Hello, everyone. It's been a long time since I last posted here . My poem "This Child" stole me a spot from Poetry.com's "Best Poems and Poets of 2003!" I just thought I should mention that cuz now it feels good, especially knowing that there is

What if let's make it an open poem and finish it? Actually, we can start afresh, then at the end of the poem, we put: EnglishForums.com, blah, blah, blah...

I'll try to implement those corrections if tha's gonna make this better, but yeah thanks for the inputs.

Haha, kit, ya found a lot of errors, but hey poem does not have to be "gramatically correct," right? Or as I've been told. Anyway, thanks for pointing those out, but yeah, the main idea is the only one I really care about, like for example, there

Three Hours to Live Moment grows life from childhood In an hour's time voided of retraction Smiles on faces must not allude To the innocent's sullen disposition Exodus or apocalypse, the second varies From the first hour's timeline 'Tis

Expunge your mind of any thought Especially that of a distraught Think of who share your friendship Hope you see me in that trip Consider me your friend or not You'll always have a place in my lot I may not make you smile all the time But

I was pissed so I started writing this poem, but I'm no longer pissed so I don't know how to end. I guess I can try it tomorrow or wait 'til I get furious again. Here it is: The fairest of face should you scar Your name will be known well

I don't think there's much of a difference. I use them interchangeably, but hopefully I am using them correctly.

If I were a cannibal, I would hunt and eat all o' ya.

Well...here's what I got... The knight can ONLY say"yes" because by saying "no," he's saying he is not a knight. So tha's solved. On the other hand, the knave can say "yes" and he will be lying because his companion would be a knave. The knave