"As required by the university, I need to do some internship after one year’s study, so that I can put what I have learnt from the book into reality. " That sounds as if it's only something the university requires, not something you want

You might want to write a few sentences about WHY you like what you are doing. what fascinates and MOTIVATES you about it? (just a suggestion )

If you look for a sample just look in the forum. There are several Motivation Letters including my own...

Than you so much!! It really helped a lot. I think I'm going to write some of the original and some of your phrases I really appreciate your help. Thanks

Honnef. Yours sincerely Thanks already for your suggestions Jareck *edit

I coulduse those advice myself *g* ) I hope it helped... Jareck

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