I am college freshman writing a business letter for my dad's business oversea. I'm doing so because no one at his place speaks/writers acceptable English. So, I am drafted to write a letter (not e-mail) for him to a big company requesting for

Thank you for commenting! Hmm, I didn't realize how odd that stanza sounded before you pointed out, and it sounds a bit repetitive too. Does this sound better? Or is it too wordy? When I lay my hand on your skin, it flushes and moistens

I am writing to my previous English tutor. I haven't met him in two years; recently he had tried several times to reach me through phone, though unfortunately I always missed his phone call. As college life would have it, I usually don't have a

Thank you for all the help! It's great to have supportive and contructive comments as a new poet! I'll post on the newest edition, just in case there's other comments coming. Once again, thank you Mister Micawber! Like a Book

Thanks Savvysavz and davkett! You guys pointed out lots of weak points in my essay that I didn't even realize! I'll edit my essay again, and maybe post it up again later. Thanks again!

Thank you for the comments! I didn't realize the last stanza was that stabbing, now that you mentioned it, it does make the whole poem seems pointless... Maybe it'll make a good epitaph someday... Edited now, hopfully the last stanza is more

This is an essay I would be using for my personal statement in a series of college applications and scholarship applications. This was originally written for a scholarship that requires an essay that talks about your "dream job." I like this piece

Well, as the title says, I'm going to be using this poem to apply for a scholarship. For details see this site: http://www.heardthewordpoetry.com/scholarship I applied for it this summer with a very traditional poem, complete with uniform