Thanks for your comments, but can you give me more clear sentences? Actually, I'm not very clear about your comments! Thanks!

Please help me correct them. (a) Madam Sushil is a polite woman. She has excellent manners. Last Tuesday was a public holiday. Since her house had run out of supplie s, she decided to go shopping. While she was in a hurry, she left her key in the

Can I say, (a) Madam Sushil, who is my neighbour. (b) During the last semester holidays, she went shopping to buy groceries. (c) She was very happy as a lark. (d) She thanked the man for his good deed. (e) Last Friday was a public holiday.

Can I say, (a) She gave the man some money for his rewards. (b) She had learnt a lesson and she became more careful next time since this experience. (c) She called a man that was talking a toolbox. He tried to help Susan unlock the locked door

Anyone can give me your comments?

Anyone can give me your comments?

Anyone can give me your comments?

Can I say, (a) She went to look for someone that could help her . (b) Aft er trying some times , the man managed to open the car door. (c) Peter is Susan's neighbour, also my neighbour . (d) After this case , Susan t ook another key and

Can I say, (a) A man who is taking / takes a toolbox came by. (b) He tried using his tools to help me open the car door while I waited for him. (c) The man took (out) his tools from the set of toolbox to fix / repair the car doo r. (d) She is

Can I say, (a) He drove his car to a grocery shop to do some shopping . (b) After a while, the man succeeced in opening the car door . Peter thanked the man over and over again. (c) When he wanted to get in / into the car , he realised that he