It all sounds correct to me, except I think I would say "for a while" at the end of the last sentence instead of "for some time".

I have never seen someone use "in" when referring to a honeymoon unless they are saying something like "the couple is still in their honeymoon stage" meaning that they are still very happy and very loving because they have not

Yes. I think "and finally" is not necessary to say and could be summed up in "until" to wrap up the story. A few problems that a lot of people have in writing include using the word "and" too much, and writing long

I can't tell you in formal English terms why it's not right... but it didn't sound right to me. I think it was a long sentence that didn't need to be longer with "and finally". I don't know if that makes any sense to

I like Mr. Micawber's suggestion about the apples and the bananas. You could do this with several sets of items for repetition of the idea. When I teach children (actually people of all ages) I find that repetition is key. You need to know

After finishing the some business, I hopped i nto my car. I'd asked for directions and the attendant said the company was just two traffic lights away. Feeling better, I floored the gas and followed the directions. To my surprise, I

After finishing the some business, I hopped i nto my car. I'd asked for directions and the attendant said the company was just two traffic lights away. Feeling better, I floored the gas and followed the directions. To my surprise, I

Kooyeen, Those are pretty good little videos. I especially liked the alien! Good way for them to get someone's attention. I think these would be good for intermediate learners who have basics down first and now don't want to sound too

I totally agree with hitchhiker, movies will help a lot. I would also see out people who speak English to practice with. It's good to get into forums like this where you can practice written English and communicate with others to understand

Hi all! I am new to this community and thought I would share a website that has good resources for learning new languages, it's on my profile page. It's one-on-one tutoring through webcam, text chatting, and other tools. If you're