I have no ideas about the content or the organization of focused points. I just have some suggestions on word choices, expressions and grammar. The highlighted lines include possible problems and the red words are my suggestions to improve the

Hello, Can you tell me the difference between the two words: clarify & demystify? Can you please give an example to make clear when to use which? Thank you!

- If I were you, I would express: "The most important effect is that illiteracy works as an inhibitor to the society" instead of "The most important effect of illiteracy on society is that it works as an inhibitor." - That

Hi there, I have three topics here nut find hard to give sound arguments. Can you give your opinions on those? That may probably help me to come with some more ideas. Thanks in advance! Topic 1: The video camera provides such an accurate and

Hi everyone, As I look up in the Oxford dictionary, "perception" means "way of seeing or understanding something". However, I am still confused about the possible situations in which I can use this word. Can you please

I am sorry if it is not comfortable for you to read two these essays without starting any new lines. in fact, when pasted the essays in the writing box, I checked them carefully. However, I don't know why it turns out to be like what you see

I. Cause/Effect essay Topic: Write an essay about how the internet affects the way people communicate with each other Internet, in this high-tech era, has become more popular with people of all ages. It provides the whole community with a

Thank you very much for your comments. I think I have much to take into consideration now. Writing a convincing essay is always a hard task for me :) Have a nice day!

Topic: Today many young women choose to stay single. What do you think are the reasons for this new trend? Write an essay between 300 and 350 words about what many lead to one woman’s decision not to marry. Quynh, who is still very young in her

A flash of an idea I was really shocked when I could not continue with my research on the chosen topic. I did not know what to do and felt a bit disappointed. One morning I just surfed the Internet to relax myself. Accidentally, I heard a story