Anonymous wrote: I need some help revising my composition one college essay. I supposedly cannot seem to "write specifically", hopefully you guys can help. Here is an exerpt from my essay... The first, my religious persona started back as early

Yoong Liat wrote: Hi guys This composition is meant for the 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me? Thank you very much. One sunny day, an old man were walking in the park and accidentally tripped over a stone.

My interpretation: Trip - traveling a limited time for leisure. Travel - more on a 'need to do' basis. Journey - an extended trip, usually for personal enlightenment. Excursion - brief pleasure trip. .

A physical examination seems to be where a thorough medical examination is done to build up a medical history of a patient. Medical checkup seems to be an less formal examination (almost voluntary in some cases) and is not as intensive as a

Meantolearn wrote: "Go ahead, shake it up" What does 'shake it up' mean? Is it a common expression? Thanks, One possible (other) explanation: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shake_It_Up_%28song%29 'Shake it up' is a song

It seems that they were talking about word pronunciation in relation to a different language - see forum header to the link that you posted.

Corrections. Comments and suggestions. Katrin wrote: I wish to apply for the post of au pair which was advertised in "The Lady" of 5 May 2007?. My reason for applying is that I feel I qualify for the position because of the following

I will highlight the areas which you need to take a second look at. Anonymous wrote: Letter of purpose: Dear Sir or Madam My name is **** and I am a 21 year old **** Biology student in the second year. I first took interest in

I am only going to point out some of the mistakes . Anonymous wrote: please post comments, suggestions, critics and stuff like this as soon as posible!!! the deadline is saturday!!! I really appreciate it! THANKS. Dear Sir,

My suggestion: If you want to become fit, you have to exercise daily. You can go jog, swim, or even just take a walk for regular exercise. It is also important to change your eating habits to include as many fruits and vegetables as