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so this is what I have so farA glance of mystique black figureIt was just another ordinary night at Al's bar. While Al poured in some coffee for the lady and man that were having loud laughters audible outside the bar, he saw a dark figure entering the bar. This man was dressed in long...
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Another Ordinary NightIt was just another ordinary night at Al's bar. An unlucky fly paced up and down the window, looking for escape. While Al poured in some coffee for the lady and man having loud laughters audiable outside the bar, he saw/sees a dark figure entering the bar. This man was...
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Heey, could any of you advanced in English correct my little detective story! The assignment was towrite two or three paragraphs in order to get the readers attention, so that itmakes them want to read more of it. Should have been Raymond Chandler style-ish!give your comment and corrections,...
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I mean *little mistake*She quickly rushed into the living room, when she heard the phone ringing.
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I'm not super experienced, but so far I can tell you it'sprobably (ii) She quickly rushed into the living room to when she heard the phone ringing.Because we're talking about a room, in this case a room you can go into.. and I think it shouldbe ringing instead of rang,however both are...
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thanks for the correcting, but do you think concerning the contextthat it has something Anti in it, which is clearly visible!!???
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I'd be so greatful it somone could take 2 minutes to correct my poemif there are any mistakes in it, which I believe there are:P!
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Could someone correct my anti-obsessive love poemthe assignment was to write a anti poem, and I waswondering wheter this is a anti-love poem, is not superstrongly written, so pls give your advise and commentsand corrections, I would really appreciate that!Anti- Obsessive LoveIn the ocean of...
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