Dear Sushi*, I'm very happy to know that my comment was really helpful. What I want to say now is: - Choose a title for your poem after you finish it not before you write it so that the title would be very precise and relevant. When you

Dear Sushi*, I'm not a professional but as a reader you know I certainly have something to say. This is my personal opinion about your poem. Maybe it's right and maybe it's wrong. But it's really what I feel about what you wrote. Honestly, I

Dear Sushi*, Thank you very much for your words. They made me very happy. I agree with you on the importance of writing in English or any other foreign language different from ours. It's really an important, enjoyable and useful thing to do. You

Poet Priya, thank you so much for your words. They really made me happy. It's great to know that you like my poem. I'm always trying to do my best to write good ones. I'm still a beginner at writing English poems but I know I can be better with

Thank you julielai for your explanation. Now I understand what you mean. But I think that if I will show instead of telling, I'll be then changing most of the poem if not all of it. I think that telling is ok with this poem. In fact, I wanted the

Thank you for your comment, julielai. But excuse me, I don't think I really understand what you mean. Where exactly should I replace tell with show? Are you talking about this line? Why didn't I tell the world? Thank you again. It doesn't really

Hello everybody. I'm a Tunisian studying English in the university. I like to write English poems from time to time. I have lately written a poem but I still don't know how good it is. I hope you can help me. All comments are welcome. The poem is

Thank you very much, Mister Micawber... I really appreciate your help because your post has really made a lot of ambiguous things clear. Thanks again.

Hello everybody, I do not really know whether this is the suitable place to put my questions or not.. but I really rely on you to give me some explanations about what follows: - What is the difference between "will" and "shall"? also what

I really had a headache after crossing your bridge.... but that`s ok, I really liked it Anyway, the trip wasn`t so long...