Alright, I worked on the essay for quite a while, my first attempt was the following: ------------------------------------------ I want to be an exponential function! The best competition is to compete with yourself such that you are better

MountainHiker, Thanks for all your help.. This is getting as complicated as a tax form.. thanls again..

I quite agree, thanks for the head start. I saw Nadine's letter, took some ideas, and wrote the following: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Once you find a job you love, you’ll

Hey MountainHiker! I am not writing a letter, but merely an essay. (an important component in the admission process.) I saw Nadine's letter, but her/his letter was a covering letter, which is irrelevant to my admission procedure (or at least

Here is my college essay remake. The limit is 500 words and I already exceeded that with another 23 words. Please comment and proofread. Also, please check the grammatical structure of the sentences. Thanks!!

Hey all! So, it the college admission essays season.. And I've been working on this essay for the last couple of days.. I'd be grateful if anyone post suggestions as well as edit it if that's possible too. Thanks!