http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3acover+letter+tag%3aSimple+past&tag=cover+letter,Simple+past&orTags=0Search results for 'tag:cover letter tag:Simple past' matching tags 'cover letter' and 'Simple past'en-USCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CoverLetterLetter/zqnhl/post.htm#500100Sun, 13 Apr 2008 10:17:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:500100Mister Micawber.<br /><em>I have underlined some problem areas.&nbsp; One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect:</em><br /><br /><br /><p>Motivation Letter:</p><p><span>The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> is according </span>my target to develop my skills<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> on</span> the financial field for <span style="text-decoration:underline;">a knowledge improvement</span> and <span style="text-decoration:underline;">a career progression on</span> the financial industry. <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Regarding</span> the excellent reputation of Hampton College <span style="text-decoration:underline;">in specific</span>, the Department of Economics, and its international recognized <span style="text-decoration:underline;">researches</span>, I have chosen Hampton <span style="text-decoration:underline;">to study</span>. Furthermore, I also plan to do the Master in Finance at Hampton, after finishing the graduate finance program. </span></p> <p><span>I have <span style="text-decoration:underline;">a work</span> experience in La Caja, one of the biggest<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> spanishes bank</span> in assets, working <span style="text-decoration:underline;">in</span> an external commission auditing<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> loans</span> contracts and reporting directly<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> for </span>the Spanish Central Bank and the National Treasury. After that, I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">have finished</span> my degree and I came to London to improve my English skills when I<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> have started</span> to work in<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> a International Company of Funds’ Transfers</span>, <span style="text-decoration:underline;">liasing</span> with more than 240 banks around the world, processing and confirming multi FX settlements, treasury, daily <span style="text-decoration:underline;">reconcialitions</span> and cheque risk <span style="text-decoration:underline;">administrations. Starting</span> as sales executive and finishing as a manager in the central branch of the company.</span></p> <p><span><span style="text-decoration:underline;">Aside my</span> working experience, I also have knowledge <span style="text-decoration:underline;">in stock</span> market, <span style="text-decoration:underline;">being a</span></span><span style="color:black;"><span style="text-decoration:underline;"> keen awareness </span>of world events, current <span style="text-decoration:underline;">affair </span>and financial markets. My interest in those subjects<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> have started</span> after I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">made </span>a course<strike>, during my degree,</strike> in financial markets and technical chart analysis, and I have started to invest on the Madrid Stock Exchange using an online stockbroker platform.</span></p> <p><span style="color:black;">I <span style="text-decoration:underline;">have studied</span> <span style="text-decoration:underline;">the </span>elementary and high school in a top school in Madrid, Montfort School, which allowed me to <span style="text-decoration:underline;">enter in</span> a top <span style="text-decoration:underline;">5</span> university in Madrid, Universidad Complutense de Madrid<span style="text-decoration:underline;">. Where I have studied </span>Business Administration<span style="text-decoration:underline;">, what</span> the equivalent in UK would be a Bachelor Hons Degree in Science in Business Administration<span style="text-decoration:underline;">. Which includes, </span>statistics, finance, accounting, marketing, economics, administration, human resource and strategy planning.</span></p> <p><span style="color:black;">Thus, I am very motivated<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> in improve</span> my mathematical skills and my technical knowledge in finance with Hampton College.</span></p> <p><span><span style="text-decoration:underline;">Your </span>sincerely,</span></p> <span>Anderson</span><span><br /><br /></span>