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Since this is not supposed to be argumentative, I suggest avoiding the standard "pros/cons" format.
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Vegetarianism
Vegetarianism, preferring not to eat animal...
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I suggest taking out the fourth paragraph all together. But make sure your essay is long enough for your assignment. Perhaps elaborating a bit more on the deaths?
Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker?
A study by Psychology Today magazine shows that many people are not satisfied with their...
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After a long week of church conferences at Anaheim, Los Angeles with other church committees from Texas, Michigan and Florida, and our pastors decide (tense) to take us to an amusement park. We children were very excited. We debated which amusement park to go to. The majority of us wanted to...
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I think your arguments are okay, though perhaps a bit too specific to certain types of TV programs. If you can generalize your ideas, then your arguments aren't tied to a specific type of show.
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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has detroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
While some people have stated that television has destroyed...
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You need to fix the part in red.
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Hi anon,
I suggest you read it out loud a few times. Iambic should be duh-DUH duh-DUH duh-DUH.
Hope that helps.
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I suggest you leave your post unanswered in the future. When posters see 2 responses to a thread, they assume someone else has proofread it.
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