Can anyone introduce a book which can help me to improve my staff performance appraisal writing skill (for ecample, the use of words and phase) ?

1. Is this rule apply to a calendar month ? 2. Does this rule apply to a calendar month ? Which one is correct. Thanks.

"Mr. WONG demonstrated very good understanding and ability in discharging his responsibilities. He always alertly monitored the networking console to detect inefficient network performance and initiated corrective action such as ping test or

I saw he took quick response in user support in guiding user to solve the problem following the established procedures.

she would always accurately and promptly recommend temporary or permanent actions for resolution. Thanks.

She effectively and accurately handled the backup tape rotation to and from offsite storage as she had very good understanding of tape management system.

It was indeed a tragedy that so many Hong Kong holidaymakers died or injured. We were the first crews to arrive Hurghada.

"I would like go for a pizza." My teacher told me the meaning of this sentenace is I would order a pizza. (I have already in a restaurnat ) But another teahcer told me the meaning is I would like to go to a pizza restaurant. Who is correct ?

a) " Write an essay of not less than 350 words." b) "Write an essay of not fewer than 350 words." Words is a countable noun and the adjective fewer should be use with it. So b is correct ?