Hi Mr30rack, The sentence in red is redundant since you're expressing your feelings now. I'm instead connecting the words 'friendship' and 'because'. Also you need a heading and an ending, something intimate since it's a love letter. You can

Hi Anonymous, 1. Enclosures: (or) Encl: 2.Cc: 3.As far as I know, Bcc ( Blank Carbon Copy) is only for e-mails. Bcc is addressed to a 'secret' recipient. The other recipients to whom the e-mail is sent cannot view his e-mail address.Bcc

It's even worse for me. When I read books on psychology,philo, cell biology, biochemistry and the likes, I get tags like 'nerd' and 'shrinkhead'... But in fact reading is a very rewarding hobby for those who are into it...It not only improves

The three topics you mention indeed do have a common subject - you . Your name is about you ,how you feel about your name is again about you and the teacher wants to know about a memory you had, not someone else. In this case what you need to

Hi Clotilde, I have heard of ABS school as a very prestigious and competitive school. If that's the case, please be aware that many other applicants like you would have probably set their goals, like 5 years from now, and even if they

Hi, I have made a minor alteration to your 2nd paragraph to make it as the first. Please note, whenever you write American Business School,Paris in your essay, write it fully, don't abbreviate it.Like I mentioned before, you still need to

Is Chester Hairyman an alien? or another Arnold Schwarznegger? Savvy

Threepod wrote: Oooh, if you have hairs you not want, then send them at Justine? Hmmmm, what shall we call a Justine who has been donated hairs of different colours and constituency....? A camouflage Justine? Savvy

Note to Original Poster : You need to further elaborate on your motivation letter. You have formulated good straight-forward ideas however the first paragraph is not helpful. It is best to completely elimimate it. The admissions commitee is not

It's an American slang meaning ''what's the latest news from you?''. Savvy