i neeed help writeing this poem im going into the army but i cant seem to finish it well anyone help me please The Solider Thats Within Freedom is not free you must fight for it day by day .... leading my self into the red,white,

alright ill try to do better on the next one

let me know if any of my poems need work. some are not just poems some are also storys an dreams that i have. id like to know if they sound good an what needs to be worked on please list some pointers

I miss the warmth of your body on mine. Keeping each other close, creating our heat. You aroma sweet and addicting like nectar to a bee. When your gone, i miss you like sun misses the flower dureing winter. The colors

A Dream: by justin darner Life, how can i explain how i feel when someone says this word. I sit here at this computer challenging myself on what to type up for others to read and try to understand me. When someone says life, i get the

no i dont well on my cpu i do but its not hoked up yet using my friends

well ill be here for you if you need me too ..... for that is what a friend is there for to help one another threw trouble some times

about 4 months....

alright i sent you a friend request