I think this poem is horrific. It's monotonous and predictable. There is no meaning and get no sense of nature throughout this poem and the images are poorly constructed. I didn't feel involved in this poem, and quite frankly, it's only a nice

brilliantly. Hope that helps, Triquediqual

, you have made the point and I have corrected what you asked me to do. Hope that helps, Triquediqual

Sway Rational Aid Released into the Wild I am, And I like to burn bright apparently, Don't stand in my nearest vicinity, I will phone the hospital!? And I will kill you in the end no doubt, Too great for the entire vastness of space I'm staring

I think when he wrote International Low, I initially didn't know what he meant either, but thought it might of been International Law he was referring to but am still not sure. We'll agree to disagree about the format :-)

Can both not be appropriate? Saying " Will " means like you would visit every region of the world which is correct. Saying " Would ", I think implies that you might find it if you went down to every region. So I think that both suit here.

The format isn't fine. Yes, there is no law that says paragraphs must be 3, and I don't like the condescending comment that my view is of a novice standard, please take that back. If you are sending a formal letter, I think the style must be

I understand her poetry a lot and she has had a fascinating life if not an unfortunate one. He poems are quite fantastic and are full of wonder, she's one of the better poets in my opinion. I studied her poetry for two years. Black Rook in Rainy

to continue my education there. Yours sincerely, Triquediqual. Your letter is good but I prefer mine and prefer my layout, but people may disagree about this. I like mine more. Triquediqual.

as well which disrupts flow. Apart from that, it's great. Triquediqual