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Re: Sentence structure is back bone in business writing, how much effective it is?

Anonymous — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 12:00:38 GMT

Its very true and I totally agree with you. Think for a while that why resumes and cover letter writing is considered very effective for getting a job. What do you think why in all institutions all over the world teach their business level students subject of âBusiness communicationâ? The reason is that even to get a business deal you must known how to impress the other party through your expression and that usually includes both writing and speaking skills. Now suppose if you write an application letter to a multinational company and you do not take care of the exclamatory marks or the grammar rules or any lingual rule, do you think that you will be able to give string impression? No not at all. Thatâs why it is very true sentence structure is the backbone of business writing.

Need Your Helps about a Traning Program..

Harem — Fri, 16 May 2008 23:15:23 GMT

Hi all...First of all i wanna thanks to every1 who read this post and try to help me...Now this summer i would like to go Usa for a training program.I work with a company in my country for this program and they told me that i ve to write a employe application letter which will send to the company in Usa to find me a training job...Anyway so they gave me a cover letter but i found that very simple so i d like to write a more impressive one..Therefore i m looking your helps..

This program is a tourism training program... And i need to tell that my benefits on that way which i gained since 8 years education and working experiences.. And i ve to tell them that i was a university student which was about Tourism management but i droped down ther education in 3 rd years for gaining more experience as a working.. Thats the point but donno how can i write that in a formal way...And also i ve to tell them i will continiou the education later i did not stop the education just took a break for getting more experience in business life more than the books... (i hope i can tell ya what i mean exatly) ..i have to tell them my experiences in the tourism life and have to point my expectations by this training program but cant do that coz of my suking english .. :D Hopefully some1 can help me in this way...Greatful for all helps.. Thanks

Re: URGENT!!! Would someone check my cover letter for me, please?

Slider — Tue, 04 Dec 2007 03:52:12 GMT

I tried to improve your letter as best as I could. Some sentences I changed completely, some I left the same. If no one else responds to this post, hopefully this will help you. Note: I wasn't sure if you meant major or minor in Finance, so you might want to double check that. Major is primary, minor is secondary.

Good luck!

- Mike

Dear Ms. A,

I was informed by your advertisement on OOO that CCC is now hiring secretary/administration officer position. I would like to express my interest by sending my Curriculum Vitae along with this application letter.

As this moment, I am a new graduate student of AAA University from MMM (VVVi University Campus). My major was Business Management with a minor? in Finance. I received excellent grades in the majority of my classes.

Last year I had one-month internship with BBB working in the Sales Department. I learned some skills which I believe will help me do well in the position above. Some of those skills include translating, communicating, and doing some short financial reporting. Moreover, I not only have the ability to prepare a short oral presentation, but also do well on computer software.

Since XYZ is a company which focuses on new activities (fixed income market) which have the potential for future growth, I would be glad to be on the staff at XYZ.

I believe that I would be a valuable addition to your team, and am looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Nguyen, Thu Hien

URGENT!!! Would someone check my cover letter for me, please?

Anonymous — Sun, 25 Nov 2007 09:00:11 GMT

I'm a new graduate student and this is my first time I write a cover latter. So I hope that some kind person here can help me to correct some mistake from is. Thankx.

Nov 25^th, 2007

Dear Ms. A,

I was informed by your advertisement on OOO that CCC is now hiring secretary/administration officer position; therefore I would like to show my interested in its by sending my Curriculum Vitae along with this application letter.

As this moment, I am a new graduate student of AAA University from MMM (VVVi University Campus) and my subject is Business Management with Financial Major. During the period of time, I always have qualified high marks in most of the subjects taken.

Last year I had one-month internship with BBB working in Sales Department. I did learnt some skills which I think it will help me do well in the position above such as translating, communicating and do some short financial report. Moreover, I am not only having ability to prepare a short oral presentation but also do well on computer software.

Since XYZ is a new company, focus on new type of activities (fixed income market) which has potential chance to develop in the future, I saw myself as a candidate who would be so glad to have a chance to be in the staff at XYZ.

I do believe that the chances are equal for all and the purpose of this announcement is finding right people to put in the right place; therefore, I am looking forward to receive your email.

Yours sincerely,

Nguyen, Thu Hien

could you help with this cover letter?

Alfredas — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 19:35:18 GMT

this is my the first time in forum. i try to learn English, but it looks not easy. did i wrote the cover letter correct or not? thank you in advance.
alfredas

December 1, 2007

Dear Sirs,

Referring to your career opportunity advertisement at Newspapername, dated December 18, 2007, for a job opportunity as a director of firm which sells a bookkeepers' program. I wrote this application letter to your company to be a candidate for that position, which suit with my educational backgrounds, my qualifications and my experience.

My name is Mantas, I am thirty five (35) years old and I graduated from Bookkeepers' collage. In addition to study, my experience also includes working part-time as a programmer in a small company. I got a job in a same sphere firm, after I graduated from university, and quickly learnt enough to become manager. Via hard work, I made my way to the top and now I am Managing Director. I have been working for 10 years deeply involved on the bookkeepers' consult sphere in JSC â***â. My main responsible sphere is arranging new and old relations between clients' and employees, coordination of new projects as modernize of bookkeeper's program or install program to a new client. I analyse all results of company, make reports to shareholders and seek new parts of the market as well.

Your offer are familiar to me,and my aspiration is to work for a company that has your excellent reputation. It is my concentration that the combination of my business experience and education is well-suited to the director position you described. I have enclosed a copy of my resume with additional information about my qualifications. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards,

Mantas

phone:

Re: Applying for a job: resquesting info

Clive — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 04:25:06 GMT

Hi,

1) Suppose I'm not sure whether I'd fit in the job being advertised as the info given on what the task implies is not clear enough. How should I handle this in my application letter? Should I write a request for more info on the letter too? Are there any samples of "requesting information letters" (I don't actually knwo if that is the technical term). I suggest that the best approach is simply to apply for the job and then to try to obtain any information that you want in the course of an interview, if you get one. After all, you can always tell them later that you are no longer interested in the job.

2) Suppose also that they are specifically asking for a postition that is not exactly your study field but you know it has some points in common with your spertise (sp?), how would you handle that? Are there any samples of application letters conveying this situation? Just try to focus on the relevant parts of your expertise, in both your resume and your cover letter. It's a very normal situation. Just tell them why you think they should consider you for the job.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: Can you please proofread my self evaulation memo please

pieanne — Sat, 05 Aug 2006 00:36:18 GMT

In the presentation, i am teaching people how to write an effective application letter(cover letter).

Can you please check my grammar? If you have anything to add or suggest to make the memo much more better, please feel free to do it.

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Presentation topic

On July 31st, while completing a presentation on how to write an application letter, I discussed the purpose, need, and proper methods for composing an effective application letter. In the presentation, I provided three easy steps, the ABC method, to compose an application letter such as addressing and opening, body, and closing. In addition, I also provided some convenient methods for writing an effective application letter such as the online tools of hotjobs.com and monster.com.

Self-Evaluation

Having a smile on my face, dressing formally, a happy smile on my face, dressed formally/formally dressed, I did a great job on my presentation. My visual aids were catchy and comprehensible , since the presentation included art, graphics, photos and a fancy template to illustrate ideas. I also organized my presentation very well, giving a lot of good examples on how to write an effective application letter, categorizing three steps to write an application letter, including all the detailed information of how to compose an application letter. However, I was a bit nervous in the beginning when I was delivering the presentation. I felt butterflies in my stomach. I must admit that I had a stomachache problem. For some reason, I suffer from stomachache every time when I present.

Class Feedback

The classâs feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weaknesses. Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering When I delivered ... I talked too fa st the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye contact with the audienceand didn't have.... They suggested to me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like I was reciting. Most of the groups also said that I had good visual aids and well-organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time to organization and visual aids.

Communication principles

I expect to learn some guidelines for delivering a client-focused presentation and elements that I can use within my presentation to effectively support the messages and ideas. Needing to learn how to keep good eye contact with the audience, I expect to learn how to use body language and other delivery techniques to deliver an effective presentation and the techniques for reducing nervousness, as well as pitfalls to avoid during presentations. Pronunciation is another thing that I need to improve because I often swallow words when nervousness strikes me. Like the word âapplication,â I will pronounce as âapp-tion.â I want to be able to manage my nervousness during my presentation, so I can deliver it effectively to people.

This is just a beginning - I didn't read it to the end, sorry.

Can you please proofread my self evaulation memo please

Anonymous — Fri, 04 Aug 2006 23:09:17 GMT

Hi:

I am writing a self evaluation of a presentation that I have done last week.

In the presentation, i am teaching people how to write an effective application letter(cover letter).

Can you please check my grammar? If you have anything to add or suggest to make the memo much more better, please feel free to do it.

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Presentation topic

On July 31st, while completing a presentation on how to write an application letter, I discussed the purpose, need, and proper methods for composing an effective application letter. In the presentation, I provided three easy steps, the ABC method, to compose an application letter such as addressing and opening, body, and closing. In addition, I also provided some convenient methods for writing an effective application letter such as the online tools of hotjobs.com and monster.com.

Self-Evaluation

Having a smile on my face, dressing formally, I did a great job on my presentation. My visual aids were catchy and comprehensible since the presentation included art, graphics, photos and a fancy template to illustrate ideas. I also organized my presentation very well, giving a lot of good examples on how to write an effective application letter, categorizing three steps to write an application letter, including all the detailed information of how to compose an application letter. However, I was a bit nervous in the beginning when I was delivering the presentation. I felt butterflies in my stomach. I must admit that I had a stomachache problem. For some reason, I suffer from stomachache every time when I present.

Class Feedback

The classâs feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weakness. Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye contact with the audience. They suggested to me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like I was reciting. Most of the groups also said that I had good visual aids and well-organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time to organization and visual aids.

Communication principles

I expect to learn some guidelines for delivering a client-focused presentation and elements that I can use within my presentation to effectively support the messages and ideas. Needing to learn how to keep good eye contact with the audience, I expect to learn how to use body language and other delivery techniques to deliver an effective presentation and the techniques for reducing nervousness, as well as pitfalls to avoid during presentations. Pronunciation is another thing that I need to improve because I often swallow words when nervousness strikes me. Like the word âapplication,â I will pronounce as âapp-tion.â I want to be able to manage my nervousness during my presentation, so I can deliver it effectively to people.

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Thank you so much for reading my self evaluation memo

Re: covering letter

Itasan — Tue, 25 Apr 2006 05:53:53 GMT

I see. Thank you very much, Clive.
1. cover letter = application letter that accompanies the resume [personal history]
2. covering letter = letter attached to an order sheet, invoice, etc.
Right?
Do you use 'transmittal letter' for those also?

Re: Covering letter?

didik — Sat, 14 Feb 2004 01:44:56 GMT

Guest wrote:
How do i write the best cover letter job to a college or university department enquiring about a teaching position within their art department? I don not need student cover letter help, I need business cover letter for my career change cover letter. Should I fax cover letter example or email cover letter...

Would you please advise about my covering letter for job? (see cover letter example below)
Is it correctly covering letter?

Example :

To.
DDDDDDDDDDD

Dear Sir / Madame :

Subject: Job Application Planner

Referring to your career opportunity advertisement at AAAAA, January 18,2004, for a job opportunity as a Planner, I wrote this application letter to your company to be a candidate for that position, which suit with my educational backgrounds and my qualifications.

My name is YYYYYY, I am thirty one (31) years old and I am a holder Mechanical Engineering Degree of *** University. I have been working for four years deeply involved on the Maintenance and Repair Heavy Duty Equipment as Maintenance Planner in ***. I responsible for planning, scheduling, and coordination of all plannable maintenance work performed on the plan site. Also I responsible for maintenance of records and files essential to meaningful analysis and reportingof maintenance related matter. I have good written and verbal communication skills, dynamic and enthusiastic approach and able to work in a team environment.

If there is any interest in my expertise, please reach me through my contact address at my job site or state in my resume. It is to be hoped that I can place an appointment to meet you. Should I may be granted for an interview, I am positive you will find more complete information of my qualification.

Yours faithfully