. Caprice, caprice! Oh spare me, oh please! Mr.Ominous Nefarious Beast-- 'Mister' seems incongruous here . Why I wonder why you look at me as if I were a feast-- you need to punctuate your 'why's. I loathe how you stare at me till

How do we use the word "effigy" in a sentence? I cant really know the right connotation for it.

. Her name is Viva Vicious She's impure, she's malicious- - great start! She is vigorous and ambitious-- Your rhythm is collapsing In a quest to destroy your ambitions-- 'ambitious' and 'ambitions' in juxtaposed lines is a

Caprice, caprice! Oh spare me, oh please! Mr.Ominous Nefarious Beast Why I wonder why you look at me as if I were a feast I loathe how you stare at me till your own stares turn you obese I am the prey, I am the diseased I'm washing away until

It was a typo! look When your heart is full with sorrows You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me Volcano wrote it correctly at the first line but then, the typo I dont understand what u wrote Volcano, do you mind

Hello everyone, I'm a new member here, and I wanted to share some of my poems with you! Please give me your feedback I wrote this when I was bored, but the name "Viva Vicious" was my insperation I had read an abstract poem of a