Spelling error "persoanal" and singular "notice". No personal loan will be issued until further notice. Chris

"there is" is wordy and unecessary. It should be deleted, and its deletion would not change the meaning, tone or emphasis of the sentence. Chris

Please note that this request was came to Mr. YY from Mr. XS   Hi Chris I think 'was' was inadvertently inserted.    Thanks. A case of my mind performing a self-deletion of the word without confirming if the word has actually been deleted

Neither. It should be: Please note that this request came from Mr. XS to Mr. YY or Please note that this request was came to Mr. YY from Mr. XS Chris

I would say you are right. It should be "who are" as it refers to corrupted persons. Chris

I am unclear myself what the sentence means exactly. But as it is I understand it as the manager wants to use these companies (with their huge budgets) to air the band's music on TV. I don't see it as the manager wants to use these

If you have a $100 "in-store credit" (or just "store credit"), it means the shop owes you $100 (perhaps when you returned an item to them), but instead of giving you the $100 in cash, the shop gives you a $100 credit akin a

Try: Dear Sir, I am enrolled in a four-month web designing course, and I have to reach the institute by 7 PM. Therefore, I request that I be released half an hour earlier every Tuesday and Thursday (from date to date). Thank you. Yours sincerely,

You should use "freeware". I seldom encounter "free ware" and "free software". Note that "freeware" simply means the software that can be used for free, not necessarily meaning that it can be modified (or

I read "enlarging the map" to mean either: 1) increasing the map magnification (zooming in more), or 2) expanding to a wider area (e.g., a map of England expands to a map of Europe and which expands further to Europe and Central Asia).