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cany any one check grammer/ flow critiuqe

afarmboy87 — Sun, 29 Jun 2008 20:27:55 GMT

Hello my name is Bryan, and I am writing this letter as I have found myself to be in a bit of a predicament. I believe my situation I a little unique, so forgive me if you find my cover letter a little unconventional. I am looking for full time employment, and will need to relocate. As this may not be uncommon, bare with me one moment as I explain. I have a wife and kids in a country other than mine. After a three year wait, it was planned and expected, that my family would be able to immigrate in to the united states, in June two thousand eight. Some unexpected situations arose, and now my family will be unable to apply until two thousand thirteen! With a one year old boy I have hardy seen, and another one on the way, I am saying good by to my job, selling every thing I own, and saying hello to the international job market.

Who am I and what can I do for you, This will be difficult to sum up, as I definitely due not fall into the norm! At 38 this is my first cover letter to prelude my first resume. I was raised within a multimillion dollar muti-corparation family. We owned several farms, a large trucking company, excavating business and a landfill. Buy the age of twelve, I would be performing independently, tasks and operations, that a typical person may be faced with after training in there mid to late twenties. By the time I was twenty, I was producing show quality cars in my own automotive business. I went on to work, or contract, in almost every facet of residential construction. I now find myself behind a desk quite often, as I do purchasing for a industrial construction firm, as well maintain there fleet and repair all equipment and tools.

I do not come neatly packaged with a degree for you to hang on your wall, or with a number of years study in a particular field. I come very rounded, very mindful of ramifications of any move, or any situation, in any type of business. Being a businessman my self I can appreciate the purpose, forethought, planning, preparation, expense, implementation and the anticipated change or improvement of any given job. I am not at the apex of my career, and certainly my collar is still blue. I have never been worried about what time lunch is, or dwell on those days where you put in nineteen hours for eight hours pay. I am a company man, from a company family, and I know what it takes.

I am contacting you because you offer employment outside the United States. As I may be qualified for a particular opening you have posted, you may want to consider me for a opening where I miss the mark. As I am very motivated, and always eager to learn. Encountering a place where I can work, live, and reunite my family is paramount. That said do not feel reluctant to offer me a menial position. You will quickly recognize my abilities people always do.

Thanks Bryan

Re: Need Your Helps about a Traning Program..

Harem — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 00:21:15 GMT

Thanks lot Dear Clive for your great helps and informations... So i shaped up the letter through your comments.. I hope its better now but still needed badly your comments till i found the perfect one :D So here is my cover letter on the last stage ... Please make me know where i made a mistake and failed centences...

Dear Employer;

I am writing to apply for a position in your business as a tourism intern.

I am from Turkey and I graduated from the Ankara Anatolian Hotel and Tourism Vocational High School, which is one of the best such institutions in Turkey. I began ana degree in Tourism and Hospitalty Management in BalÄ±kesir University, but in the third year I postpone my education for a time in order to gain more practical experience in business. I felt that this would help me in my later university education also. While I am working in the tourism sector, I realised that the 8 years ' theoretical knowledge which I had already gained was sufficient, and that I still needed to get more practical experience.So that reason, I try to gain more practical experience in the sector which is part of my life and planning to make a career on it.(i mean the tourism) (and i try to show that tourism is my lifesytle and my carrer aims. )Especially i want to work in other countries to practice thier tourism systems and their visions through the Tourism...

I am currently working in C-K Farabi Hotel Ankara as Reseption Clerk. I believe that I have the skills and qualities that you are looking for. I am outgoing and open-minded with required experience of relating to customers with hospitality, patience, respect and consideration.My current position as Front Desk Clerk requires initiative and self - confidence, as well as ability to communicate effectively with people at all levels,and in addition to these particular qualities I have, I am a reliable and hardworking person who is always willing to learn more, and I fully commit to the tasks I am given. I love working in a team,this is a very important point for me,I strongly believe that a good team would be the key to success of any business,I have to indicate it once more,I am a very succesful and proper team player,which is crucial especially in hospitality,and I am always willing to contribute.

I consider this is a great opportunity for me to gain an international, professional and wonderful experience in American business life, and also to benefit from a cultural exchange. During my education, I was able to acquire general ideas about management and business life. Furthermore, other internships and my business experiences which i pointed on my enclosed resume, have enhanced my professional knowledge.They have improved my skills in problem solving and human relations. They have also enabled me to broaden my perspectives and develop my existing skills, because I had the opportunity to meet and interact with various people and observe different business environments..

I am able to work in the USA on a J1 or Q visa for 12 months as a tourism intern, on a paid basis. I have all legal documents and a social security number through the sponsorship of Ozman International Education Services, recognised by The State Department of the USA Government. I can be available within a month, as soon as I am admitted to the job position.

I am very enthusiastic and ambitious, I will be an efficient member of your team, provided you decide to employ me. I would be happy to receive a call for an interview.

Sincerely,

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Re: Can someone pls pls check my Cover Letter?

Clive — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 16:11:55 GMT

Hi Gini,

I am writing to express my great interest in and enthusiasm about obtaining a position in 123 Hospitalâs perinatal training program. I am a capable and experienced Registered Nurse with an excellent education from 345 College. Since graduating, I have developed and practiced my nursing skills as an RN in a Med/Surge unit at ABC Medical Center. In addition to my Med/Surge experience, I have precepted wrong word? or is it a technical word? Worked ?? in ABCâs Labor and Delivery unit under the direct supervision of the Perinatal is it perinatal or prenatal ? Clinical Nurse Specialist.

A few of the skills I have developed while precepting in a highly? acute Labor and Delivery unit are Fetal Heart Monitoring, assisting with epidural placement, dealing with complicated and cesarean births, managing alternative pain control, and monitoring mother and baby for post-partum complications. In addition to these perinatal skills, I can also contribute the knowledge I have developed while working as a Med/Surge RN, such as blood transfusion, IV administration, aseptic techniques, wound care, phlebotomy, advocating for the patient and acting as an intermediary between family, patients and physicians.

As a nurse I enjoy the incredible relationship that I have developed with my patients. I especially enjoy the special companionship and bonding that perinatal nurses develop with laboring mothers and their families. I thoroughly enjoy this experience and would like to continue to develop the skills I have acquired in my preceptorship and as a med-surge nurse. I hope to bring them to such an esteemed teaching hospital as UCSF.

I would like to schedule an interview with you at your earliest convenience for an opportunity to discuss my application, as well as my other skills and abilities as outlined in my attached resume.. My phone number is (999) 999-99, and my e-mail is Google@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Good luck with this. If you have any more questions, please post again.

Clive

Can someone pls pls check my Cover Letter?

Giniper — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 07:57:49 GMT

Hi, I'm trying to apply for an upcoming nursing training program and would appreciate if someone can check my cover letter b4 I send it. Thank you so much!!! its posted below:

I am writing to express my great interest and enthusiasm in obtaining a position in 123 Hospitalâs perinatal training program. Iâm a capable and experience register nurse with an excellent education from 345 College. Since graduating I have developed and practiced my nursing skills as a registered nurse on a Med/Surge unit at ABC Medical Center. In addition to my Med/Surge experience, I have precepted at ABCâs Labor and Delivery unit under the direct supervision from the Perinatal Clinical Nurse Specialist.

A few of the skills I have developed while precepting on a high acute Labor and Delivery unit are Fetal Heart Monitoring, assisting with epidural placement, complicated births, cesarean birth, alternative pain management and monitoring mother and baby for post partum complications. Additionally, to these perinatal skills, I can also contribute the knowledge I have developed while working as a Med/Surge RN, such as blood transfusion, IV administration, aseptic techniques, wound care, phlebotomy, advocating for the patient and acting as an intermediary between family, patients and physicians.

As a nurse I enjoy the incredible relationship that I have developed with my patients. I especially enjoyed the special companionship and bonding that perinatal nurses develop with laboring mothers and their families. I thoroughly enjoyed this experience and would like to continue the skills and memories I have acquired in my preceptorship and as a med-surge nurse and bring them to such an esteem teaching hospital as UCSF.

I would like to schedule an interview with you at your earliest convenience for an opportunity to discuss my other skills and abilities. My phone number is (999) 999-99, and e-mail is Google@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Re: cover letter - could you check..

Feebs11 — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 01:42:18 GMT

Anonymous
Hello,

could you check my cover letter for travel grant application?
Thanks a lot!!

Irina

With this letter I would like introduce and support my application for a travel grant of 450e anniversary???? in order to present my work at the International Pigment Cell Conference-2008 (IPCC2008) in Sapporo, Japan.

I started my graduate study in January 2005 in Freedrich Beermannâs Lab at ISREC. Currently I am working on a project devoted to the function of c-Myc proto-oncogene in pigment cells. Loss-of-function studies strongly support the importance of this gene in melanocyte development. c-Myc deficient progenitors of pigment cells failed to pass through the embryogenesis normally. This results in drastic decrease of melanocytes numbers after birth and âgray hairâ phenotype in mice. (For further details see abstract)

In the past years, I participated in two Pigment Cell Research meetings and received a poster prize in 2006. As mentioned above, my abstract was selected for an oral report at IPCC2008. Presentation of my results in front of wide range of specialists in my field will give me a great opportunity to get a feedback and helpful criticism from my colleagues. This discussion will help me to close the remaining gaps in my work and finish my report for publication. Since I am in the last year of my PhD, participation in this meeting is very important for my future career as it will enable me to establish new contacts and search for a possible work position.

cover letter - could you check..

Anonymous — Thu, 06 Mar 2008 13:06:41 GMT

Hello,

could you check my cover letter for travel grant application?

Thanks a lot!!

Irina

With this letter I would like introduce and support my application for travel grand of 450e anniversary in order to present my work at International Pigment Cell Conference-2008 (IPCC2008) in Sapporo, Japan.

I started my graduate study in January 2005 in Freedrich Beermannâs Lab at ISREC. Currently I am working on project devoted to the function of c-Myc proto-oncogene in pigment cell. Loss-of-function studies strongly support the importance of this gene in melanocyte development. c-Myc deficient progenitors of pigment cell failed to pass through the embryogenesis normally. This results in drastic decrease of melanocytes number after birth and âgray hairâ phenotype in mice. (For further details see abstract)

In the past years, I participated in two Pigment Cell Research meetings and received a poster prize in 2006. As mentioned above, my abstract was selected for an oral report at IPCC2008. Presentation of my result in front of wide range of specialists in my field will give me a great opportunity to get a feedback and helpful criticism from my colleges. This discussion will help me to complete remaining gaps in my wok and finish the publication. Since I am at the last year of my PhD, participation in this meeting is very important for my future career to establish new contacts and search for new place of work.

Re: Help for my cover letter Thx!

Clive — Wed, 21 Nov 2007 16:58:55 GMT

Hi,

I've made a number of edits.

Good luck with this, Clive

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of "French Online Games Support Agent", as I feel I can bring to you my ability to keep customer service and satisfaction at its peak, and even to contribute to its improvement.

I think my experience will be beneficial for your company. Indeed, this year, I worked as a maintenance technician for many companies because I was in temporary work. From March to September, I was a software and hardware hotline technicianb so I know the rules of customer support and how it works: to understand the customer's problem, to make a fast, clear and correct decision, and to be competitive and productive.

Furthermore, this job will be a great opportunity for me to combine my work skills with the video game knowledge I have. Indeed, video games are a passion for me, especially online video games, of which I have a great deal of experience through testeding many different MMORPGs. I have the experience that is necessary to monitor my own work in order to see how I can be more productive, and how I can continually improve myself and the service I offer.

I trust that my qualifications will be of interest to you, and I look forward to hearing from you. I can be contacted at 123-4567.

Yours sincerely,

URGENT: RESUME NEEDING TLC ?

Jsniegoc — Fri, 14 Sep 2007 23:49:11 GMT

hello, i am in the process of making a new resume, and wanted to here more idea's on what i have done so far, i have had many help with this, but still have some things lacking.

if there is anything i miss, please help!

NAME

Address 1
Adress 2
Email
Phone number

Human Resources

Please accept this letter and accompanying resume as application for the position of ______??_________ currently available within your company. As you will see from my enclosed resume, my 3 years in the customer service industry and half of that in the sales aspect, and my ability to train and lead fellows vice personnel, make me a strong candidate for this type of position. As a high energy âcan doâ person, I understand what it takes to make a positive impact on individual and corporate clients. I would bring to your company the same enthusiasm, initiative and positive attitude that characterized my success thus far.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my background and experience with you at your convenience. Thank you for your consideration of this application. I look forward to hearing from you.

Respectfully yours,

NAME

Enclosure: Resume

(cover letter, pg1)

(resume pg 2-3)

OBJECTIVE: A Challenging Position in the sales and customer service Industry.

HIGHLIGHTS:

Presenting 3 years of professional sales, and customer service in the ___?_______ industry. High energy person; Taking initiative; Not afraid to get my hands dirty; can do attitude. Able to engage customers in a polite and amiable fashion; possesses a recognized âgood sense of humor.â

Demonstrated leadership abilities in various settings; trained and guided retail sales staff; Identified workplace problems and resolved them using diplomatic measures.

Regularly received Positive Performance Reviews from multiple _____?______. (members of staff) ??

EXPERIENCE:

PLACE, LOCATION
Position: Banquet server and Bartender, Room service, March 2004 â November 2005
Managed and preformed banquets; room service duties; consulted with supervisors and clients on special requirements for functions.
Set up and arranged buffet tables; laid out rooms for specific events such as meetings, breakout rooms, receptions and formal and informal dinners..
Coordinated activities of kitchen and dining-room workers during banquets to ensure that food was served promptly and correctly garnished.
Addressed customer concerns promptly and assisted subordinates and supervisors in identifying and resolving problems.

PLACE, LOCATION

Position: Sales Associate, October 2005 â September 2006,
Helped merchandise the department, put excess stock into the stock room, regular cleaning of the department, which included: sweeping dusting and vacuuming. My main role in this position was finding the complete solution for customers looking at mobile music devices, and boom box/ mini home stereos. Once a week, I was responsible for âshoppingâ the local competition and assessing the price points of our products in comparison of ours. Occasionally when the need arrived, I would take care of customer opsâ which would intale diagnosing there problem, and coming up with a solution which benefited them and the company.

Position: Product Expert, September 2006 â October 2006, (same place as above and same location)
Full commissioned sales person, focused on selling car audio, video and navigation products.
In this role, I had more responsibility making sure

PLACE, LOCATION (same company as above, just different location and different role)
Position: Product Expert, October 2006 â March 2007
Openning the *** store in the winter of 06, I took a strong leadership role where I helped train and develop staff in the _____???_______. During this time I would track store and department numbers very carefully, encouraging staff, and have weekly business reviews with upper management about daily business goals. At the same time, I was developing signage, and created packages for ease of sale on the sales team and for the consumer as well. The basics of day to day operation were also in my _______, including vacuuming, sweeping, dusting and restocking shelves so that the consumer would have a pleasant experience in the department.

EDUCATION:

Completed my highschool education, and graduated with the Tech award.

ADDITIONAL TRAINING:

Completed âSmart Serveâ training for beverage rooms and lounges.

W.H.I.M.I.S training.

REFERENCES: Available upon request.

Re: PhD Cover Letter ! Need help to correct it

Kathrin — Sun, 09 Sep 2007 08:21:41 GMT

Hello all,

First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .

Thank you in advance.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. ***, University of ***, I am writing to you in order to apply for ~~the PhDt~~the PhD-program you are offering. ~~Student position at ***. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.~~

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of *** [Please don't introduce yourselve in a formal letter, it is very unprofessional. Besides, your resume is enclosed.] In March 2007, I ~~hold~~ got the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do an my internship and master thesis in the *** company. There I gained profound ~~developed not only my~~ knowledges in web development ~~but also real~~ as well as working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. ~~It was a great experience for me, which~~ has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for ***, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to ~~apply~~ ~~these applications~~ use them in business, ~~which~~ in the case that SAP is now the best solution. ~~This~~ Your program ~~proposes~~ covers areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. ~~I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.~~

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I may be suitable for this position. I am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via email or telephone at number +***.[Your contact data should be in the resume and every person in the business wourld know how to reach an other person. If your contact data are not on the resume, you should put it there and don't write about it. Again, it looks very unprofessional, sorry, if I am too hard by trying to help]

Thank you very much for your time an ~~your~~ consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen

PhD Cover Letter ! Need help to correct it

Quan — Sat, 08 Sep 2007 06:41:06 GMT

Hello all,

Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. ***, University of ***, I am writing to apply for the PhD. Student position at ***. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of *** In March 2007, I hold the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do my internship and master thesis in *** company. There I developed not only my knowledges in web development but also real working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. It was a great experience for me, which has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for ***, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to apply these applications in business, which SAP is now the best solution. This program proposes areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.

Thank you very much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen

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