Dear Julielai. I do not understand what you mean with "slow down the pace..?" This is not an ordinary short story. This is a tale and in the tale everything is possible. I have not intended to make this tale believable. What is important

This is the fifth and last chapter of my short story. I would be glad if someone could proofread it and correct the mistakes. The dictator ran into the river letting its waves wash the dirt and blood on his clothes. The murmur of water sounded

Please, would you proofread the fourth part of my short story. From his hiding place the dictator saw a black sheepdog which was sniffing around and wagging his hairy tail. Behind the dog walked an older man with a grey workman's cap on his

Please, would you proofread the third part of my short story. When the dictator finally came out of the wreckage and let his eyes sweep around he only saw cliffs, boulders and huge, stones with sparsely growing gnarled trees. There were no signs

Julielai Thank you very much for helping me. Your help is very appreciated! Have a nice day!

This is the second part of my short story, please would you proofread it. The dictator never dared to speak to anyone about his plight. Instead, he masterly kept the mask of a satisfied leader who never suffered nor felt any feebleness. He knew

Dear Julielai. Thank you very much for helping me with my short story and thank you for your time and effort. Best wishes.

Please, would you proofread the first part of my short story. A tale of a dictator Once upon a time, there lived a dictator who had an absolute power as many dictators before him had. He could do in his country whatever pleased him.

Dear Fandorin. Thank you very much. Your help is much appreciated! By the way, when I wrote, "Nowadays they have become student dormitories." I meant the wards, of course. Maybe I should have been clearer and wrote from the

Hello Nona, Thank you very much for helping me with my text. I only have a few questions. Instead of saying, "True, it will give it a few days of respite could I say , "it will give nature a few days of respite?" Maybe I should