I've taken the liberty of rewriting a few of the problem sentences as a kind of guide as to the corrections needed in your writing. Necklace is the story about a very poor woman's huge life changes by encountering a necklace. Necklace is

One more thing: Shouldn't it be "If I were ..." "if I were" is technically correct but "if I was" is quite common, especially in spoken (as opposed to written) language.

But I'm not sure, google search is indicating later is correct. Can you help me ? It depends on the context. As a standalone statement it should be: Believe me guys. If you place it into a context it might be either: He believes me guys. They

1. I feel that I would really need to set aside a big chunks of time if I was to go deeper into his world of training... --- I think it should be "big chunks of time" without "a"? Correct. You could also say "a big

Is below sentence right, No. There is a possibility that Hamid Karzai will win the president ial election.

The original is fine. I guess, if you must, you could say "Our school boasts a beautiful campus..." I wouldn't use any of your other suggestions.

Is "stand" in the above interchangeable with sit, go, or some other words? Thanks. None of your suggested substitutes sounds right to me although you would be understood if you used them. Try this " desks are arranged in rows."

1) Does 'pursue' here mean simply 'adopt' or 'continue using over a long time'? I'd say it's a combination of both. Whether they continue for a long period of time doesn't really change the meaning. If they go

1. My dictionary has 'with respect to' and 'in respect of', but not 'in respect to'. Is that phrase common? Not common, but it doesn't give me much heartburn. 2. Is there any difference between 'with respect to'

Either one could fit depending on the larger context.