Hi Whiteleaf, Your essay does not say much about what you have done during your Masters. In fact it almost says nothing about the academic work you did in the past. You only talk about how science will benefit from you and how pleased you are

Hi SabianX, I brushed your essay a bit but mind you, I'm not a native. It's not a good idea to start a letter with 'having completed'.Ok, here we go: ____________________________________________________ Dear Sir or Madam ,

Hi Tearsofjoy, Sorry for the judgement. I'm not good at Hindi either but I know people say ''mein thik hoon'' or ''mein thik thak'' (more informal) for ''I'm fine''. The Bengali director Satyajit Ray made quite a roar with his movies in

Namaste Tearsofjoy, Kaise ho aap? I think you're the only Indian participating around here. I guess you must be from the North since you laughed 'har har' like punjabi. Savvy

Gosh,I couldnt even remember Marc Anthony's name ...but you got it right, that's who you remind me off!You don't look like Darren to me. Sav

Women with hairy chests - no good . Then again, we should ask the guys if they like women with hairy chests Savvy

The singer did a duet with Jennifer Lopez, I think they were even involved...I just can't remember the name now. Sav

Hi Trombidu, When you strum a guitar, you stroke the strings of the instrument. When you pluck, you pull the strings and immediately detach. (Imagine plucking a fruit). Savvy

Salut Guillaume, I made a few amendments to your letter below. I wish to point out one thing regarding the sentence in red. It's an advice to never write on the bad things you heard from others, that very sentence can put them off. So I removed

Hi Sanz, You look like a Latin singer...I don't seem to remember his name now What are you drinking? Nice meeting you. Savvy