the authors always used less words to convey a great deal of thought.so it confused people a lot .for the new generations,they themselves even if hardly to understand their own great tradition and the splendid ancient civilization.

As we know,China is one of the four great civilization ancient countries,it have more than 5 thousand years civilization. Chinese traditional culture is really brilliant and meaningful.

there have different beliefs in China,for example,Confucianism,Taoism,Buddhism,Muslim,Christianism,Zen and so on.Confucianism is the state-religion of ancient China,it advocated Humanity,righteousness,Etiquette,Faith,Filial piety etc.

Taoism was founded by Laozi at 6~5 centrury B.C.his great works The power of way is really profound and it full of wisedom.he considered everything had its own advantages and disadvantages,and they r switched frequetly.he thought nature is the highest theorem,as the famous apothegms said in his book:human always imitated the earth,the earth always imitated the heaven(god),and the heven always imitated the way,and the way must followed the nature.

Zen is the native Buddism form although it originated from indian Buddhism.there have difference between them.Buddism call for people shoudn`t care the life quality of this life because the would had a more brilliant life in the eternity.But Zen encouraged people to enjoy themself everyday.and people who believed it can approched the best fettle though meditation.

well,maybe I talk too much today.and maybe there have a lots of mistake here.i`d like to accept ur criticism and help.

perhaps i`d like to discuss sth.about the eight diagrams,I--changing,Taiji or martial art with u next time.

keep correspond frequently plz!!! i look forward hear from u soon.

Take care!and best wishes for u!!!

Yours sincerely friend Leo