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I did not create the online journal (script) as I was planning to because I have been really busy. Also, why create an inferior one if there is one freely available out there? Anyway, I designed the thing, so I still put work into it .

2003! A year to remember for many Alabama residents. The state government declared that the state will have accumualated a $675 million deficit by October. Politicians caused this mess, yet they decided that the taxpayers should fix it. On

Hi, before we read it, can you leave a line between paragraphs so we know where each paragrahps are? You should enter twice (I am not sure, you can always preview) because this site does not recognize tabs.

Didn't he mean that Laura is his wife?

You're very much welcome, and I wouldn't mind your using the suggested thesis statement at all.

At the end of your essay, you tried to formulate a conclusion, but it is somewhat vague and underdeveloped. Remember, your conclusion IS the LAST thing your readers will read so you should give them an impression of your essay in their minds.

I assume this is your thesis: Although Governor Bob Riley's 1.2 billion dollar tax increase sounds good to some people, Alabama tax payers, that plan to vote yes on September 9th, are foolish to think that this would fix the state's problems

I have some suggestions: 1. You might want to restructure your paper. First, explain carefully what is the current problem Alabama is facing? Is it Alabama as a whole or just Montgomery are you talking about? You shifted from Alabama to

It's perfectly fine.