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Please check my cover letter!

littlebunny124 — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 03:32:02 GMT

Hi, can anyone please check my cover letter for grammar??? Any suggestion or comments??? Thank you very much....

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To Whom It May Concern:

I was excited to read about the Office Specialist/Reservations job opening at Craigslist website, as my skills and qualifications match your requirement for this position. It would be wonderful to work for your company, and I am eager to implement my experience and contribute to your organization.

As my enclosed resume indicates, I graduated with a Bachelor of Arts in Behavioral Science from the Metropolitan State College of Denver. While attending school full time and working part time on and off campus, I have demonstrated a solid work ethic and developed excellent time-management skills.

My experience working at my previous jobs convey that I am capable of working independently with minimal supervision as well as in a fast-paced environment. My previous employers will attest that I am dependable, hard-working, optimistic, dedicated employee who is willing to learn and gain experience necessary to be successful.

With these skills, I am confident I am a perfect match for this position. I will appreciate the opportunity to meet and further discuss my qualifications with you and this position. I look forward to hearing from you to arrange an interview. If you wish, I will have my letters of references send to you. I can be reach at *** or by email at ***.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

P.S. One more question. If I am writing about my work experience, should I write it in past tense or present tense??? Thanks again!!!

Need help proofreading a short cover letter

MorbidSnail — Thu, 11 Sep 2008 18:13:52 GMT

Hello everyone!

I am writing a cover letter and resume as a class project for a business communications class. I have run this cover letter by several people and they could not find any mistakes. I was hoping one of you guys could take a look at it one last time before I turn it in as each error of any type results in a loss of 25/100 points! The comments in bold are specific questions I have.

Any help would be GREATLY appreciated! I am horrible with grammar so I am paranoid as hell. It doesn't help that none of my friends are English majors!

[my address]
San Angelo, TX 76904

September 09, 2008

Mr. Bob H. Smith
URS Corporation
P.O. Box 201088
Austin, TX 78720-1088

Dear Mr. Smith:

On September 3, Monster.com reported that your organization is looking for someone to fill the position of Marketing Business Assistant. After learning a little more about your company,(comma needed here?) I believe I am an excellent candidate for the position.

The ad you placed on Monster.com stated that you desired someone with a strong background in Microsoft Office Suite and excellent communication, interpersonal, and organizational skills. Due to my experiences in courses such as Statistical Analysis(should I capitalize course names?) and Business Communications,(comma needed here?) I have used the programs available in Microsoft Office Suite extensively and am very comfortable with them. In addition, I experienced success as a delivery driver due to my ability to organize orders, plan efficient routes, and work as a team with my co-workers to ensure orders were delivered in a timely and professional manner. A detailed list of my qualifications, employment history, and education is available on the attached resume.

I look forward to putting my skills and abilities to use at URS and will call during the week of September 15th to discuss a time to set up an interview and detail my qualifications more fully. I am available by email at [my email address] or I can be reached at [my phone number] any time before 11am or after 3pm central time.

Sincerely,

Christian S. Jones

Cover Letter For Internship

Anonymous — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 11:54:53 GMT

Hello my name is Sascha, next year I want apply for an internship at an English Organisation, so I hope that you can help me to correct my cover letter.

Here it is:

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Dear Sir/Madam,

my name is ... and I would like to apply for the Internship atâ¦..

I am presently studying ... at the University of ... at the end of my third year.

I focus on ..

As you can see from my enclosed resume, due to my job as student assistant I have acquired experience in the human resources field. I also learned to work in teams and motivate other staff members. Moreover, I have taken courses in Industrial Psychology and Marketing.

My job as student assistant gives me a wonderful insight into the real workings of business, above all because renowned enterprises such as ... or ... are involved in this project.

Thereby I have learned a variety of thinking strategies, experienced different approaches to

teaching and learning, communication and teamwork skills while working with people who have

a variety of personalities and ideas.

At this project I taught other students in the fundamentals of a well-known software product and was additionally responsible for the development of assessments and to hold presentations at German Organisations.To improve my English skills and knowledge about the human resources field, in February 2009 I am going to study one semester at the ... in ... after this six month, I wish to serve an Internship at the Human Resource Department of your Organisation.

Â An Internship at your Organisation provides an ideal opportunity for me to widen my horizon and to get a more detailed insight into working life in your country. In addition I hope to gain a better understanding of organisational culture and human resources departments.

Â Therefore I apply for an internship at the human resources department of your Organisation.

As an open-minded and friendly person, I easily integrate into new teams. I am convinced that my communicative and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.

Â Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find my resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Feel free to call me.

Sincerely yours,Â

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Please check my cover letter!

Ayubxon88 — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 01:05:38 GMT

I have been using this forum for about 2 month and never had a chance to ask your help. I wrote my own cover letter by using my knowledge that I took from this forum. Please check my letter and correct my mistakes. I would be delighted to receive your respond soon.

Truly,
Alex

COVER LETTER

Sinsung-dong Hana Apt 109-1305, DAEJEON

08 August, 2008
Dear Hiring Partner

I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a new network manager. Because of my background in computer network, I am confident that I match your published profile. Please find my curriculum vitae for your consideration.

I studied Computer Science at Ehwa Womenâs University, Korea. I have worked as a system administrator in Agency for Defense Development since 1997. I have worked as a Network Administrator over a 30 server and more than 3000 users. Also, I recently worked as a security manager to integrate security systems and network infrastructure.. Also I have managed security systems like Firewall, IDS for the past 7 years. My experience in the area of Unix system, Windows Systems, networks, and Security Systems are cooperated each other. Those experience allowed me to design very large campus network and I can integrate many servers and security systems with network infrastructure seemlessly. I hold MCSE certification from Microsoft and CCNA certification from Cisco Systems. I received my master degree in Computer Science at Chungnam University, Korea. I am pursuing my PhD. I am already done with my coursework and starting my dissertation.

I believe I have the qualities that you expect. I am very interested in this position. It would be a great opportunity for me to work at XXX company. I will contact you within the next two weeks to arrange an interview. You may reach me at phone or through email.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
**.

I need help on my cover letter

non1101 — Sat, 16 Aug 2008 07:34:55 GMT

Hello!
I was wondering if someone can look over my cover letter for me. I'm not a good writer and advice would help alot! I'm not sure if I should add more to the letter or not. I'm applying for a dog daycare position at a dog daycare place. Thank you!

Dear Hiring Manager:

I am interested in applying for the daycare team position for the __ company. I found this job opportunity advertised on Craigslist.

I am a true dog lover and I have always had a strong passion for animals, especially for dogs. I had a dog of 6 years which I truly loved and care about. Taking care of her helped me acquire basic canine behavior and taught me the responsibility of taking care of a pet. I always love playing with dogs whenever I get the chance, especially when visiting friends who have dogs. I do not mind getting dirty and I can be on my feet for few hours. I worked at ________ and _______ as a sales associate which gave me the abilities to work in a high paced environment while assisting customers efficiently and courteously. I am also able to work as a team member and independently as well.

Thank you for your time and consideration. It would be a pleasure to interview with you to discuss my qualifications and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Re: Cover Letter needs to be checked:-) THX

Clive — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 04:16:32 GMT

Hi,
I've suggested a few edits, but this is pretty good.

Good luck, Caroline.

Clive

Dear Mr. ***,

I am writing to you to express my interest in completing a three-to-four month internship in your company, starting June 2009.

COMPANY provides one of the world's top ***, *** and *** services to the *** markets. The opportunity to develop valuable skills in an environment that will inform and enrich my entire career is very appealing to me and fits well with my expectations about the starting point of my career in the field of global *** markets, for which I have strong enthusiasm.

Currently, I am studying in the fifth semester of the seven semester bachelor degree programme '*** and ***' at the University of *** Sciences in ***, France. In addition to my *** courses, I have acquired skills in ***, ***, *** and ***. I gained a University grant by being in the upper 10% of the students in 2007/2008. With minimal training and willingness to work hard, I expect to contribute significantly as a part of your team.

Apart from my regular curriculum, I was a tutor for the course '***' for 2 semesters. This enabled me to gain training and coaching skills as well as the ability to work on my own initiative or as part of a team.

I am looking forward to applying the knowledge from my academic studies to any projects and duties assigned to me during my internship, and to achieving the best possible results and solutions. Being a results-driven and reliable student, I easily integrate into new teams. I am convinced that my analytical and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.I hope that my language skills, including French, English and German will be a considerable plus for COMPANY.

Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find my resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Caroline Smith

Cover Letter needs to be checked:-) THX

HelpNeedr — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 15:56:39 GMT

Dear Members of this Great English Forum,

My name is Caroline and I need Your help correcting my Cover/motivation Letter...

I hope to find somebody here who will share his thoughts about my letter:-)

English teachers needed in Taiwan

Anonymous — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 03:24:32 GMT

Hi teachers!
Welcome to English In Taiwan!! Here are several ESL jobs that we would like to recommend them to you. If you are interested, please post your cover letter and picture to apply for them online.at www.englishintaiwan.com
Happy job hunting!!

** Yu-Tsai Elementary School--Taipei**
Salaried or hourly paid positions available in a bilingual elementary school and 2 kindergartens. Certified teachers for the elementary school positions. TESOL or TEFOL preferred for the kindergarten teachers. More information at: http://classifieds.englishintaiwan.com/?1B07E60

** Wenlin Education Center--Taipei**
Our school is located in Taipei City near Tianmu, close to Mingde MRT Station, the red line.
We are looking for a Native English female teacher who is patient, enthusiastic, energetic and enjoy working with children or teenagers. Better be a Christian.
Applicant must hold a Bachelor degree or any TESOL. More info at: http://classifieds.englishintaiwan.com/?1B07E50

** Daniel Preschool--Hsinchui**
Need a foreign teacher to teach English, hours:8:30-12:00, 14:00-18:00
Monday~Friday. There are 20 students in a class and their age are from 3~6 years old. More info at: http://classifieds.englishintaiwan.com/?1B07E40

** Joy English(Yong Ping)--Taipei**
Looking for responsible FET.Both full-time and part-time available.A 30minutes preparation before class is demanded. A writing test and a demo teaching is required for the interview.
Add: No.38, Bao Sheng Rd. Yong He (Behind Yong He SOGO). More info at: http://classifieds.englishintaiwan.com/?1B07D30

Re: Need Your Helps about a Traning Program..

Harem — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 00:21:15 GMT

Thanks lot Dear Clive for your great helps and informations... So i shaped up the letter through your comments.. I hope its better now but still needed badly your comments till i found the perfect one :D So here is my cover letter on the last stage ... Please make me know where i made a mistake and failed centences...

Dear Employer;

I am writing to apply for a position in your business as a tourism intern.

I am from Turkey and I graduated from the Ankara Anatolian Hotel and Tourism Vocational High School, which is one of the best such institutions in Turkey. I began ana degree in Tourism and Hospitalty Management in BalÄ±kesir University, but in the third year I postpone my education for a time in order to gain more practical experience in business. I felt that this would help me in my later university education also. While I am working in the tourism sector, I realised that the 8 years ' theoretical knowledge which I had already gained was sufficient, and that I still needed to get more practical experience.So that reason, I try to gain more practical experience in the sector which is part of my life and planning to make a career on it.(i mean the tourism) (and i try to show that tourism is my lifesytle and my carrer aims. )Especially i want to work in other countries to practice thier tourism systems and their visions through the Tourism...

I am currently working in C-K Farabi Hotel Ankara as Reseption Clerk. I believe that I have the skills and qualities that you are looking for. I am outgoing and open-minded with required experience of relating to customers with hospitality, patience, respect and consideration.My current position as Front Desk Clerk requires initiative and self - confidence, as well as ability to communicate effectively with people at all levels,and in addition to these particular qualities I have, I am a reliable and hardworking person who is always willing to learn more, and I fully commit to the tasks I am given. I love working in a team,this is a very important point for me,I strongly believe that a good team would be the key to success of any business,I have to indicate it once more,I am a very succesful and proper team player,which is crucial especially in hospitality,and I am always willing to contribute.

I consider this is a great opportunity for me to gain an international, professional and wonderful experience in American business life, and also to benefit from a cultural exchange. During my education, I was able to acquire general ideas about management and business life. Furthermore, other internships and my business experiences which i pointed on my enclosed resume, have enhanced my professional knowledge.They have improved my skills in problem solving and human relations. They have also enabled me to broaden my perspectives and develop my existing skills, because I had the opportunity to meet and interact with various people and observe different business environments..

I am able to work in the USA on a J1 or Q visa for 12 months as a tourism intern, on a paid basis. I have all legal documents and a social security number through the sponsorship of Ozman International Education Services, recognised by The State Department of the USA Government. I can be available within a month, as soon as I am admitted to the job position.

I am very enthusiastic and ambitious, I will be an efficient member of your team, provided you decide to employ me. I would be happy to receive a call for an interview.

Sincerely,

***

Could you giveme a feedback on this Cover Letter?

Anonymous — Fri, 30 May 2008 19:29:51 GMT

Hi, I would need feedback, as it is obvious on my cl I am not an American Citizen, I live in Europe and want to move to the US this is why I tought of talking about it, sinc it would be wierd to make like I'm in already in the US.

Should I also talk about the Visa the employer needs to do for me to go to work there or do I leave it for the phone/personal interview?

In addition with the corrections, should you give me your advice, should I make this more/less personal, more "to the point", longer, etc.

Thanks in advance.

Dear Sir/Madame,I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a C# Web Developer in Monster dot com. I am very interested in this position and feel that I have all the necessary qualifications.First of all I would like to introduce myself. I am xxx, lived in xxx until I was xxx. I now live in xxx where I work and studied in the xxx University.
As you will see in the enclosed rÃ©sumÃ©, I have had more than five years of solid IT and office experience, a college level education and specialized training in technology related subjects. I had the chance to work and learn on highly technical projects and also to be part of a large office where I learned different processes including the steps and procedures to obtain a CMMi Level 3 certification.I would like to call your attention on my rÃ©sumÃ© describing in details my main professional activities. In addition, I feel that having this combination of technical experiences and knowledge of administrative procedures would make me a very qualified candidate for a position within your company. I would appreciate very much having an opportunity to discuss my application with you in further details.I look forward to your early and favorable reply, and hope to meet with you at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours