a) She goes to the kitchen and makes some rice. b) she went to the kitchen and made some rice. a) He sees that Neel is sleeping. b) He saw that Neel was sleeping. All are correct. a) refers to an action in the present while b) refers

Once upon a time there was a mansion with a red door but that door was always open. The mansion was very dark and gloomy. No one ever could succeed in there were thirteen tiny giraffes and rhinoceroses surrounding the mansion. The rooms in the

Once upon a time there was a mansion with a red door but that door was always open. The mansion was very dark and gloomy. No one ever could succeed in there were thirteen tiny giraffes and rhinoceroses surrounding the mansion. The rooms in the

Once upon a time there was a mansion with a red door but that door was always open. The mansion was very dark and gloomy. No one ever could succeed in there were thirteen tiny giraffes and rhinoceroses surrounding the mansion. The rooms in the

Once upon a time there was a mansion with a red door but that door was always open. The mansion was very dark and gloomy. No one ever could succeed in there were thirteen tiny giraffes and rhinoceroses surrounding the mansion. The rooms in the

The second one sounds much clearer.

Semicolon use A semicolon following an independent clause signals that what follows is also an independent clause whose meaning is of equal importance to the first. Joining two clauses with a semicolon alone is appropriate only when the clauses

Hi Rak_moon, I went through the story and edited it to an extent. I may myself have made a few mistakes. I hope this helps. A wonderful mistake Every day, I wake up early at 6 o'clock, wear my clothes quickly, tie my neck tie and check

I think I've heard this one before. The man (maybe pilot wearing a flight suit) jumped from a plane with a parachute on him. He fell among the rocks and became unconcious.