Thanks!

OK, so here's the next song text for you to check: 1. "The sun goes its normal way Passing clouds on the sky And I can't force myself To get you out of my mind. Many miles on my shoes Many days since you're gone And I still can't get

Thanks for the suggestion.

I guess it may be better using "everyone can be jealous" instead of "everyone could be jealous"? Or is it something else odd in this part? "When sun shines all the time." - what's odd in this one? There are some cloudy/rainy days when you can

Hi! I've written a few songs in english. Now I would like to ask you to correct them where needed, because I am aware of the fact, that something that sounds good for me (and matches the music) may not be grammatically correct. So here's the first

Hi! Is there in english a specific name for ice cream portion? (Here's a sample of what I mean - www.pregel.it/imgup/boero.jpg ) Is it OK to use direct polish translation - "ice cream ball"? What else can I use instead of "portion" in this case?

...what about 38,496 ? I have "practised" only 4 or 5 times... --- --- the latest news: "You survived 58.624 seconds !"

OK then. Thank you very much. I hope I can ask you for help with correcting my other English poem/songs in future...

Big thanks for help! <img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile " /> ...and about line 3 in point 6. - "If you do it may be(turn?) bad - you'll never see him again". Dou you think I can omit the word "him" at the end of the line? I

OK, thanks. I've got one more request - a big one this time. Can you check this text of mine written below? It's the text of the country-style song we're talking about. I'm not a big fan of country, but I've listened to a blues&country