Please kindly give me your comments, thanks!!

Please kindly give me your comments, thanks!!

Please help me to correct if I'm wrong, thanks! One day, Amon and Ramesh were playing football in the field. The sky was getting dark. It started to rain. While they were cycling home, the rain got heavier. They decided to take a rest. They

Please help me to correct if I'm wrong, thanks! One day, my little boy seemed disturbed and kept crying and mumbling. I realized he had been "disturbed" by someone. In other words, something spiritual was disturbing him, so I prayed

Please help me to correct if I'm wrong, thanks! Oh! I'm mother earth! Big and round; Can't you see this beautiful planet, Shiny and blue. But I feel sad and angry! Human of this world, Do not care about the environment! They litter,

Can I say, (a) Peter jumped into (the) water to save the boy. (b) The boy fell into the water accidentally. P/s: Normally, we only say "fell / jumped into the river", but do we use "fell / jumped into water"?

Can I say, (a) He paid to the cashier for the books. (b) He paid some money to the cashier (for the books). (c) He paid John / paid to John some money (for his help). (d) He paid for / to / paid cashier for the souvenirs. (e) He paid for

Can I say, She drove her car and went home feeling grateful .

Can I say, (a) The man told Susan to always be careful. (b) She will be careful next time.

Can I say, (a) Susan is my mother's bosom friend. Last Sunday, she went shopping by drieing her husband's car. (b) After this experience, certainly , Susan wouls be more careful when she l ocked off her car . (c) She saw through the car