thx for ur opinion, though, u didnt get it, the comas r used for emphasis n also for separating the clauses, or to even give a pause, i write descritive poems, like describing things i use comas for different purposes any suggestions how i shall

that was cool it was really good

that was cool, n really good i like the original as well as the rewritten ones cant decide which is the better though later ones sound more simple n more poetic

i think its fantastic n really good, u r a nice n expressive poet u r able to express urself well ur poem is really good, keep it up

the poem was really touching went rite through the heart straight to my soul it was really very emotional my friend is also writing peotry urs is somewat similar to her u must understand pain real well to have put it in words so nicely gudluk 4

hi everyone, this poem is open to comments n ur opinion i have written this by myself. and im new to this field, (poetry) so pliz help me Magic of the Night i was out in the night, it was dark n mysterious, the trees were glowing in the silver