By 'fashion' here I assume you mean 'lifestyle', and not cloth fashion?  If so then it should be 'Live in an environmentally friendly fashion'.

Searched the lyrics but the closest I've gotten to is 'A Kiss To Build A Dream On' by Louis Armstrong. Perhaps that is what you meant? First stanza goes: Give me a kiss to build a dream on (and) my imagination will thrive upon that

Technically upon close inspection 'via a separate duct' is not wrong, but it is not easy to fully understand at first glance, at least in my opinion. I would still go with 'its respective'. I think if you want to use 'via a

Yes I believe, at least in this context, that it would mean to 'bring a lot of inventories from one place to another'.  My pleasure, and regards.

Sorry I meant Edward de Bono, not the Bono. Haha.

Hi Damon. I am glad you'd like to improve your conversational skills, but I would suggest you take it slow for the meantime - to be able to talk non-stop takes some time to practice! I for example can only talk non-stop to people who are

Personally I do not know any rule here (or am unaware of it), but from the look of it the comma here serves as a break/short pause in long sentences.

I believe inventories here mean items from the customers' place/building or from yours. Anything that belongs to either one of you.

I have never really understood what the fragmented error means either. Honestly I find it quite hard to correct that bolded sentence. Maybe it's because 'how to put all of my feelings and thoughts in writings' sounds like a potential

The original sentence is not wrong, but I think that it will sound better with (B): that local citizens etc.