Please drop this word " PRESERVANCE ". Everyone here is using this word, copying it from others motivation letters. Imagine if few of you have to apply to the same college, with motivation letters of same wording ?

Yeah, is better to post it here so that u cna get response from more people. But if you dont feel comfortable with posting a resume here, you cna change names...or than email it to me and I will try to brush it... m a r w a t a @ g m a i l . c o m

Dear Rusmana, The contents of your letter is good, but it needs lots of correction. for examle, its wrong to say, "I was imparted". and usualy you do not use superb with reputaion, and you never sya, that because of above motivation...always

I dont think so. Regards itself is a short word. I have not seen anyone using rgds. ash

All you need to do is, scan through the forum. Alternatively, read the very first post of this forum and instructions on how to write a motivation letter. No one else can do it better than you and we will help you out with brushing it up. ash