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Cover Letter For Internship

Anonymous — Mon, 25 Aug 2008 11:54:53 GMT

Hello my name is Sascha, next year I want apply for an internship at an English Organisation, so I hope that you can help me to correct my cover letter.

Here it is:

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Dear Sir/Madam,

my name is ... and I would like to apply for the Internship atâ¦..

I am presently studying ... at the University of ... at the end of my third year.

I focus on ..

As you can see from my enclosed resume, due to my job as student assistant I have acquired experience in the human resources field. I also learned to work in teams and motivate other staff members. Moreover, I have taken courses in Industrial Psychology and Marketing.

My job as student assistant gives me a wonderful insight into the real workings of business, above all because renowned enterprises such as ... or ... are involved in this project.

Thereby I have learned a variety of thinking strategies, experienced different approaches to

teaching and learning, communication and teamwork skills while working with people who have

a variety of personalities and ideas.

At this project I taught other students in the fundamentals of a well-known software product and was additionally responsible for the development of assessments and to hold presentations at German Organisations.To improve my English skills and knowledge about the human resources field, in February 2009 I am going to study one semester at the ... in ... after this six month, I wish to serve an Internship at the Human Resource Department of your Organisation.

Â An Internship at your Organisation provides an ideal opportunity for me to widen my horizon and to get a more detailed insight into working life in your country. In addition I hope to gain a better understanding of organisational culture and human resources departments.

Â Therefore I apply for an internship at the human resources department of your Organisation.

As an open-minded and friendly person, I easily integrate into new teams. I am convinced that my communicative and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.

Â Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find my resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Feel free to call me.

Sincerely yours,Â

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Please comment and edit my Cover letter.

anil007 — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 08:51:12 GMT

Dear

I am applying for the MSC progarm in Global Innovation management. The university has asked to sens Cover letter in application process.

I typed my CL, which i had written few lines.

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Dear Sir / Madam,

I always thought that in present scenario management concepts are necessary with technology for the good product development. I aspire to acquire knowledge in innovation management so as to learn tools necessary to transform research outputs into innovative products. Through Erasmus Mundas Program, I came to know about the Masterâs Program in âGlobal Innovation Managementâ (GIM) and very interested to apply for the program. After thorough search of program contents, partner university websites and discussion with Mr. Ross Maclachlan, I am confident that the program is more suitable to me to achieve my career goal of entering into technology management field.

I graduated in Chemical Engineering and acquired considerable knowledge in process engineering concepts. My academic project in refining of crude oil process has helped me to know the latest technological trends and also the concept development process. I researched to find the latest technologies in crude oil cracking, separation techniques, design of process and preliminary costs involved in the project.

I later joined Reliance Life Sciences through competitive Young Engineersâ Program. During the tenure in Reliance, I mainly involved in validation activities of Bio-pharma facility from start to completion and mainly helped to learn new technologies. My main responsibilities are project planning, development of specifications for equipment, qualification for Design and Function so as to comply with quality standards."

Please comment and edit for necessary.

Regards,

Anil Kumar.

Please check my cover letter!

Ayubxon88 — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 01:05:38 GMT

I have been using this forum for about 2 month and never had a chance to ask your help. I wrote my own cover letter by using my knowledge that I took from this forum. Please check my letter and correct my mistakes. I would be delighted to receive your respond soon.

Truly,
Alex

COVER LETTER

Sinsung-dong Hana Apt 109-1305, DAEJEON

08 August, 2008
Dear Hiring Partner

I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a new network manager. Because of my background in computer network, I am confident that I match your published profile. Please find my curriculum vitae for your consideration.

I studied Computer Science at Ehwa Womenâs University, Korea. I have worked as a system administrator in Agency for Defense Development since 1997. I have worked as a Network Administrator over a 30 server and more than 3000 users. Also, I recently worked as a security manager to integrate security systems and network infrastructure.. Also I have managed security systems like Firewall, IDS for the past 7 years. My experience in the area of Unix system, Windows Systems, networks, and Security Systems are cooperated each other. Those experience allowed me to design very large campus network and I can integrate many servers and security systems with network infrastructure seemlessly. I hold MCSE certification from Microsoft and CCNA certification from Cisco Systems. I received my master degree in Computer Science at Chungnam University, Korea. I am pursuing my PhD. I am already done with my coursework and starting my dissertation.

I believe I have the qualities that you expect. I am very interested in this position. It would be a great opportunity for me to work at XXX company. I will contact you within the next two weeks to arrange an interview. You may reach me at phone or through email.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
**.

Re: Cover Letter needs to be checked:-) THX

Clive — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 04:16:32 GMT

Hi,
I've suggested a few edits, but this is pretty good.

Good luck, Caroline.

Clive

Dear Mr. ***,

I am writing to you to express my interest in completing a three-to-four month internship in your company, starting June 2009.

COMPANY provides one of the world's top ***, *** and *** services to the *** markets. The opportunity to develop valuable skills in an environment that will inform and enrich my entire career is very appealing to me and fits well with my expectations about the starting point of my career in the field of global *** markets, for which I have strong enthusiasm.

Currently, I am studying in the fifth semester of the seven semester bachelor degree programme '*** and ***' at the University of *** Sciences in ***, France. In addition to my *** courses, I have acquired skills in ***, ***, *** and ***. I gained a University grant by being in the upper 10% of the students in 2007/2008. With minimal training and willingness to work hard, I expect to contribute significantly as a part of your team.

Apart from my regular curriculum, I was a tutor for the course '***' for 2 semesters. This enabled me to gain training and coaching skills as well as the ability to work on my own initiative or as part of a team.

I am looking forward to applying the knowledge from my academic studies to any projects and duties assigned to me during my internship, and to achieving the best possible results and solutions. Being a results-driven and reliable student, I easily integrate into new teams. I am convinced that my analytical and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.I hope that my language skills, including French, English and German will be a considerable plus for COMPANY.

Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find my resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Caroline Smith

Cover Letter needs to be checked:-) THX

HelpNeedr — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 15:56:39 GMT

Dear Members of this Great English Forum,

My name is Caroline and I need Your help correcting my Cover/motivation Letter...

I hope to find somebody here who will share his thoughts about my letter:-)

Re: Motivation Letter

Clive — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 14:51:01 GMT

Hi,
I undertand 'cover letter' and 'motivation letter' as two different things, as follows.

A cover letter accompanies a resume, and is usually related to an employment application.
A motivation letter is a term I only encountered on this Forum. I understand it to relate to a university application, and to be a statement of why you want to take this particular course at this particular institution.

Best wishes, Clive

Re: Need Your Helps about a Traning Program..

Harem — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 00:21:15 GMT

Thanks lot Dear Clive for your great helps and informations... So i shaped up the letter through your comments.. I hope its better now but still needed badly your comments till i found the perfect one :D So here is my cover letter on the last stage ... Please make me know where i made a mistake and failed centences...

Dear Employer;

I am writing to apply for a position in your business as a tourism intern.

I am from Turkey and I graduated from the Ankara Anatolian Hotel and Tourism Vocational High School, which is one of the best such institutions in Turkey. I began ana degree in Tourism and Hospitalty Management in BalÄ±kesir University, but in the third year I postpone my education for a time in order to gain more practical experience in business. I felt that this would help me in my later university education also. While I am working in the tourism sector, I realised that the 8 years ' theoretical knowledge which I had already gained was sufficient, and that I still needed to get more practical experience.So that reason, I try to gain more practical experience in the sector which is part of my life and planning to make a career on it.(i mean the tourism) (and i try to show that tourism is my lifesytle and my carrer aims. )Especially i want to work in other countries to practice thier tourism systems and their visions through the Tourism...

I am currently working in C-K Farabi Hotel Ankara as Reseption Clerk. I believe that I have the skills and qualities that you are looking for. I am outgoing and open-minded with required experience of relating to customers with hospitality, patience, respect and consideration.My current position as Front Desk Clerk requires initiative and self - confidence, as well as ability to communicate effectively with people at all levels,and in addition to these particular qualities I have, I am a reliable and hardworking person who is always willing to learn more, and I fully commit to the tasks I am given. I love working in a team,this is a very important point for me,I strongly believe that a good team would be the key to success of any business,I have to indicate it once more,I am a very succesful and proper team player,which is crucial especially in hospitality,and I am always willing to contribute.

I consider this is a great opportunity for me to gain an international, professional and wonderful experience in American business life, and also to benefit from a cultural exchange. During my education, I was able to acquire general ideas about management and business life. Furthermore, other internships and my business experiences which i pointed on my enclosed resume, have enhanced my professional knowledge.They have improved my skills in problem solving and human relations. They have also enabled me to broaden my perspectives and develop my existing skills, because I had the opportunity to meet and interact with various people and observe different business environments..

I am able to work in the USA on a J1 or Q visa for 12 months as a tourism intern, on a paid basis. I have all legal documents and a social security number through the sponsorship of Ozman International Education Services, recognised by The State Department of the USA Government. I can be available within a month, as soon as I am admitted to the job position.

I am very enthusiastic and ambitious, I will be an efficient member of your team, provided you decide to employ me. I would be happy to receive a call for an interview.

Sincerely,

***

Re: Could you giveme a feedback on this Cover Letter?

Mr Wordy — Fri, 30 May 2008 22:24:42 GMT

I ought to say at the outset that I'm not an expert on the subject of US visa regulations.

I think that you should state your nationality (in addition to where you live) at the top your CV, but it sounds as if you might have already done that.

In your covering letter, in the part where you say "I am ***, lived in *** until I was ***", I would consider also saying "I have *** nationality" ("***" being "British", "French", "German", or whatever it might be). Then I would leave it at that for now -- there's no need to raise additional doubts and complications that detract from the positive points that you're trying to get across. Then, if they follow up your application, you can bring up the visa issue if they don't do so first.

I've suggested a few small changes to your letter, which I marked up below. I struck out a sentence that I thought didn't really add any value beyond what you've already said. There were several places where you were missing spaces after full stops that may not be obvious in the markup.

To me, the tone and content seem fine, and it's about the right length. Certainly I don't think it needs to be longer. But if you can somehow sneak in just a couple of words to indicate how your qualifications and experience are directly relevant to C# web development (rather than IT in general) then that might be a good idea. But no need to go into great detail because that will all be explained on your CV.

Dear Sir/~~Madame~~Madam, I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a C# Web Developer in at Monster dot com [should this be written as "monster.com"?]. I am very interested in this position and feel that I have all the necessary qualifications. First of all I would like to introduce myself. I am ***, and I lived in *** until I was ***. ~~I now live in *** where I work and studied in the *** University~~ I studied at *** University and I now live and work in ***.
As you will see in the enclosed rÃ©sumÃ©, I have had more than five years of solid IT and office experience, a college level education and specialized training in technology-related subjects. I have had the chance to work and learn on highly technical projects and also to be part of a large office where I learned different processes including the steps and procedures to obtain a CMMi Level 3 certification. ~~I would like to call your attention on my rÃ©sumÃ© describing in details my main professional activities. In addition,~~ I feel that ~~having~~ this combination of technical ~~experiences~~ experience and knowledge of administrative procedures would make me a very qualified candidate for a position within your company. I would appreciate very much having an opportunity to discuss my application with you in further ~~details~~ detail. I look forward to your early and favorable reply, and hope to meet with you at your earliest convenience.

Could you giveme a feedback on this Cover Letter?

Anonymous — Fri, 30 May 2008 19:29:51 GMT

Hi, I would need feedback, as it is obvious on my cl I am not an American Citizen, I live in Europe and want to move to the US this is why I tought of talking about it, sinc it would be wierd to make like I'm in already in the US.

Should I also talk about the Visa the employer needs to do for me to go to work there or do I leave it for the phone/personal interview?

In addition with the corrections, should you give me your advice, should I make this more/less personal, more "to the point", longer, etc.

Thanks in advance.

Dear Sir/Madame,I am writing in response to your recent advertisement for a C# Web Developer in Monster dot com. I am very interested in this position and feel that I have all the necessary qualifications.First of all I would like to introduce myself. I am xxx, lived in xxx until I was xxx. I now live in xxx where I work and studied in the xxx University.
As you will see in the enclosed rÃ©sumÃ©, I have had more than five years of solid IT and office experience, a college level education and specialized training in technology related subjects. I had the chance to work and learn on highly technical projects and also to be part of a large office where I learned different processes including the steps and procedures to obtain a CMMi Level 3 certification.I would like to call your attention on my rÃ©sumÃ© describing in details my main professional activities. In addition, I feel that having this combination of technical experiences and knowledge of administrative procedures would make me a very qualified candidate for a position within your company. I would appreciate very much having an opportunity to discuss my application with you in further details.I look forward to your early and favorable reply, and hope to meet with you at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours

could anyone help?

Leboss — Fri, 23 May 2008 09:43:37 GMT

Hello dear Members of the Forum,

could anyone check my Motivation letter for me?I will be glad if you can correct the form and the content( Substance) for me.

Here are the content the cover letter should have :

-a covering letter (mentioning why you are interested in the field or course you apply for, detailing your career goals, etc.)

and also

the link to find the brochure about the programmehttp://wwwen.uni.lu/formations/fdef/master_in_entrepreneurship_and_innovation_master_professionnel

Thank you in advance for your help

Date

My Name and Adress

Name and Adress of the of

the Professeur

Dear Mr ..,

i hereby wish to state my interest for a place in your Master Programme on Entrepreneurship and Innovation( Master Professionnel) , a Programme that i found on your webside while looking for such studies.

My desire to enrol on this special programme reflects my ambition to be independant and my interest in Entrepreneurship.

I have always dream to have my own business. After my Study in Physics sciences at the University of( Country ) instead of becoming a Teacher i started a business together with a friend. We started with a small budget to produce coconut oil-based Soap in informel Sector.But in the long run i noticed that ideas without knowledge are difficult to be transformed in sustainable projects so i decided to join a privat business College to acquire basic knowledge in Accountancy,Marketing, Finances and sales techniques.My experience in this business has showed me the real role Entrepreneurs can play in developing countries and for me there is no doubt that Entrepreneurship can alleviate poverty by contributing to economic growth and Job creation.

Since Spring 2004 i have enrolled on the programme Business Mathematics or Mathaematics . I started the courses at the University of .. where i spent one Semester then i moved to University of..

There are three specific reasons why i want to join a programme on Entrepreneurship

First i noticed once again that whatever i was studying, my desire to fulfil a life long wish deos not quit my mind and is becoming stronger .So i have decided to go for a suitable Master programme which will provide me with the the tools to fulfil my wish.

Secondly i beleave that great ideas without knowledge are difficulte to be transformed into sustainable projects Therefore learning the process of development and the implementation of new business ideas is very important for me.I think that Entrepreneurship Programme is the most suitable Programme to learn this process fom the idea to the setting up and growth of a company until the eventual withdrawal from the business project

Thirdly i have some ideas and i want to take part to the actions that aim to alleviate poverty on the african continent and an Entrepreneurship programme will surely help me to select,evaluate and implemente those ideas in oder to create sustainable businesses that will help to alleviate poverty by contributing to economic growth and job creation.

Why this special Programme at the university of( Country) ?

The location of the university of .. in the heart of Europe,its international environment,the involvement of an international faculty and a wide network of business community members are factors that will provide me with international skills and experience to anable me to compete on the global market These are some of raisons why i chose to study Entrepreurship at your Institution

Another raison is the cours concept:optimal balance between theory and practice is exactly what i am looking for . The fact that i will have practical experience of daily business practice increases my motivation,because the practical part of the programme will show us the difficulties that Entrepreneurs may encounter and will provide us with skills and experiences to deal with obstacles.

The uniqueness and the duration of your Entrepreneurship curriculum are other factors that lead to chose your institution

I think your programme is very special because it provides knowledge not only in Eutrepreneurship but also in innovation management.In a global changing world,innovation is very important to create a competitive advantage.

In Addtion the proramme does not last more than two semesters and this is ideal for me in terms of duration,because i do not wish to join a Master in Entrepreneurship that will last more than three semesters

After my study, i will use the knowledge that i will gain to continue to work on our current Jatropha-projet,to help to establish businesspartnership between european and african firms and Entrepreneurs . I also want work together with Lux-Business Academy on an Idea that can help others young Entrepreneurs on the african continent and establish global partnership.

I am convinced that Entrepreneuship is one of the way to reduce poverty and your program will surely provide me the suitable knowledge and know how that i need not only to improve our current projects,but also to transform my other ideas into new applications and also help others people.

Sincerely yours

My Name

Enclosed

CV..