Yes, I got a great advice from Clive, but is useful for me to know the opinion of other people also.

Dear Nona, In your opinion what is the best 'business' way to say "Bob said me to ask you ....."?

Yes, I wronged, is possible to remove it?

I used this phrase "according to Bob" because it was the 5th enquiry to an office assistant, so I wanted to underline that I'm not making all this enquiring on my own initiative but I'm only executing requiring of Bob.

Hi everybody, I'd like to write that in accordance with my boss (Bob ad example) I must place an enquiry, so I wrote: "According to Bob we'd like to have a goods delivery time forecast." What do you think about? Is enough formal? Is

Hi everybody, I'd like to write that in accordance with my boss (Bob ad example) I must place an enquiry, so I wrote: "According to Bob we'd like to have a goods delivery time forecast." What do you think about?

thanks, this correction are really important in order to improve my writing skill. I the near future I will try to write some essay. What do you think about? Have any other advice about the improving of writing skills?

Hi everybody, I'm writing to an hypothetical office assistant, that I don't know, do you think that is enough formal? Moreover is right? Dear Ms. yyyyy, Concerning the Milan fair I would be grateful if you could book hotel room for me

Dear Febs11, I recived this reply at my mail: Dear ***, Thank you for sending us your quotation request. After reviewing your car configuration with the manufacturers possible configurations we noticed that e.g. for the VW

Clear, Thanks again. This correction are really useful for me.