Thank you for your help so far! greets hunnybunny

Hi there... I am not quiet sure about the new outline you suggested...but I tried my best. Now I have two different drafts...in my opinion the second is better...what do you say? I am really always surprised because of my capitalisation....it's

Hi MountainHiker, it's me again. I took some time to review and rewrite my letter. Well, then I had some problems with the server, don't know if it was error from my server or if the homepage had problems, but I couldn't post anything....well,

Hello... I see that I have to reorganise my letter...well, I think I will rewrite it and say exactly what I mean and what I want. Regarding your outline...I thought I structured it exactly in this way??##! Well, but if it's not clear to a

hello again, I changed the letter and also tried to be more direct and express my passion. After reading it I think it's still not what you are looking for, but some parts of my letter are really good I think. Waiting for your comments and

Dear MountainHiker, I have prepared a Motivation letter, which is (I think) too long. But actually, I left out a lot of things I also wanted to mention. For example, my voluntry works in parishes and in a refugee camp, which I haven't mentioned

Hello MountainHiker, thank you very much for your quick response. I already, went trough the letters of Nadine and Soufiane and some others. I think your advice and comments were really helpful to them. So that's why I also requested your help.

Hi! I am about to prepare my applications for some Universities in the UK. Then I just found this website and registered here. I need help for writing my motivation letter. I asked myself, if I just could post my prepared letter on this forum