Hello Anon, Unfortunately we're not able to help with the text itself, in cases with a legal dimension. But maybe the caseworker would be in a position to proof-read it for you; or perhaps members will be able to add general tips on

Hello NG, In boxing, "to go to the body" is to attack the opponent's body, instead of the head. A sustained attack on the body early in a fight can slow down an opponent's responses, and leave him vulnerable to a later attack on the head.

I had read enough, Anon. MrP

roughly 99% of everyone I've ever spoken to 99% of all the people he has ever spoken to have said that only words that eat their spinach are included in dictionaries? I am inclined to doubt his arithmetic. MrP

And what difference do you notice between the two examples, Anon?

I wonder myself whether "perfect" itself has any meaning, except as an agreeable fiction. MrP

Really?? Not to me, no! Do you mean it's so extremely hot there in London that you might make such a big mistake? Yes indeed – it has been an addled kind of week. Or you might use 'are' no matter what? I'm in

How does that relate to transformations of "these + noun + have a"? Metathreadistically. MrP

The original example does not contain a verb; your examples 1 to 5 do contain a verb. Thus you have not replicated the original structure. MrP

Further discussion of the same subject, for interest: http://thegrammarexchange.infopop.cc/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/340600179/m/260103291 MrP